Is Sadi ko Inqalab Chahiye ( Qadeertoopch )

by musaafirhon on September 12, 2009, 06:54:21 PM
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Aur bhi khuch ashar , is ghazal ke inshallah waqath ne kabhi ijazath di to mumkamil taur pe apki nazar karne ki koshish rahegi .. abhi abhi is ghazal ki taherir howi hai , kaafi arse ke baad khuch likha ,, faisla karen ap log kahan tak insaaf kiya hai ..


Meri be loss mahobbath ka mujhe hisab chahiye !!
Mai sahi tha ye galath tha mujhe jawab chahiye !!

Na badlengi munsifon ki riwayaten is taraha !!
Is sadi ko bhi shayad koi inqalab chahiye !!

Sitaron ko saja- na sake unki rah me hum kabhi !!
Aur wo kahete hain ke unhe mahetaab chahiye !!

Muddath se muntazir hon unko dekhne ko !!
Unka deedar eak baar nahi behisab chahiye !!

Mai sunana chahata hon  sacha-e- zamane ko “Qadeer” !!
Bakshi thi jo meri quddari ne mujhe  wo awaz chahiye !!


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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2009, 07:00:51 PM »
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Fantastic musafir ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2009, 07:24:41 PM »
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Quote from: ehsaas chahat ka on September 12, 2009, 07:00:51 PM
Fantastic musafir ji

nawazish hai apki ..

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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2009, 08:02:03 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji touching n mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2009, 09:26:39 PM »
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Quote from: musaafirhon on September 12, 2009, 06:54:21 PM
Aur bhi khuch ashar , is ghazal ke inshallah waqath ne kabhi ijazath di to mumkamil taur pe apki nazar karne ki koshish rahegi .. abhi abhi is ghazal ki taherir howi hai , kaafi arse ke baad khuch likha ,, faisla karen ap log kahan tak insaaf kiya hai ..


Meri be loss mahobbath ka mujhe hisab chahiye !!
Mai sahi tha ye galath tha mujhe jawab chahiye !!

Na badlengi munsifon ki riwayaten is taraha !!
Is sadi ko bhi shayad koi inqalab chahiye !!

Sitaron ko saja- na sake unki rah me hum kabhi !!
Aur wo kahete hain ke unhe mahetaab chahiye !!

Muddath se muntazir hon unko dekhne ko !!
Unka deedar eak baar nahi behisab chahiye !!

Mai sunana chahata hon  sacha-e- zamane ko “Qadeer” !!
Bakshi thi jo meri quddari ne mujhe  wo awaz chahiye !!


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bahut khoob ,,matla aur us k baad ka shair ,,wah wah kya khoob kaha,,'mei sahi tha ya galat tha mujhe jawaab chahiye'mindblowing
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«Reply #5 on: September 13, 2009, 04:13:29 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 12, 2009, 08:02:03 PM
Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji touching n mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Apka Madhuwesh Ji .. Allah Apko Khush rakhe !!


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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2009, 04:36:15 AM »
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Quote from: minhaj.saif on September 12, 2009, 09:26:39 PM
bahut khoob ,,matla aur us k baad ka shair ,,wah wah kya khoob kaha,,'mei sahi tha ya galat tha mujhe jawaab chahiye'mindblowing
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Karam Apki Pakiza Nigaah ka , Baaqi to khuch nahi is haqeeq insaan ki taherir me ,, apne pasand farmaya uske tahe dil se shukar guzar hon !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2009, 04:43:35 AM »
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Quote from: musaafirhon on September 12, 2009, 06:54:21 PM
Aur bhi khuch ashar , is ghazal ke inshallah waqath ne kabhi ijazath di to mumkamil taur pe apki nazar karne ki koshish rahegi .. abhi abhi is ghazal ki taherir howi hai , kaafi arse ke baad khuch likha ,, faisla karen ap log kahan tak insaaf kiya hai ..


Meri be loss mahobbath ka mujhe hisab chahiye !!
Mai sahi tha ye galath tha mujhe jawab chahiye !!

Na badlengi munsifon ki riwayaten is taraha !!
Is sadi ko bhi shayad koi inqalab chahiye !!

Sitaron ko saja- na sake unki rah me hum kabhi !!
Aur wo kahete hain ke unhe mahetaab chahiye !!

Muddath se muntazir hon unko dekhne ko !!
Unka deedar eak baar nahi behisab chahiye !!

Mai sunana chahata hon  sacha-e- zamane ko “Qadeer” !!
Bakshi thi jo meri quddari ne mujhe  wo awaz chahiye !!


Qadeertoopchi

kya baaat hai yaaar bahot khooob...vaise is sher ne mujhe bahot attract kiya...


Sitaro'n ko sajaa na sake, unki Raaho'n mein Hum Kabhi
Aur Wo Kehte Hain Ke, Unhe Mahetaab Chahiye....

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«Reply #8 on: September 13, 2009, 05:03:03 AM »
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Subhan Allah, Behad Achchi Peshkash Hai, BOhat Khoob,.

Specially Sitaron waali,.
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«Reply #9 on: September 13, 2009, 05:08:53 AM »
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Wa h ji bahut hi khoob


Shayeri bhi samjhne ko beadab nahin baadab chahiye

dad qubool ho


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«Reply #10 on: September 13, 2009, 06:29:43 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 13, 2009, 05:03:03 AM
Subhan Allah, Behad Achchi Peshkash Hai, BOhat Khoob,.

Specially Sitaron waali,.

Shukriya Azeem , Apne Pasand farmaya samjho Qimat Wasool !!

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«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2009, 06:33:27 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI QADEER JI.....

KYUN MAHOBBATON KE BEECH AATI HAI RIWAYATEN,
KYUN ZAMAANE KO HOTI HAI MAHOBBAT KARNE WALLON SE SHIKAYATEN.
KYUN SADIYON SE RAKHI JAATI HAI MAHOBBATON MEIN SHARTEN,
AB ZAMMANA BADAL GAYA HAI,"IS SADI KO INQALAB CHAHIYE".
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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2009, 08:28:09 AM »
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Quote from: cara on September 13, 2009, 06:33:27 AM
KYA BAAT HAI QADEER JI.....

KYUN MAHOBBATON KE BEECH AATI HAI RIWAYATEN,
KYUN ZAMAANE KO HOTI HAI MAHOBBAT KARNE WALLON SE SHIKAYATEN.
KYUN SADIYON SE RAKHI JAATI HAI MAHOBBATON MEIN SHARTEN,
AB ZAMMANA BADAL GAYA HAI,"IS SADI KO INQALAB CHAHIYE".

Karam Apka Jo apne Pasand Farmaya , Aur Apne bhi Acha likha hai cara ji !!


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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2009, 09:08:15 AM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji.
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2009, 09:22:17 AM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on September 13, 2009, 05:08:53 AM
Wa h ji bahut hi khoob


Shayeri bhi samjhne ko beadab nahin baadab chahiye

dad qubool ho


javed

Karam Hai Apki Miyari Nazar ka Javed sahab .. Ap Jaise Urdu Dan aur Qabil Shayar Ki Dad Mil Jaye to Likhne Ka Hausla Bad Jaata hai .. Hausla Afza-e- Ka Shukriya Huzoor !!

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