Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baaton Ka Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha.....

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«Reply #15 on: March 29, 2009, 01:11:45 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM
Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!! Har ek Alfaaz Dil Se Nikle Ho jaise..
Talat,Sach to yehi hai ke Iss Mehfil Mein Humne To Wahi Kiya,Jo humein aata hai..Agar apne dil mein koi shikayat,kuch dard bhi ho to humne bas usse alfaazo mein utaara, aur likh diya..
Great work By You,My Friend!!.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: March 29, 2009, 03:31:35 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 29, 2009, 12:47:51 AM
Ana ka naag jab bhi phan phailaata hai,
Zehar uska har taraf bikhar jaata hai

Aankhon pe phaila ho jo shak ka saaya to,
Har ek sach phir jhoot nazar aata hai

Sahi aur galat ka farq hi mit jaaye,
Insaan phir kahan 'Insaan' reh jaata hai

Nafrat ki chingari bhadke jo kisi dil main,
Apne hi nasheman main wo khud aag lagata hai

Hui khata anjaane main, kehte hain use saazish,
Kis zubaan main ye bhala insaaf kehlata hai

Badle ka junoon jab bhi dil pe chhaa jaaye,
Aadmi, insaaniyat ki had se guzar jaata hai

Shayad nahin pata use jo deta hai ab gaali,
Wo khud apni duniya ko pehchaan batata hai

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai

Hai waqt ye mushkil par aisa bhi nahin hai,
Toofaan gar aaye bhi to aa ke guzar jaata hai

Thokar main na gir paayengi is ki deewarain,
Kehdo us shakhs se jo iss ghar ko aazmaata hai !!

kia baat hai celmira ji.....bhut hi achay....haqeeqat pe mamni ek bhut khoobsurat ghazal...

paani bhala kab mutthi mein thar jata hai....bhut hi suchcha khyaal....kitni aasani se kitni badi baat keh di aapne kya baat bhut khoob............aise hi likhte rhiye....
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«Reply #17 on: March 30, 2009, 10:09:49 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 29, 2009, 03:32:01 AM
Bahut acche  Applause Ati sundar shabdon ka istemal hua hai Khwaish ji.. daad kabul kijiyega zarur. Thumbs UP
                                     Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja..
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«Reply #18 on: March 30, 2009, 10:43:26 AM »
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Mindblowing Khwaish ji... Kya baat hai bahoot khoob likha hai
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«Reply #19 on: March 30, 2009, 12:05:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2009, 03:46:00 PM
Aapki Nazron Ko Fursat Na Mili Sachai Ki,
Varna Yeh Marz Laa-Ilaaj Naa Tha....

Yakeenan Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Hota hai,
Par Kuch Betuuke Sawaalo Ka Mere Paas Koi Jawaab Naa Tha....

Main Yeh Nahi kehta Ke Humse Koi Khata Naa Hui!!!!
Par Dekh,Teri Galtiyon Ka Bhi Koi Hisaab Naa Tha....

Aaj Dekha Hai Humne,Iss Mehfil Mein Ek Dusre Par Tohmato Ka Silsila,
Iss Mehfil Ke Liye, Inn Aankhon Mein Aisa Koi Khwaab Naa Tha....

Har Shaks Anjaane Mein Hi Sahi,Kabhi To Kisi Ka Dil Dhuka Jaata Hai,
Yaad Rakh,Insaan Hi Hai Woh,Koi Aaftaab Naa Tha.....

Afsos Hai Mujhe,Iss Khoobsurat Mehfil Mein Befizul Hi,
Kuch Logon Par Ungliyan Uthai Gayi!!!
Iss Mehfil Mein Aisi Baton Ka Kabhi Koi Riwaaz Naa Tha....

Keh Diya "Khwaish" Ne Seedhe Alfaazo Mein Jo Usse Kehna Tha!!!
Kya Karta,Ghuma-Phira Kar Apni Baat Ko Kehna,
Kabhi Uska Aisa Andaaz Naa Tha....

        ~~~~~KHWAISH~~~~~
That was really nice Khwaish..

Iss mehfil ne hi aisi baaton ka riwaz chalaya hai,
kuchh logon ka iss mehfil ne mazaak uraya hai,
Saza bhi de to kise dein, yehi sochkar ruk jata hu,
inhi logo ke sath kabhi achha samay bitaya hai....
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«Reply #20 on: March 30, 2009, 02:05:35 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 29, 2009, 03:35:59 AM
Bahut hi khoobsurati se likha hai aapne dear Talat ...

Jhoot aur saazish ki nahin lambi bohot umr,
Paani bhala kab mutthi main thehar paata hai...

Well said dear  Thumbs UP

Thanks so much dear Roja
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«Reply #21 on: March 30, 2009, 02:06:30 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 29, 2009, 05:36:38 AM
Dear celmira ji har ek line sidhe dil me utarti si mehsus hoti hai its really very very nice creation........superb

Bohot bohot shukriya aap ki taareef aur hausla afzaai ka Jannat Ji
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«Reply #22 on: March 30, 2009, 02:07:00 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on March 29, 2009, 05:52:55 AM
Wow amazing.
pain in every line, feelings in every word..
truly amazing...



Thanks a ton Angel
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«Reply #23 on: March 30, 2009, 02:08:38 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 29, 2009, 09:00:26 AM
Ek taraf Khwaish ki masoom khwaish dekhi
To kahi kisi ki tanziyaa shikayat dekhi
Kya kahe ab kuch samaj me nahi aata
Yu to kehne ko GHAYEL ne hain duniya dekhi

-SG-

Nice lines Sajid Ji
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«Reply #24 on: March 30, 2009, 02:09:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 29, 2009, 01:11:45 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!! Har ek Alfaaz Dil Se Nikle Ho jaise..
Talat,Sach to yehi hai ke Iss Mehfil Mein Humne To Wahi Kiya,Jo humein aata hai..Agar apne dil mein koi shikayat,kuch dard bhi ho to humne bas usse alfaazo mein utaara, aur likh diya..
Great work By You,My Friend!!.. Applause Applause Applause

Aapne padha aur saraha...samjha aur mehsoos kiya...Tah e dil se shukriya Dost ... Shayari hi humari pehchaan hai, yunhi likhte rahenge Inshallah...
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«Reply #25 on: March 30, 2009, 02:11:08 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 29, 2009, 03:31:35 PM
kia baat hai celmira ji.....bhut hi achay....haqeeqat pe mamni ek bhut khoobsurat ghazal...

paani bhala kab mutthi mein thar jata hai....bhut hi suchcha khyaal....kitni aasani se kitni badi baat keh di aapne kya baat bhut khoob............aise hi likhte rhiye....

Bohot bohot shukriya Aslam Ji... hausla afzaai ke liye aapki shukrguzaar hoon...!
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«Reply #26 on: March 30, 2009, 02:12:32 PM »
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Quote from: natural on March 30, 2009, 12:05:15 PM
That was really nice Khwaish..

Iss mehfil ne hi aisi baaton ka riwaz chalaya hai,
kuchh logon ka iss mehfil ne mazaak uraya hai,
Saza bhi de to kise dein, yehi sochkar ruk jata hu,
inhi logo ke sath kabhi achha samay bitaya hai....


Is mehfil mein kayi din humne bi bitaya hai
Kahin koyi aisi baat nazar nahi aaya hai
Kehte hai hamara dost hai yahan
Un doston pe hi nafrat ubalte dekha hai
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«Reply #27 on: March 30, 2009, 02:47:08 PM »
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Iss mehfil mein kuch aisi khushgawar fiza paayi thi,
har taraf muskurahatein aur khwahishein khilkhilayi thi,

jaane lagi hia kiski nazar ke ilzaam aise lag gaye,
usine jalaya is gulshan ko jisne yahan panah paayi thi...
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«Reply #28 on: March 30, 2009, 03:15:16 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 30, 2009, 02:12:32 PM
Is mehfil mein kayi din humne bi bitaya hai
Kahin koyi aisi baat nazar nahi aaya hai
Kehte hai hamara dost hai yahan
Un doston pe hi nafrat ubalte dekha hai
Yahi mehfil kabhi humne bhi sajayi thhi,
ki thi sabse dosti, duniya bhulayi thhi,
dost ki surat me sab dushman miley yahan,
1-1 kar sabne apni nafrat jatayi thhi....
 
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«Reply #29 on: March 30, 2009, 03:27:10 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 29, 2009, 05:30:38 AM
Wah bahut khub Khwaish ji Applause Applause Applause


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jannatjahan Ji...
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