is patthar ko gadha daalo!

by Prateek Mardia on June 25, 2009, 07:08:21 PM
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Girebaan mein jhankey huey khud ke ub to arsaa hua jaisey
jhan kodh ho faila wahan nazre rukti nahi aksar

Mehfilon mein mulaakaton ke silsiley is kar ke badha daale
kabhi fursat rahe to bhee khud se khud ka na milna ho

vafa-mohhabbat,umeed bharoson ka gila gairon se kya keejey
vaade jo khud se kiye maine,sabhi chun chun ke todey hai

manziley kuch aur rahe kehte, aur raahe kuch aur hi takte
fir kismaton pur tohmat laga di bade aasan bahaane they

haklaahatoon aur baukhlaahton mein jub saanse nikalti hai
koi aakar poochey zara humse kya zindgi chaar din ki hai

sirf mehsoos karney se nahi paltenge zakhm dil ke
agar moorat banani hai to is patthar ko gadha daalo

Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2009, 08:02:21 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 25, 2009, 07:08:21 PM

vafa-mohhabbat,umeed bharoson ka gila gairon se kya keejey
vaade jo khud se kiye maine,sabhi chun chun ke todey hai

manziley kuch aur rahe kehte, aur raahe kuch aur hi takte
fir kismaton pur tohmat laga di bade aasan bahaane they

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Bohot umda prateek ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2009, 08:17:28 AM »
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Bahut Umda likha hai Prateek Ji.. Lajawab Alfaaz pesh kiye Hain.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2009, 09:26:10 AM »
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Bahut khoob Prateek ji,beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2009, 09:34:38 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Prateek Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2009, 11:17:52 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 25, 2009, 08:02:21 PM
Bohot umda prateek ji

Quote from: @kaash on June 25, 2009, 08:48:25 PM
Bahot khoob likha hai Prateek ji,welcome back
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 26, 2009, 09:26:10 AM

Bahut khoob Prateek ji,beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Celmira on June 26, 2009, 09:34:38 AM

Bohot Khoob Prateek Ji


Sayyid ji, Kaash ji, Mann ji, Madhuwesh ji, Celmira Ji,

Manobal badhaane ke liye aabhar.
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«Reply #6 on: June 27, 2009, 11:28:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause
kahte hai bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher nahi......to akhirkaar intzaar ki ghadiyan khatm hui aur prateek ji ki kalam se ek lajawab tahreer padhne ko mili..bahoooot hi khooob likha hai prateek ji har sher ne antar-man ko chua.
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2009, 11:49:12 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 27, 2009, 11:28:21 AM
Applause Applause
kahte hai bhagwan ke ghar der hai andher nahi......to akhirkaar intzaar ki ghadiyan khatm hui aur prateek ji ki kalam se ek lajawab tahreer padhne ko mili..bahoooot hi khooob likha hai prateek ji har sher ne antar-man ko chua.
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Meri kamzor panktiyon pur aapki sashakt tippani aap ke udaar hriday ko darshaati hai.manobal badhaane mein maahir hai aap janaab! shukria!
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2009, 02:02:03 PM »
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bahut sunder khayal hai... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mukhote itne pahan liye hamne
Ab aaine k saamne se gujren to
Khud ko nahi pehchante ab hum
Kis ki moorat gadhe nakli hai sab....

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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 25, 2009, 07:08:21 PM
Girebaan mein jhankey huey khud ke ub to arsaa hua jaisey
jhan kodh ho faila wahan nazre rukti nahi aksar

Mehfilon mein mulaakaton ke silsiley is kar ke badha daale
kabhi fursat rahe to bhee khud se khud ka na milna ho

vafa-mohhabbat,umeed bharoson ka gila gairon se kya keejey
vaade jo khud se kiye maine,sabhi chun chun ke todey hai

manziley kuch aur rahe kehte, aur raahe kuch aur hi takte
fir kismaton pur tohmat laga di bade aasan bahaane they

haklaahatoon aur baukhlaahton mein jub saanse nikalti hai
koi aakar poochey zara humse kya zindgi chaar din ki hai

sirf mehsoos karney se nahi paltenge zakhm dil ke
agar moorat banani hai to is patthar ko gadha daalo

Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #9 on: June 27, 2009, 03:29:06 PM »
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BOhat Achche Prateek JI,.
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 05:08:54 PM »
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Quote from: surendramardia on June 27, 2009, 02:02:03 PM
bahut sunder khayal hai... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley :clapping

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bahut shukria...aapka aashirwaad bus yuhi milta rahe sadev!

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BOhat Achche Prateek JI,.

shukriah..azeem bhai.
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 05:11:47 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob prateekji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ab Umeed Karta hoon ke Aapki Likhi Hui Aur Bhi kavitaye Humein Ab Padhne Ko Mile..
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Bahut Bahut Khoob prateekji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ab Umeed Karta hoon ke Aapki Likhi Hui Aur Bhi kavitaye Humein Ab Padhne Ko Mile..



shukria khwaish bhai..aap kyon sharminda kar rahe hai..aapki raftaar ki tarah hum kabhi naih chal paaye..yahan to ek kavita likne mein hi mahino lagte hai....
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2009, 05:19:02 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 28, 2009, 05:15:52 PM

shukria khwaish bhai..aap kyon sharminda kar rahe hai..aapki raftaar ki tarah hum kabhi naih chal paaye..yahan to ek kavita likne mein hi mahino lagte hai....

Aap Humesha Se Aise Kehte Ho,Jabki Aap Jaante Ho,Ke Humne Aapse bahut Kuch seekha hai.. icon_salut notworthy
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Bahut bahut khoobsurti se har ek alfaaz ko tarasha hai aapne..

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