is patthar ko gadha daalo! -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Prateek Mardia

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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2009, 05:26:31 PM »

Quote from: {Angel} on June 28, 2009, 05:19:12 PM

Bahut bahut khoobsurti se har ek alfaaz ko tarasha hai aapne..

Too good... Clapping Smiley

taareef ka shukrguzaar hu angel ji..aapki shayri ki pakad ka to sadev kayal raha hu,jaanti hai aap.


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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #16 on: June 28, 2009, 05:29:16 PM »

bahut bahut bahut khoob Prateek ji Applause


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Pooja

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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2009, 12:50:42 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on June 25, 2009, 07:08:21 PM

Girebaan mein jhankey huey khud ke ub to arsaa hua jaisey
jhan kodh ho faila wahan nazre rukti nahi aksar

Mehfilon mein mulaakaton ke silsiley is kar ke badha daale
kabhi fursat rahe to bhee khud se khud ka na milna ho

vafa-mohhabbat,umeed bharoson ka gila gairon se kya keejey
vaade jo khud se kiye maine,sabhi chun chun ke todey hai

manziley kuch aur rahe kehte, aur raahe kuch aur hi takte
fir kismaton pur tohmat laga di bade aasan bahaane they

haklaahatoon aur baukhlaahton mein jub saanse nikalti hai
koi aakar poochey zara humse kya zindgi chaar din ki hai

sirf mehsoos karney se nahi paltenge zakhm dil ke
agar moorat banani hai to is patthar ko gadha daalo

Prateek Mardia

Prateek ji,
kafi arse se sirf yoindia per posts parr rahi thi, magar likhne ka man jaise mar chuka hai Yoindia per... per apki likhi kavita ne kuch line man main gunguna di.. unhe apne tak rakhna.. apki kavita se bewafai jaisa laga so likh rahi hu...

apki likhi kavita main ek ek line apne app kamaal ki hai... gahre arth liye hue.. zindagi ko bahoot najdeek se dekhne ke baad he insaan itni gahri kavita likh sakta hai... Good work, good creation...

pathrili hui zindagi main, kabhi kabhi jab dil dharak jaata hai
ho jaate hai khud se khud sharminda, Aaina bhi sir jhukaata hai

karte hai khud se phir ek aor wada, jo waqat ke sath goom ho jaata hai
pathrili hui zindagi main, kabhi kabhi jab dil dharak jaata hai...


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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2009, 05:33:07 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 28, 2009, 05:29:16 PM

bahut bahut bahut khoob Prateek ji Applause

bahut bahut bahut shukria, poppoetry ji, aapne padha aur saraaha.


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #19 on: June 29, 2009, 05:42:09 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 29, 2009, 12:50:42 AM

Pooja ji,

sabse pehle aapka dhanywaad jo aapne is panne pur apni mohar lagaayi aur rachna ko saraaha.
Aapki baaton mein kayi sawal bhee chupe hai aur kayi jawaab bhee aur yeh silsiley to chatey hi rahenge.
Aapne kahan ki aapka kuch mun sa nahi hai aajkal kuch likhne ka...to koi baat nahi...adhoorey mun se kuch karna bhee nahi chahiye...hum intzaar karnege ki aapko jub anukoolta ho tub apni kalam uthaiyega.

aapka likha bhee khoob hai.


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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #20 on: July 01, 2009, 05:55:08 PM »

Bohot badhiya prateek ji... Clapping Smiley


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Re: is patthar ko gadha daalo!

«Reply #21 on: July 21, 2009, 03:26:42 AM »

Quote from: superspawn10 on July 01, 2009, 05:55:08 PM

Bohot badhiya prateek ji... Clapping Smiley

shukriya superspawn ji--aapne saraaha.


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