Kaat Ke Apna Pet Jisne Bachoon ko Khilaya Hoga !!

by abdulqadeer on January 14, 2009, 04:16:13 AM
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Mere sar pe  meri maa ki duvaoon ka saya hoga !!
Shayad isiliye khud samandaroon ne mujhe doobne se bachaya hoga !!

Maa ki agush me laut aya hai beta fir se!!
Shayad duniya ne usse bahoth sataya hoga !!

Ab usski mohabbath ki koi kya misaal de!!
Jisne kaat ke apna pet bachoon ko khilaya hoga !!

Ki thi saqawat jisne umar bhar bachoon ke liye !!
Kya guzri hogi uss baap per jab hath me aya kasa hoga !!

Kaise milegi jannath uss aulaad ko !!
Jisne ne maa se pahele biwi ka faraz nibhaya hoga !!

Aur uske sajde ko  koi shirk na kahede Qadeer !!
Shayad isiliye uske qadmoo me jannath banaya hoga !!

Qadeer Toopchi

From Dubai
But An indian
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2009, 06:07:28 AM »
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bahut hi khoob likha hai ....qadeerji....

apne din ki ,kuj is tarha karo shuruwaat,
phele uthte hi,maa ke kadam chuookar liyo aashirwaad.
phir apni bahen ke sar ke uper rakho haath,
kaho kabhi chinta na karna,har dam hai hum tumare saath.
phir jaakar apni biwi se gale milo,karo khub pyaar ka ehesaas.
apni maa-bahen-biwi ke saath
yeh hai jeene ke raaz.
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 06:13:57 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 14, 2009, 06:07:28 AM
bahut hi khoob likha hai ....qadeerji....

apne din ki ,kuj is tarha karo shuruwaat,
phele uthte hi,maa ke kadam chuookar liyo aashirwaad.
phir apni bahen ke sar ke uper rakho haath,
kaho kabhi chinta na karna,har dam hai hum tumare saath.
phir jaakar apni biwi se gale milo,karo khub pyaar ka ehesaas.
apni maa-bahen-biwi ke saath
yeh hai jeene ke raaz.

Thanks a lot Cara ji !! Aur Apne bhi Bahoth Acha Likha hai janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2009, 06:16:21 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Toopchi ji.. Pehla do line toh bahut accha laga  Applause Keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 07:20:34 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 06:16:21 AM
Bahut accha likha hai Toopchi ji.. Pehla do line toh bahut accha laga  Applause Keep up  Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot Roji !! Apki Tareef Sar Ankhoon per Janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 11:21:28 AM »
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Nice one Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 12:52:15 PM »
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Simply Wonderful... Applause Applause
Bahut achhi soch hai aapki Qadeer Ji..
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 09:39:30 PM »
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LOVLY POETRY AAP VAZN AUR BEHR KA KHOOB KHYAL RAKHTE HEIN,ISSI TARH LIKHTE REHNA.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 09:44:25 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kaya baat hai Qadeer ji.... Ma ke perro main jannat... bahoot sahi kaha apne...Ma ki mamta ke agge kuch nahi hai.. bahoot acha lagi apki yah rachna....
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2009, 03:24:26 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on January 14, 2009, 09:39:30 PM
LOVLY POETRY AAP VAZN AUR BEHR KA KHOOB KHYAL RAKHTE HEIN,ISSI TARH LIKHTE REHNA.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Bhaijaan Apne Izzath bakshi is nacheez ko !!Inshallah Likhta raha honga yunhi ap logon ka pyaar milta raha to !!

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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 03:25:57 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 14, 2009, 09:44:25 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kaya baat hai Qadeer ji.... Ma ke perro main jannat... bahoot sahi kaha apne...Ma ki mamta ke agge kuch nahi hai.. bahoot acha lagi apki yah rachna....

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Ji apko ye ghazal achi lagi to samjho meri ghazal ko uska haq mil gaya !! ahesand mand hon apka ke ap ne waqath diya meri ghazal aur isko saraha !!

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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 09:39:26 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 14, 2009, 11:21:28 AM
Nice one Qadeer Ji

Thanks A lot Rajesh Bhai

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 09:40:24 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 14, 2009, 12:52:15 PM
Simply Wonderful... Applause Applause
Bahut achhi soch hai aapki Qadeer Ji..

Thanks  A lot Mahiya Ji apne Is ghazal ko apna waqath diya janab !! ahesan mandh hain apke !!

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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2009, 07:52:25 AM »
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Bohat bohat khoob qadeer....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Ammi ki yaad aa gayee yaar iske continuation me zarur likhuga kuch.
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2009, 07:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 17, 2009, 07:52:25 AM
Bohat bohat khoob qadeer....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Ammi ki yaad aa gayee yaar iske continuation me zarur likhuga kuch.

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Sajid Is Nawazish Ke liye Aur Hame intezaar rahega iske contniuation ka !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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