Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab Toh.........

by khwaish on January 29, 2009, 06:47:15 PM
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Yeh Nazm Khaas Kar,Uss Shaks Ko Zehan Mein Rekh Kar Likh Raha Hoon,Jinka Yoindia Ki Mehfil Se Ek Gehra Rishta Raha Hai,Umeed Karta Hoon,Woh Yeh Nazm Zaroor Padhe..

Kashti Ke Musafir Ne Samundar Nahi Dekha,
Kabhi Kisi Aur Ke Jazbaat Mein Behkar Nahi Dekha...

Aaene se Chupa Raha Dil Ka Woh Zakhm Umar Bhar,
Bahaar Ki Khoobsurti Dekhi Usne,
kabhi Insaan Ke Andar Nahi Dekha....

Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab toh,
Gardish-e-safar Mein Bahut Khuch Khoya Hai Par,
Usne Kabhi Peeche Mud Kar Nahi Dekha....

Woh Shaks Saath Mein Reh Kar Bhi Saath-Saath Naa Reh Saka,
Aankhon ke Saamne Tha Par Kabhi Dil Mein Utar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Mehfilo Mein Daad Dene Walo Ki Kami Nahi Hai "KHWAISH"
Par Kabhi Kisi Ne Auro Ke Gham Par Rokar Nahi Dekha....

Yuh To "Khwaish" Kabhi Majbooriyon Ke Basti Ka Bashinda Naa Tha,
Par Pehle Usne Kabhi Yuh Bebasi Ke Aalam Se Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Guzre Waqt Ke Saath,
Yahan Logon Ke Khayalaat Badal Jaate hai,
Par Pathar Hi Samajte Rahe Usse Samajne Wale,
Woh To Mom Ki Tarah Hai,
Kabhi Kisi Ne Usse Chukar Nahi Dekha....

      ~~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2009, 07:24:52 PM »
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Bohat Hi Badiya Hai, Nice One KHwaish Brother,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 07:43:00 PM »
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Bohat khooooob Khwaish..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2009, 02:13:48 AM »
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Bohat Hi Badiya Hai, Nice One KHwaish Brother,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro...
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2009, 02:32:13 AM »
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bahut hi badiya likha hai....khwaish ji.....

na jaane kyun koi,kis chahera dekh kar hi usko samajh jaata,
kyun na koi kisi ke dil mein jaake,us ke  haalat samajh leta.
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 11:15:35 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 29, 2009, 07:43:00 PM
Bohat khooooob Khwaish..... Clapping Smiley



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Bhai..
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 10:50:32 AM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish ... bohot achcha likha hai aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 01:42:33 PM »
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bahoth bahoth qoob kuwish sahab Jawab nahi apke is kalami inqalaab ka hazaro parde gira gaya apka ye kalam janab ishare ba qobi diya apne aur humne samjh bhi liye wo wapas bhi agaya yoindia per jiska gahera rista tha ab ye samjho ke maine bolaya usko ya waqath ne bath juda nahi !! aur janab qayal hiagye apki nazam ke hum kya saaf tariqe se shikayath ki hai apne mashallah ,allah apke sare kalamoo ko miyar izzath bakshe sahab dil se dad qobol karen !! aur mazirath chahunga ke nazar zara der se pade apke kalam pe magar ahsen hai ye nazar ke miyari padi !! he he he

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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2009, 02:03:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Khwaish jii.... Wonderful creation...  Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 02:09:45 PM »
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Applause Applause

Wah khawish ji aapne bohat khoob likha hai wonderfull work ji... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 06:27:08 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 29, 2009, 06:47:15 PM
Yeh Nazm Khaas Kar,Uss Shaks Ko Zehan Mein Rekh Kar Likh Raha Hoon,Jinka Yoindia Ki Mehfil Se Ek Gehra Rishta Raha Hai,Umeed Karta Hoon,Woh Yeh Nazm Zaroor Padhe..

Kashti Ke Musafir Ne Samundar Nahi Dekha,
Kabhi Kisi Aur Ke Jazbaat Mein Behkar Nahi Dekha...

Aaene se Chupa Raha Dil Ko Woh Zakhm Umar Bhar,
Bahaar Ki Khoobsurti Dekhi Usne,
kabhi Insaan Ke Andar Nahi Dekha....

Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab toh,
Gardish-e-safar Mein Bahut Khuch Khoya Hai Par,
Usne Kabhi Peeche Mud Kar Nahi Dekha....

Woh Shaks Saath Mein Reh Kar Bhi Saath-Saath Naa Reh Saka,
Aankhon ke Saamne Tha Par Kabhi Dil Mein Utar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Mehfilo Mein Daad Dene Walo Ki Kami Nahi Hai "KHWAISH"
Par Kabhi Kisi Ne Auro Ke Gham Par Rokar Nahi Dekha....

Yuh To "Khwaish" Kabhi Majbooriyon Ke Basti Ka Bashinda Naa Tha,
Par Pehle Usne Kabhi Yuh Bebasi Ke Aalam Se Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Guzre Waqt Ke Saath,
Yahan Logon Ke Khayalaat Badal Jaate hai,
Par Pathar Hi Samajte Rahe Usse Samajne Wale,
Woh To Mom Ki Tarah Hai,
Kabhi Kisi Ne Usse Chukar Nahi Dekha....

      ~~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~~

Bahut hi achha likha hia khwahish...

Mere ashqon pe ungli uthanewale the mehfil mein har koi,
Kisne Dil mein jalte hue armanoke sailaab ko nahi dekha,
kehne ko to kehti hia duniya bhool jaate hai musaafir,
kisine un rehguzaron ki naummeedon ko nai dekha...
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 07:30:33 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 30, 2009, 02:32:13 AM
bahut hi badiya likha hai....khwaish ji.....

na jaane kyun koi,kis chahera dekh kar hi usko samajh jaata,
kyun na koi kisi ke dil mein jaake,us ke  haalat samajh leta.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Cara..

Aur aapne Bahut Khoob likha..cara aapki Haazir-jawaabi ka main hamesha se Kaayal raha hoon..aur shukriya hamesha se saath dene ka..
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2009, 07:55:16 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2009, 03:58:52 PM »
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Bohat khoob... keep it up

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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2009, 05:45:14 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 31, 2009, 10:50:32 AM
Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish ... bohot achcha likha hai aapne Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat aapka..Aapne isse Padha Aur saraha Dost,Yeh Jaankar Bahut khushi hui..
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