Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baaton Ka Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha.....

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Aapki Nazron Ko Fursat Na Mili Sachai Ki,
Varna Yeh Marz Laa-Ilaaj Naa Tha....

Yakeenan Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Hota hai,
Par Kuch Betuuke Sawaalo Ka Mere Paas Koi Jawaab Naa Tha....

Main Yeh Nahi kehta Ke Humse Koi Khata Naa Hui!!!!
Par Dekh,Teri Galtiyon Ka Bhi Koi Hisaab Naa Tha....

Aaj Dekha Hai Humne,Iss Mehfil Mein Ek Dusre Par Tohmato Ka Silsila,
Iss Mehfil Ke Liye, Inn Aankhon Mein Aisa Koi Khwaab Naa Tha....

Har Shaks Anjaane Mein Hi Sahi,Kabhi To Kisi Ka Dil Dhuka Jaata Hai,
Yaad Rakh,Insaan Hi Hai Woh,Koi Aaftaab Naa Tha.....

Afsos Hai Mujhe,Iss Khoobsurat Mehfil Mein Befizul Hi,
Kuch Logon Par Ungliyan Uthai Gayi!!!
Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baton Ka Kabhi Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha....

Keh Diya "Khwaish" Ne Seedhe Alfaazo Mein Jo Usse Kehna Tha!!!
Kya Karta,Ghuma-Phira Kar Apni Baat Ko Kehna,
Kabhi Uska Aisa Andaaz Naa Tha....

        ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2009, 03:49:11 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost....Dil chhu liya hai aapki is peshkash ne.....!! Bohot Khoob...!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2009, 03:53:27 PM »
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waah Mere Bhai, Kya Khoob Tanz Diya Hai Tumne,.

Great Yaar, Dil Se Daad Kabool Karein,.

Bohat Pasand Aayi Hume,.
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2009, 04:07:17 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 28, 2009, 03:49:11 PM
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost....Dil chhu liya hai aapki is peshkash ne.....!! Bohot Khoob...!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!!agar aapke dil ko yeh Nazm chuti hai,to main samjhunga ke meri Koshish Kamyaab Hui..Bahut Bahut shukriya Dost!! icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2009, 04:19:35 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 28, 2009, 03:53:27 PM
waah Mere Bhai, Kya Khoob Tanz Diya Hai Tumne,.

Great Yaar, Dil Se Daad Kabool Karein,.

Bohat Pasand Aayi Hume,.

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Azeem Bhai.. icon_salut
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2009, 04:25:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2009, 03:46:00 PM
Aapki Nazron Ko Fursat Na Mili Sachai Ki,
Varna Yeh Marz Laa-Ilaaj Naa Tha....

Yakeenan Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Hota hai,
Par Kuch Betuuke Sawaalo Ka Mere Paas Koi Jawaab Naa Tha....

Main Yeh Nahi kehta Ke Humse Koi Khata Naa Hui!!!!
Par Dekh,Teri Galtiyon Ka Bhi Koi Hisaab Naa Tha....

Aaj Dekha Hai Humne,Iss Mehfil Mein Ek Dusre Par Tohmato Ka Silsila,
Iss Mehfil Ke Liye, Inn Aankhon Mein Aisa Koi Khwaab Naa Tha....

Har Shaks Anjaane Mein Hi Sahi,Kabhi To Kisi Ka Dil Dhuka Jaata Hai,
Yaad Rakh,Insaan Hi Hai Woh,Koi Aaftaab Naa Tha.....

Afsos Hai Mujhe,Iss Khoobsurat Mehfil Mein Befizul Hi,
Kuch Logon Par Ungliyan Uthai Gayi!!!
Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baton Ka Kabhi Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha....

Keh Diya "Khwaish" Ne Seedhe Alfaazo Mein Jo Usse Kehna Tha!!!
Kya Karta,Ghuma-Phira Kar Apni Baat Ko Kehna,
Kabhi Uska Aisa Andaaz Naa Tha....

        ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~

Aapka andaz-e-bayan hamesha khoobsurat hota hia...

this time its amazing...

take care...
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM »
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Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 03:32:01 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2009, 03:46:00 PM
Aapki Nazron Ko Fursat Na Mili Sachai Ki,
Varna Yeh Marz Laa-Ilaaj Naa Tha....

Yakeenan Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Hota hai,
Par Kuch Betuuke Sawaalo Ka Mere Paas Koi Jawaab Naa Tha....

Main Yeh Nahi kehta Ke Humse Koi Khata Naa Hui!!!!
Par Dekh,Teri Galtiyon Ka Bhi Koi Hisaab Naa Tha....

Aaj Dekha Hai Humne,Iss Mehfil Mein Ek Dusre Par Tohmato Ka Silsila,
Iss Mehfil Ke Liye, Inn Aankhon Mein Aisa Koi Khwaab Naa Tha....

Har Shaks Anjaane Mein Hi Sahi,Kabhi To Kisi Ka Dil Dhuka Jaata Hai,
Yaad Rakh,Insaan Hi Hai Woh,Koi Aaftaab Naa Tha.....

Afsos Hai Mujhe,Iss Khoobsurat Mehfil Mein Befizul Hi,
Kuch Logon Par Ungliyan Uthai Gayi!!!
Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baton Ka Kabhi Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha....

Keh Diya "Khwaish" Ne Seedhe Alfaazo Mein Jo Usse Kehna Tha!!!
Kya Karta,Ghuma-Phira Kar Apni Baat Ko Kehna,
Kabhi Uska Aisa Andaaz Naa Tha....

        ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~

Bahut acche  Applause Ati sundar shabdon ka istemal hua hai Khwaish ji.. daad kabul kijiyega zarur. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 03:35:59 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM
Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!

Bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne dear Talat ...

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai...

Well said dear  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2009, 05:30:38 AM »
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Wah bahut khub Khwaish ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2009, 05:36:38 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM
Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!
Dear celmira ji har ek line sidhe dil me utarti si mehsus hoti hai its really very very nice creation........superb
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2009, 05:52:55 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM
Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!

Wow amazing.
pain in every line, feelings in every word..
truly amazing...
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2009, 09:00:26 AM »
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Ek taraf Khwaish ki masoom khwaish dekhi
To kahi kisi ki tanziyaa shikayat dekhi
Kya kahe ab kuch samaj me nahi aata
Yu to kehne ko GHAYEL ne hain duniya dekhi

-SG-
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2009, 12:56:02 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on March 28, 2009, 04:25:34 PM
Aapka andaz-e-bayan hamesha khoobsurat hota hia...

this time its amazing...

take care...

Thanks A lot Angel!!! it's always nice to hear from you..

Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Aur Acha Lagta..
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2009, 12:59:23 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2009, 03:46:00 PM
Aapki Nazron Ko Fursat Na Mili Sachai Ki,
Varna Yeh Marz Laa-Ilaaj Naa Tha....

Yakeenan Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Hota hai,
Par Kuch Betuuke Sawaalo Ka Mere Paas Koi Jawaab Naa Tha....

Main Yeh Nahi kehta Ke Humse Koi Khata Naa Hui!!!!
Par Dekh,Teri Galtiyon Ka Bhi Koi Hisaab Naa Tha....

Aaj Dekha Hai Humne,Iss Mehfil Mein Ek Dusre Par Tohmato Ka Silsila,
Iss Mehfil Ke Liye, Inn Aankhon Mein Aisa Koi Khwaab Naa Tha....

Har Shaks Anjaane Mein Hi Sahi,Kabhi To Kisi Ka Dil Dhuka Jaata Hai,
Yaad Rakh,Insaan Hi Hai Woh,Koi Aaftaab Naa Tha.....

Afsos Hai Mujhe,Iss Khoobsurat Mehfil Mein Befizul Hi,
Kuch Logon Par Ungliyan Uthai Gayi!!!
Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baton Ka Kabhi Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha....

Keh Diya "Khwaish" Ne Seedhe Alfaazo Mein Jo Usse Kehna Tha!!!
Kya Karta,Ghuma-Phira Kar Apni Baat Ko Kehna,
Kabhi Uska Aisa Andaaz Naa Tha....

        ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~


Waah khwaish ji bohat achcha likha hai aapne
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