*~*Hamara Ghar Ajnabi Hogaa*~*

by Roja on March 25, 2009, 02:50:09 AM
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Kahan toh, taiy hua tha naav ko naavik sambalenge
Kisse shak tha ki ye majdhar mein pagdi uchalenge..!!

Hamara ghar hamare vaste hi ajnabi hoga,
Jinhe humne sharan di thi wohi humko nikalenge..!!

Inhe humdard koyi jankar sab raaj math kehna,
Ye kal chupaal mein hokar khade pattar ubalenge..!!

Zara-si pyas ne inko hilakar rakh diya logo,
Hume kaise yakeen tha ye samandhar ko bacha lenge..!!

Kadam-ber dhoop de-do aur kuch tum do na do humko,
Isse hi ood lenge hum, isse hi hum bicha lenge..!!

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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2009, 08:30:37 AM »
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Bohot khoob Roja  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 08:40:16 AM »
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Applause Applause wah wah Roja jee kya baat hai...kamal ka likha hai apne especially the second stanza...
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 01:36:48 PM »
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kia baat hai roja bhut khoob..............wah wah..........
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2009, 02:40:33 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 25, 2009, 02:50:09 AM
Kahan toh, taiy hua tha naav ko naavik sambalenge
Kisse shak tha ki ye majdhar mein pagdi uchalenge..!!

Hamara ghar hamare vaste hi ajnabi hoga,
Jinhe humne sharan di thi wohi humko nikalenge..!!

Inhe humdard koyi jankar sab raaj math kehna,
Ye kal chupaal mein hokar khade pattar ubalenge..!!

Zara-si pyas ne inko hilakar rakh diya logo,
Hume kaise yakeen tha ye samandhar ko bacha lenge..!!

Kadam-ber dhoop de-do aur kuch tum do na do humko,
Isse hi ood lenge hum, isse hi hum bicha lenge..!!

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always a meaningful poetry from your side Roja...

and the purpose for which it is written is fulfilled i think tongue3

keep writing as always...
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2009, 04:40:50 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 25, 2009, 08:30:37 AM
Bohot khoob Roja  Applause Applause Applause

Thank you very much for reading me dear Talat.
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 04:44:44 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on March 25, 2009, 08:40:16 AM
Applause Applause wah wah Roja jee kya baat hai...kamal ka likha hai apne especially the second stanza...

Thank you very much Rahim ji. Aate rehna  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 04:50:39 AM »
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Gam na hoga hathon se kalam cheen le zamana
Hame lahoo se bhigo kar ungaliyan likhna aata hai

Laakh dhabbe daal de zamana chahe hamare shayri per
Hame apne ashqon se her dhabba dhona aata hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 04:52:21 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on March 28, 2009, 02:40:33 PM
always a meaningful poetry from your side Roja...

and the purpose for which it is written is fulfilled i think tongue3

keep writing as always...

Thank you very much dear hasina... Thanks for yr
appreciation. Keep coming  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2009, 02:50:15 PM »
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BohatAchche Rpja Sis,. Nice One,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2009, 03:11:41 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja..Bahut hi Sachai aur dil ki gehrai se likhi gayi Poetry Hai..Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause

Sajid Bhai,aapne bhi Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja..Bahut hi Sachai aur dil ki gehrai se likhi gayi Poetry Hai..Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause


Thank you very much Khwaish Bhaiya  Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 08:24:05 PM »
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bahoot khoob Roja!!
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bahoot khoob Roja!!

Thanks di
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2009, 04:15:48 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot acha likha hai aapne Roja ji
hamesha ki tarah, bahot khoob

Thank you very much for reading me @Kaash ji
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