Jazbaaton Ka Samundar Nikla "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 18, 2011, 09:48:05 AM
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       Ek Ajeeb Sa Safar Nikla
       Dard Hi Apna Humsafar Nikla

       Khud Ko Khojte Rahe Umarbhar
      Apne jaisa Na Koi Rehguzar Nikla
 
      Apne Gham Par Roye,Khushi par Muskuraye!!!
     Insaan To jazbaaton Ka Jaise, Samundar Nikla

     Uski Channd Khaamiyon Par Nazar Rahi Apni!!
     Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ka jab Ki Khandar Nikla

    Khel Kismat ka Kam, Khel Apni majbooriyon ka Hai!!
    Jo Apni majburiyon Se Ladna seekhe Wohi Sikander Nikla

    "Khwaish"  Patharon ki Chot Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya!!
    Mushkilo Mein Muskurane Ka Hunar To Mere Andar Nikla

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2011, 09:53:11 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2011, 09:48:05 AM
      Ek Ajeeb Sa Safar Nikla
       Dard Hi Apna Humsafar Nikla

       Khud Ko Khojte Rahe Umarbhar
      Apne jaisa Na Koi Rehguzar Nikla
 
      Apne Gham Par Roye,Khushi par Muskuraye!!!
     Insaan To jazbaaton Ka Jaise, Samundar Nikla

     Uski Channd Khaamiyon Par Nazar Rahi Apni!!
     Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ka jab Ki Khandar Nikla

    Khel Kismat ka Kam, Khel Apni majbooriyon ka Hai!!
    Jo Apni majburiyon Se Ladna seekhe Wohi Sikander Nikla

    "Khwaish"  Patharon ki Chot Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya!!
    Mushkilo Mein Muskurane Ka Hunar To Mere Andar Nikla

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

              khud  ko sikhaane  mein talaashta hai lafz bechain,
              khawaish paas tere to alfaazo.N ka samandar niklaa
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2011, 09:55:53 AM »
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khaishji one of the best poetry
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specially last 2 lines.
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2011, 11:51:31 AM »
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wah wah.
Bahut khoob. Dil se daad
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2011, 03:55:13 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 18, 2011, 09:53:11 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

              khud  ko sikhaane  mein talaashta hai lafz bechain,
              khawaish paas tere to alfaazo.N ka samandar niklaa


Izzat-Afzai ke Liye Aapka tehhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Adil Ji..

Aapne pasand Farmaya aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2011, 05:33:55 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2011, 09:48:05 AM
       Ek Ajeeb Sa Safar Nikla
       Dard Hi Apna Humsafar Nikla

       Khud Ko Khojte Rahe Umarbhar
      Apne jaisa Na Koi Rehguzar Nikla
 
      Apne Gham Par Roye,Khushi par Muskuraye!!!
     Insaan To jazbaaton Ka Jaise, Samundar Nikla

     Uski Channd Khaamiyon Par Nazar Rahi Apni!!
     Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ka jab Ki Khandar Nikla

    Khel Kismat ka Kam, Khel Apni majbooriyon ka Hai!!
    Jo Apni majburiyon Se Ladna seekhe Wohi Sikander Nikla

    "Khwaish"  Patharon ki Chot Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya!!
    Mushkilo Mein Muskurane Ka Hunar To Mere Andar Nikla

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Vry Impressive Creation ... Khwaish Ji !
Good Expressions .... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen .. !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2011, 05:42:12 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2011, 05:44:50 PM »
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bahhhhhhhooooooooot khooooob matla to ghazab dha gaya bro
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2011, 08:54:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2011, 09:48:05 AM

      Apne Gham Par Roye,Khushi par Muskuraye!!!
     Insaan To jazbaaton Ka Jaise, Samundar Nikla

     Uski Channd Khaamiyon Par Nazar Rahi Apni!!
     Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ka jab Ki Khandar Nikla

    Khel Kismat ka Kam, Khel Apni majbooriyon ka Hai!!
    Jo Apni majburiyon Se Ladna seekhe Wohi Sikander Nikla

    "Khwaish"  Patharon ki Chot Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya!!
    Mushkilo Mein Muskurane Ka Hunar To Mere Andar Nikla

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Wah Wah Wah..
Alfaaz kam parr rahe hai tariff karne kay liye..bas itna kahunga, ek aur kalam jis'se Rahim kuch seekh gaya..
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Dil dil se daad dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2011, 05:34:59 AM »
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uff…
kya kalaam hai dost…
loot gaye hum iss par…
wah wah…dhamaaka hai alfaazon ka aur sachai ka ehsaas bht khub hai…
hazaaron daad dil se…
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: June 19, 2011, 08:26:24 AM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji...
sply last one...
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2011, 07:47:01 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 18, 2011, 09:55:53 AM
khaishji one of the best poetry
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specially last 2 lines.


Thankyou Soooooooo Much Sureshji For Considering This Poetry as one of the best!!!

thanks for your soooo kind words.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2011, 08:05:20 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2011, 09:48:05 AM
       Ek Ajeeb Sa Safar Nikla
       Dard Hi Apna Humsafar Nikla

       Khud Ko Khojte Rahe Umarbhar
      Apne jaisa Na Koi Rehguzar Nikla
 
      Apne Gham Par Roye,Khushi par Muskuraye!!!
     Insaan To jazbaaton Ka Jaise, Samundar Nikla

     Uski Channd Khaamiyon Par Nazar Rahi Apni!!
     Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ka jab Ki Khandar Nikla

    Khel Kismat ka Kam, Khel Apni majbooriyon ka Hai!!
    Jo Apni majburiyon Se Ladna seekhe Wohi Sikander Nikla

    "Khwaish"  Patharon ki Chot Ne Mujhe Chalna Seekhaya!!
    Mushkilo Mein Muskurane Ka Hunar To Mere Andar Nikla

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


SAHI KAHA AAPNE, AGAR HER INSAAN APNE AAP KO TALAASHE TO KHUD APNI KAMIYON AUR ACHAION KO DEKH SAKTA HAI. AUR PHIR ZINDAGI ASAAN HO JAATI HAI. WAQAI YE GAURTALAB BAAT HAI.
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Quote from: Imdad on June 18, 2011, 11:51:31 AM
wah wah.
Bahut khoob. Dil se daad

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Imdadji..
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2011, 04:14:26 PM »
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Quote from: khumaar on June 18, 2011, 12:12:50 PM
aajkal to bhai aap chhaye hue hain aur waise hamesha se hi umda likhte rahe hain aap,aapke ilawa purane log kum hi dikhte hain aur kuch to bhai kum hi likhte hain,yun hi likhte rahiye 


dard ko dard hausle wale kabhi samajhte nahi
aap jaise zindadil e dost kabhi udaas hote nahi

kaash Ji, Aapka tehhhhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Bhai..

Aapne Humesha Se Mera Hausla badhaya Hai,bas isliye yeh karwaan bhi jaari hai..haan bahut se purane members ab nahi aate, iss baat se kayi baar Mann maayus bhi ho jaata hai par sabki apni-apni majboori hai..Khair aapka Teh dil se shukriya bhai...

Aur Bahut Bahut Khoob mere Dost.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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