Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab Toh.........

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«Reply #15 on: February 02, 2009, 05:56:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 01:42:33 PM
bahoth bahoth qoob kuwish sahab Jawab nahi apke is kalami inqalaab ka hazaro parde gira gaya apka ye kalam janab ishare ba qobi diya apne aur humne samjh bhi liye wo wapas bhi agaya yoindia per jiska gahera rista tha ab ye samjho ke maine bolaya usko ya waqath ne bath juda nahi !! aur janab qayal hiagye apki nazam ke hum kya saaf tariqe se shikayath ki hai apne mashallah ,allah apke sare kalamoo ko miyar izzath bakshe sahab dil se dad qobol karen !! aur mazirath chahunga ke nazar zara der se pade apke kalam pe magar ahsen hai ye nazar ke miyari padi !! he he he

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Qadeer saheb,Jo aapne is Kalam ko Baarikhi se padha aur samjha..
Mere Diye hue Ishaare ko aapne samajhna,yeh bhi aapki khoobi hai..
 aur qadeer saheb, jo baat hum personally nahi keh paate,ussi baat ko alfaazo mein utaarne ki koshish ki hai,aapne saraha mujhe iss kalam ka inaam mil gaya..
Aur Teh dil se shukriya aapka,jo aapne apni taraf se itni koshish ki hai..Khuda aapko har khushi de..
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«Reply #16 on: February 02, 2009, 05:58:02 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 31, 2009, 02:03:07 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Khwaish jii.... Wonderful creation...  Applause Thumbs UP

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja Aapka..
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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2009, 05:58:59 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 31, 2009, 02:09:45 PM
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Wah khawish ji aapne bohat khoob likha hai wonderfull work ji... Thumbs UP

Thankyou so much Honey!!!
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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2009, 06:30:19 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on January 31, 2009, 06:27:08 PM
Bahut hi achha likha hia khwahish...

Mere ashqon pe ungli uthanewale the mehfil mein har koi,
Kisne Dil mein jalte hue armanoke sailaab ko nahi dekha,
kehne ko to kehti hia duniya bhool jaate hai musaafir,
kisine un rehguzaron ki naummeedon ko nai dekha...

Bhaut Bahut Khoob Angel.. Applause Applause Applause

Mere Ashko Ne Jo iss Mehfil mein sawaal uthaye hai,
Tune unn Sawalo Ka Abhi Anjaam Nahi Dekha..

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...

Humne Dekha Hai Yahan Waqt Ke saath Badalte hue Rishto ko,
Dard Ke Samundar Mein Rehte hai par yeh na samaj,
ke Humne kabhi Khushiyan Ka Kinaara nahi Dekha...

Humne Khoya Hai Woh, Jisse Humne Kabhi Paaya Hi Nahi,
Mere Iss Halaat Se Kabhi Kisi Ne Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2009, 07:13:27 PM »
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Bohat Achche Khwaaish Bhai, Nice One,.
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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2009, 07:18:16 PM »
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Khoob rahi khawish ji... Masha Allah

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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2009, 07:03:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 29, 2009, 06:47:15 PM
Yeh Nazm Khaas Kar,Uss Shaks Ko Zehan Mein Rekh Kar Likh Raha Hoon,Jinka Yoindia Ki Mehfil Se Ek Gehra Rishta Raha Hai,Umeed Karta Hoon,Woh Yeh Nazm Zaroor Padhe..

Kashti Ke Musafir Ne Samundar Nahi Dekha,
Kabhi Kisi Aur Ke Jazbaat Mein Behkar Nahi Dekha...

Aaene se Chupa Raha Dil Ko Woh Zakhm Umar Bhar,
Bahaar Ki Khoobsurti Dekhi Usne,
kabhi Insaan Ke Andar Nahi Dekha....

Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab toh,
Gardish-e-safar Mein Bahut Khuch Khoya Hai Par,
Usne Kabhi Peeche Mud Kar Nahi Dekha....

Woh Shaks Saath Mein Reh Kar Bhi Saath-Saath Naa Reh Saka,
Aankhon ke Saamne Tha Par Kabhi Dil Mein Utar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Mehfilo Mein Daad Dene Walo Ki Kami Nahi Hai "KHWAISH"
Par Kabhi Kisi Ne Auro Ke Gham Par Rokar Nahi Dekha....

Yuh To "Khwaish" Kabhi Majbooriyon Ke Basti Ka Bashinda Naa Tha,
Par Pehle Usne Kabhi Yuh Bebasi Ke Aalam Se Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai Ke Guzre Waqt Ke Saath,
Yahan Logon Ke Khayalaat Badal Jaate hai,
Par Pathar Hi Samajte Rahe Usse Samajne Wale,
Woh To Mom Ki Tarah Hai,
Kabhi Kisi Ne Usse Chukar Nahi Dekha....

      ~~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~~


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wah kaya baat hai khwaish ji... bahoot khoob likha hai apne... ek ek line dil ko chu gai.... magar yah lines sab se achi lagi.... aor sahi bhi hai...

Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab toh,
Gardish-e-safar Mein Bahut Khuch Khoya Hai Par,
Usne Kabhi Peeche Mud Kar Nahi Dekha....
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«Reply #22 on: February 03, 2009, 07:05:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2009, 06:30:19 PM
Bhaut Bahut Khoob Angel.. Applause Applause Applause

Mere Ashko Ne Jo iss Mehfil mein sawaal uthaye hai,
Tune unn Sawalo Ka Abhi Anjaam Nahi Dekha..

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...

Humne Dekha Hai Yahan Waqt Ke saath Badalte hue Rishto ko,
Dard Ke Samundar Mein Rehte hai par yeh na samaj,
ke Humne kabhi Khushiyan Ka Kinaara nahi Dekha...

Humne Khoya Hai Woh, Jisse Humne Kabhi Paaya Hi Nahi,
Mere Iss Halaat Se Kabhi Kisi Ne Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob khwaish ji.... hamesha ki tarah lajawab....Good creation... yah lines sabse achi lagi..

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...
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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2009, 07:06:32 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2009, 06:30:19 PM
Bhaut Bahut Khoob Angel.. Applause Applause Applause

Mere Ashko Ne Jo iss Mehfil mein sawaal uthaye hai,
Tune unn Sawalo Ka Abhi Anjaam Nahi Dekha..

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...

Humne Dekha Hai Yahan Waqt Ke saath Badalte hue Rishto ko,
Dard Ke Samundar Mein Rehte hai par yeh na samaj,
ke Humne kabhi Khushiyan Ka Kinaara nahi Dekha...

Humne Khoya Hai Woh, Jisse Humne Kabhi Paaya Hi Nahi,
Mere Iss Halaat Se Kabhi Kisi Ne Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Ek baar phir se bohot achcha likha hai Khwaish aapne.
Mujhe bhi ye lines badi achchi lagin:

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...
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«Reply #24 on: February 04, 2009, 06:20:20 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 03, 2009, 07:03:02 PM

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wah kaya baat hai khwaish ji... bahoot khoob likha hai apne... ek ek line dil ko chu gai.... magar yah lines sab se achi lagi.... aor sahi bhi hai...

Halaat Se Ladte Rehna,Ek Aadat Si Ban Gayi Hai Ab toh,
Gardish-e-safar Mein Bahut Khuch Khoya Hai Par,
Usne Kabhi Peeche Mud Kar Nahi Dekha....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Aapka..Aapne Isse Padha Aur Saraha..

Aapka Yahan Par Comment Padhte Waqt,Yuhi Ek Geet Zehan Mein Aaya Hai..

"Der lagi aane mein Tumko,
Shukar Hai Phir Bhi Aaye To,
Aas ne Dil Ka Saath Na Choda,
Waise Hum Ghabraye To,
Aayiye Aap Ka Intezaar Tha.. happy3[/color][/b]
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«Reply #25 on: February 04, 2009, 06:24:24 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2009, 06:30:19 PM
Bhaut Bahut Khoob Angel.. Applause Applause Applause

Mere Ashko Ne Jo iss Mehfil mein sawaal uthaye hai,
Tune unn Sawalo Ka Abhi Anjaam Nahi Dekha..

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...

Humne Dekha Hai Yahan Waqt Ke saath Badalte hue Rishto ko,
Dard Ke Samundar Mein Rehte hai par yeh na samaj,
ke Humne kabhi Khushiyan Ka Kinaara nahi Dekha...

Humne Khoya Hai Woh, Jisse Humne Kabhi Paaya Hi Nahi,
Mere Iss Halaat Se Kabhi Kisi Ne Guzar Kar Nahi Dekha....

Bahoth bahoth qoob janab apki shayari ka jawab mere bhai har alfaz eak gahere raaz me lipta hota hai apka janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #26 on: February 04, 2009, 04:09:38 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 02, 2009, 07:13:27 PM
Bohat Achche Khwaaish Bhai, Nice One,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro..
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«Reply #27 on: February 04, 2009, 04:11:17 PM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on February 01, 2009, 03:58:52 PM
Bohat khoob... keep it up

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Quote from: sjid hadayat on February 02, 2009, 07:18:16 PM
Khoob rahi khawish ji... Masha Allah

Sajid Hadayat

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sajid Hadayat Saheb Aapka..
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«Reply #28 on: February 04, 2009, 04:16:08 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 03, 2009, 07:06:32 PM
Ek baar phir se bohot achcha likha hai Khwaish aapne.
Mujhe bhi ye lines badi achchi lagin:

Main Chup Hoon,Magar Meri Khamoshi Bhi Bahut Kuch Kehti hai,
Tune Chup Rehne Walo Ke Dil Mein Chipe Hue Jazbaat ko Nahi Dekha...

Talat Saheba,Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukarguzaar Hoon,Jo aapne iss Nazm Ko Padha Aur saraha.. icon_salut
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«Reply #29 on: February 04, 2009, 04:18:45 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 31, 2009, 07:55:16 PM
Bahut Khoob Khwaish Ji

Thankyou So Much Rajesh Ji..
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