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ParwaaZ
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Ahel E Bazm ko Humara Salam O Aadaa
Humne yeh tanziyaa kalam paheli martaba kahi hai... Isse pahele humne koi bhi tanziyaa kalaam nahi kahi thi.....
Ummid hai aap logoN ko pasand aayeNgi ...
Apni araa se aur rai se zarur nawaziyeNga........ 
Woh jab bhi bolta hai kayiN dil jalaa ke bolta hai
Haq parast hai jo haq pe sar uthaa ke bolta hai
Us ka sikka chalta hai duniyaa ke bazaar meiN
Jo jhuth ko bhi danke pe thok bajaa ke bolta hai
Masoom se sach ko bhi fasaana bana deta hai
Har shaks jo mirch masaala lagaa ke bolta hai
Jaane Tameez O adaab kahaaN jaa rahe haiN
Kal ka bachcha bhi aankheN dikhaa ke bolta hai
Mujhe nind se jaagne ka koyiN dar nahi hai
Dil mera khawaab palkoN pe sajaa ke bolta hai
Muflisi ne use maNgne pe majboor kiya hai
Jo fakheer pet ki khateer gaa ke bolta hai
Jaa maiN tujhe ab bhool gaya huN " ParwaaZ"
Yaar mera aankheN mujhse milaa ke bolta hai
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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Umda Shayar
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 05:13:14 PM » |
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waahhhhh parwaz ji......wakai bht hi pyare hain aapsare sher is kalam k...
aapki trah hi padhe ise aur har sher me kuch khas baat samne aai....
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 07:38:10 PM » |
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Kasak Jee thanks for appriciate....
Aage bhi padhte rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 01:08:13 PM » |
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Us ka sikka chalta hai duniyaa ke bazaar mein
Jo jhuth ko bhi danke pe thok bajaa ke bolta hai
Jaane Tameez O adaab kahaan jaa rahe hai.n
Kal ka bachcha bhi aankhe dikhaa ke bolta hai
Muflisi ne use mangne pe majboor kiya hai
Jo fakheer pet ki khateer gaa ke bolta hai
Good One........ Parwaaz Sahab !
Very Impressive .... Awesome ! Amazing Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai...
yunhi likhte rahe aage bhi... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2010, 06:50:12 PM » |
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bahut khoob Parwaaz ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 10:56:08 AM » |
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Us ka sikka chalta hai duniyaa ke bazaar mein
Jo jhuth ko bhi danke pe thok bajaa ke bolta hai
Jaane Tameez O adaab kahaan jaa rahe hai.n
Kal ka bachcha bhi aankhe dikhaa ke bolta hai
Muflisi ne use mangne pe majboor kiya hai
Jo fakheer pet ki khateer gaa ke bolta hai
Good One........ Parwaaz Sahab !
Very Impressive .... Awesome ! Amazing Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai...
yunhi likhte rahe aage bhi... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
Thank you Naresh Jee..
Thanks for appriciate my work.....
Ummid hai aage bhi aap aapna sahyog banaye rakhenge...
Thanks again....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.. |
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 11:00:54 AM » |
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AAJ KI HAQEEQAT PE TANZ HAI ,.....BAHUT KHOOB PARWAZ SAHAB
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 12:46:44 AM » |
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Bahut hi achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Parwaaz Ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2010, 11:06:34 PM » |
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bahut khoob Parwaaz ji...!!!
Klaskar Jee kalaam ki tarif ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa.....
Aage bhi apna saath dete rahiye,
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... |
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2010, 11:49:55 PM » |
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AAJ KI HAQEEQAT PE TANZ HAI ,.....BAHUT KHOOB PARWAZ SAHAB
K" Jee kalaam per aapki pazi rai jaankar khushi huyi.... hum tahe dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hai....
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye ....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez...... |
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2010, 11:58:20 PM » |
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Bahut hi achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Parwaaz Ji
Rajesh jee Aadaab!
Aapko apni kalaam per dekh kar masarrat huyi.... Kalaam ki taif ke liye mashkoor o mamnoon hai.....
Aage hi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
khush rahiye.....
Khuda hafez...... |
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