HAMAARE DES MEIN ............................ HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: February 03, 2013, 05:27:18 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 02, 2013, 06:47:45 AM
Ro  rahi  hai , KhooN  ke  Aansu , aaj  Bharat  Maa  'Hasan'  ,
Maa  to  phir  Maa  hai  , bilak  utthe  zara  si  thhes  meiN

Bahut khoob tanziya kalaam hai..
qaafiyoN par khaas taur se daad dena chahunga Sir.

BAHUT SHUKRIYA , MUKESH JI.KHUSH RAHYE.HASAN
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«Reply #16 on: February 03, 2013, 07:31:28 AM »
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sahi kaha
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«Reply #17 on: February 03, 2013, 01:09:23 PM »
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sahill ji, bahut bahut shukriya , duaago,Hasan
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«Reply #18 on: February 03, 2013, 04:29:55 PM »
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aqshji,bahut shukriya ,duaaein.Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: February 04, 2013, 03:50:13 AM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai sir nihayat umda tanziya ghazal kahi hai aapne . daad qubool karen. khas taur se qafioN ke liye daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2013, 01:38:55 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 02, 2013, 07:56:47 AM
wonderful Applause Applause Applause
Tanz bara is kalam ko mera salaam. Hasan sb. lajawab peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut shukriya, sumanji. adaab.
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«Reply #21 on: February 04, 2013, 02:01:22 PM »
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PARWAAZ  SAHEB , TAH E DIL SE MAMNOON O MASHKOOR HOON.
     BAHUT BAHUT DUAAEIN .  HASAN
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«Reply #22 on: February 04, 2013, 02:13:09 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 02, 2013, 06:36:01 AM
Kaise  pyare  pyare  neta  haiN  hamaare  Des  meiN  ,
Kuchh  ghutaloN  mein  phanse  haiN, kuchh  Zina  ke  Case  meiNe


Chal  raha  hai  Desh  to  Bhagwan  ke  bus  naam  se  ,
Mantri ,'with  family'  , masroof  hain  pardes  maiN


Bus  darindoN  ki  hukoomat  ban  gai   Jamhuriyat  ,
Bhediye  hi  bhediye  haiN  BakriyoN  ke  bhes  maiN


Ma'ashiyat  ko  lag  gai  hai  ThekedaaroN   ki  nazar   ,
Ek  imaarat  phir  giri  , baloo  thi  jis ke  'Base' meiNe


'Bowl - out ' ho  gaye  Mansoobe  sub , saare  'Plan' [/i] ,
Kya  kare 'Batting' taraqqi  rishwatoN  ke 'Pace '  meiN


Jitna  jo  Laffaaz  hai , utna  bada  woh  Rahnuma  ,
Sach  kahaaN  dhoondhte  ho  inke 'Poker Face' meiN


Billi  se  bhi  humko  khatra  ,  aur  ChoohoN  se  bhi  darr  ,
Kaun  jeete  , dekhna  hai  ,  donoN  ki  abb  'Race' maeiN


Ro  rahi  hai , KhooN  ke  Aansu , aaj  Bharat  Maa  'Hasan'  ,
Maa  to  phir  Maa  hai  , bilak  utthe  zara  si  thhes  meiN




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Zina= Rape ; Masroof = Busy ; Jamhuriyat = Democracy ;
Maashiyat = Economy  ; Mansoobe = Strategies/plans;
Laffaaz = Baaton ka ustaad ; Rahnuma = Leader



Saheb Tareef ke Liye Lafz Nahi..Hazaaron Daad Aapki Iss Peshkash Par...Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aur Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah


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«Reply #23 on: February 04, 2013, 03:12:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: February 04, 2013, 05:11:31 PM »
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SATISH JI , BAHUIT SHUKRIYA , NAWAZISH.KHUDA  KARE AAP BAKHAIR HON.
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«Reply #25 on: February 05, 2013, 01:45:36 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 02, 2013, 08:59:16 AM
Too good hasan g
bhawna ji, hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya . khush  rahye.Hasan
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«Reply #26 on: February 05, 2013, 04:55:33 PM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on February 02, 2013, 09:05:03 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khub kaha hai aapne....
mann ji , aapka bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #27 on: February 10, 2013, 06:41:40 AM »
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QALB  SAHEB , BAHUT SHUKRIYA .
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«Reply #28 on: February 12, 2013, 05:59:04 AM »
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SHEBA  JI , ADAAB . IS  TANZIYA  KOSHISH  KI
PAZEERAI KE  LIYE BAHUT MAMNOON HOON .
                        KHUSH  RAHYE .
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«Reply #29 on: February 12, 2013, 07:01:49 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on February 02, 2013, 02:30:32 PM
Siddiqui saheb,

Har ashar khabil-e daad,
bahut aala bahut khoob
aur aikdum sahi ashar hain aapke


Asad bhai , hausla afzai ke liye mamnoon hoon. duago,Hasan
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