IK Laash

by harashmahajan on August 11, 2007, 07:09:56 AM
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Ik Laash

_____Rooh Chali Aaj
Apne Ghar ko
Chhor chali ik
Sureele swar ko.
_______Doondti hai
Woh majboot kandha,
Badi meharbaani unki..!!
Jinho ne
Zism ko
Is tarah
Majbooti se bandha........!!


Kya is liye?
KahiN uthh na jaaye??
 _____Ganit kahiN..!!
Jaaydaad-khoroN ka,
Bigad na jaaye?

______Sheegrata chha jaye
Sirf Rone ka shagun bhar
Reh jaye!!!!!
Sab ki nazreiN.....
Us be-jaan laash per,
Woh padi hai
YuiN hi
ApnoN ke viswaas per!!

Rooh uski Tehal rahi hai
Dekh rahi hai
ApnoN ke taane-baane
Bun raheiN hai jo
Rahe the kabhi
jaane-siyaane.......
Pukaar raheiN haiN
Ik dooje ko
___Arey O........
KahaaN Chhupa rakha hai
karaar-nama !!
Bada hi
Khoosat tha..
Ye buddha
Bada hi tha khisyaana
Jate hue bhi
Nahi bata gaya
Uska Thikana......
Be-reham be-haya,
Thodi si bhi nahi thi
IsmeiN Daya?
Bibi Gurraayii !!
Idher-udher dekh chillayii
Jara jaldi kero
Laash pet se phool ayii !!
oh!!
Baad meiN usey yaad aayii
Usey toh bilkul
Chup rehna hai
Ik pati-vrata ka
Yahi toh Gehna hai....!!!!

Rooh ne li
Ik be-jaan si angraayii.....
Ik boond
 sookhshm aankhoN se
Khud b khud
Chali aayii......


Ik booNd........
Sookhsm aankhoN se
Khud b khud
chali ayii...!!!


Harash
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2007, 04:02:24 PM »
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Bohot khoob Harash !! Very different....very creative !!
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2007, 06:38:43 PM »
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Nice subject and good ending.

Ek Rooh, Ek laash !

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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2007, 06:14:00 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Bohot khoob Harash !! Very different....very creative !!



Bahoot bahoot shukriya Talat ji..aapko bhaav pasand aaye...


Harash
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2007, 06:15:36 AM »
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Nice subject and good ending.

Ek Rooh, Ek laash !

Moving it to Tanziyah Section!



Shukriya Ricky ji

Harash
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2007, 03:35:52 PM »
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shuru me laga pata nahi kya baat ho rahi hai lekin end ate ate pata chala ki  achi aur alag si poem hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2007, 03:58:56 PM »
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Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
shuru me laga pata nahi kya baat ho rahi hai lekin end ate ate pata chala ki  achi aur alag si poem hai


Shukriya sahiba ji


harash
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2007, 11:11:33 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Harsh ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2007, 03:38:40 AM »
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Waah Waah... That's really beautiful... =D>
Very Different Approach, Very True and Meaningful...


Waiting for More from your side... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2007, 05:16:40 AM »
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Waah Waah... That's really beautiful... =D>
Very Different Approach, Very True and Meaningful...


Waiting for More from your side... Usual Smile


Thx shikha ji......


Harash
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2007, 05:20:04 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Harsh ji!!


bahoot bahoot shukriya pooja ji



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