Is Sadi ko Inqalab Chahiye ( Qadeertoopch )

by musaafirhon on September 12, 2009, 06:54:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 13, 2009, 02:26:37 PM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji.

Shukriya , janab !!

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #16 on: September 14, 2009, 08:42:01 AM »
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kya baaat hai yaaar bahot khooob...vaise is sher ne mujhe bahot attract kiya...


Sitaro'n ko sajaa na sake, unki Raaho'n mein Hum Kabhi
Aur Wo Kehte Hain Ke, Unhe Mahetaab Chahiye....

 Applause Applause Applause




Hukar Guzaar Hon huzoor Apka Jo apne Pasand Farmaya !!


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«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2009, 09:27:44 AM »
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Aur bhi khuch ashar , is ghazal ke inshallah waqath ne kabhi ijazath di to mumkamil taur pe apki nazar karne ki koshish rahegi .. abhi abhi is ghazal ki taherir howi hai , kaafi arse ke baad khuch likha ,, faisla karen ap log kahan tak insaaf kiya hai ..


Meri be loss mahobbath ka mujhe hisab chahiye !!
Mai sahi tha ye galath tha mujhe jawab chahiye !!

Na badlengi munsifon ki riwayaten is taraha !!
Is sadi ko bhi shayad koi inqalab chahiye !!

Sitaron ko saja- na sake unki rah me hum kabhi !!
Aur wo kahete hain ke unhe mahetaab chahiye !!

Muddath se muntazir hon unko dekhne ko !!
Unka deedar eak baar nahi behisab chahiye !!

Mai sunana chahata hon  sacha-e- zamane ko “Qadeer” !!
Bakshi thi jo meri quddari ne mujhe  wo awaz chahiye !!


Qadeertoopchi



Qadeer bhai bhut hi khoob likha hai mashallah se har sher apni alag waza mai nazar aa rha hai bhut hi umda paishkash daad hazir hai janaab is kalaam par qubool farmaye.n,  you.n hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #18 on: September 16, 2009, 02:08:24 PM »
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Qadeer bhai bhut hi khoob likha hai mashallah se har sher apni alag waza mai nazar aa rha hai bhut hi umda paishkash daad hazir hai janaab is kalaam par qubool farmaye.n,  you.n hi likhte rahiye


nawazish karam , aslam sahab ke apne pasand farmaya .. shukar guzar hain hum apke !! allah apko khush rakhe !

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sahil ahmed
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«Reply #19 on: October 01, 2011, 05:50:15 PM »
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Subhan Allah..!! Bahut khoob Qadeer bhai.
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sbechain
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«Reply #20 on: December 13, 2011, 11:47:43 AM »
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Aur bhi khuch ashar , is ghazal ke inshallah waqath ne kabhi ijazath di to mumkamil taur pe apki nazar karne ki koshish rahegi .. abhi abhi is ghazal ki taherir howi hai , kaafi arse ke baad khuch likha ,, faisla karen ap log kahan tak insaaf kiya hai ..


Meri be loss mahobbath ka mujhe hisab chahiye !!
Mai sahi tha ye galath tha mujhe jawab chahiye !!

Na badlengi munsifon ki riwayaten is taraha !!
Is sadi ko bhi shayad koi inqalab chahiye !!

Sitaron ko saja- na sake unki rah me hum kabhi !!
Aur wo kahete hain ke unhe mahetaab chahiye !!

Muddath se muntazir hon unko dekhne ko !!
Unka deedar eak baar nahi behisab chahiye !!

Mai sunana chahata hon  sacha-e- zamane ko “Qadeer” !!
Bakshi thi jo meri quddari ne mujhe  wo awaz chahiye !!


Qadeertoopchi



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