~ Kahan agaye hai hum ~ by Rahim

by dead heart on June 11, 2013, 09:59:21 PM
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Salaam..

Bahaut kam aisa hota hai kay main society kay kisi issue pe likh pata hoon halake bahaut hai iss dil main jo kagaz par utarna chahta hoon..
Yeh nazm kuch hafte pehle yunhi likh di thi 'jism ki bhook' pe..Main ek resort gaya tha jahan logon ko observe karne kay baad yeh maloom hua kay har koi ek raat ka rishta khoj raha tha..issi par kuch koshish ki hai!


Aas paas yun dekh sochta hoon kis kadar ghir gaye hai hum,
Jism ki khoj main mohobat ko kaise kho chuke hai hum..

Jeene ka matlab sharab ya shabab nahin hota yaaron,
Samander kay kinare hawa ko mehsoos karna bhool gaye hai hum..

Nataki woh guftugu shuru karna unke bistar tak ponchne kay liye,
Ek taj mahal banane ka daur tha aur aj yeh kahan agaye hai hum..

Samander kay kinare aj iss raat ka nasha hawa main mehsoos hai,
Ek taraf log ek dusre ki baahon main hai aur ek taraf tanha hai hum..

Gunhegaron ki iss mehfil se bilkul bhi alag nahin hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apne apse bahaut dukh kay saath puchta hoon,
Kahan the hum ek zamane main aur yeh kahan agaye hai hum..

~..Rahym..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2013, 01:38:57 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai rahim sahab..Logo ko observe kar shabdo me unhe utarne ki koshish achhi hai..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2013, 06:21:02 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai rahim sahab..Logo ko observe kar shabdo me unhe utarne ki koshish achhi hai..happy9
Apka Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2013, 01:23:15 PM »
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sach ko bakhoobi bayaaN kiya hai saaheb aapne bas aage bhi yuNhi mehfil ko roshan karte raheN...
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2013, 01:32:45 PM »
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bilkul sahi kaha aapne Rahim saahb
pta nhi hm hmari maansikta  kahan ja rari?

daad qubul Karen
likhte rahen
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2013, 03:57:02 PM »
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bilkul sahi kaha hai aapne Rahim bhai..

kaha the aur kaha aa gaye hum.. bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2013, 07:54:50 PM »
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bahut khoobi se is sach ko bayaan kiya hai aapne.

Gunhegaron ki iss mehfil se bilkul bhi alag nahin hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apne apse bahaut dukh kay saath puchta hoon,
Kahan the hum ek zamane main aur yeh kahan agaye hai hum..

bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2013, 11:01:50 PM »
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sach ko bakhoobi bayaaN kiya hai saaheb aapne bas aage bhi yuNhi mehfil ko roshan karte raheN...
Bhaaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2013, 11:02:49 PM »
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bilkul sahi kaha aapne Rahim saahb
pta nhi hm hmari maansikta  kahan ja rari?

daad qubul Karen
likhte rahen
Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2013, 11:04:35 PM »
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bilkul sahi kaha hai aapne Rahim bhai..

kaha the aur kaha aa gaye hum.. bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sahab..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2013, 11:05:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoobi se is sach ko bayaan kiya hai aapne.

Gunhegaron ki iss mehfil se bilkul bhi alag nahin hai ‘Khamosh’,
Apne apse bahaut dukh kay saath puchta hoon,
Kahan the hum ek zamane main aur yeh kahan agaye hai hum..

bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Jee..
Khush rahiye!
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