Kamre mea keid ak Masoom:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

deepika_divya

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Kamre mein keid ak masoom ko dekh
Dil mera paseejh utta

Rote rote rote so gai uski ankhe
Ukhe bahe ashko ki koi kadar na kar saka

Ak Maa ne kheid kiya tha usse mausoom ko
Uska kasoor sirf itna tha woh uski kok se janam na le saka

Tarapta raha bukhe peit us keid mea
Uss andhere mea woh apne aap se baatein karta raha

Har chot choti galti pe kar diya jata usse keid
Uska Pita bhi chupchap khusri pe beit tamasha dekta raha

Jab nikala hamne usse bahar , aur pucha uska dard
Na woh hass saka , na dard bayan kar saka

Lipkat kar gale hamse who masoom
Nanhe nanhe askh bahata raha….. bahata raha…


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Talat

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2007, 11:09:31 AM »

Nice one Divs !


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2007, 06:45:21 AM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

bhoot khoob likha hai apne divya ji

n samaj sake nari ko hai kaisee
kahte hai maa-see par hogayee hai mausee

maa ke martee hai bhool tha farj ek baap
le ayaa tha dusree jo maa n ban sekee kabhi
noch kar massomiyat ko kartee thee wo paap

maa banti hai har naree par mamta ko jana hai kisne
maa ban kar bhee farak- do olado me kiya hai kya jisne

maa ke roop ko bete ne fir apnyaa tha
jo usa baap ek or naree ghar me laya tha
wo chahtee to ban sktee the ek naree ablaa
par uske hee karmo ne use shad diya sotela..

netra...


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Pooja

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2007, 05:07:47 AM »

bahoot khoob Divya and Netra ji!!


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deepika_divya

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2007, 06:53:14 AM »

Thank u so much Talat di, Pooja Di & Netrapal Ji..

bahoot khoob likha hai apne Nertrapal Ji


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NETRAPAL

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2007, 09:46:36 AM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

Thank u so much Talat di, Pooja Di & Netrapal Ji..

bahoot khoob likha hai apne Nertrapal Ji

divya ji aap bhoot achaa likhtee hai or aaj jo subject aap ne liyea hai wo wakyee me sharahniy hai aise subject par likhna bada mushkil hota hai par aapne aisa pahale bhee ' jameen ' se jude ek topic pa likha tha wo bhi bhoot acha tha......

aap likhte rahiye mai or meri duae sada aapke saath hai.....

netra...


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deepika_divya

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2007, 04:56:59 AM »

Wonderful & very touching reply..Hats off to u...

wonderful reply Pooja di

sach ahi yea duniyan ka
naari hai jo har rista nibati hai...

kabhi beti aur behan ban tho kabhi patni aur Kabhi Maa ka farz Nibati hai
bokhe bet reh kar bhi ghar pariwaar ka peit bar jati hai

chod kar Maa baap ka ghar kisi aur ke ghar ka diya ban jaati hai
Naari hi hai jo har Rista Dil se nibati hai

Sotela pan ka dosh mein sab ko nahi dungi
par koi koi naari moh maaya mea pad risto se anjani ho jaati hai

bhool jaati hai apna maatrprem, krodh ka chola pehen leti hai
apne bacho de rajkumari ki vesbusha, paraye bache se daas-daasi jaisa vehwhaar karti nazar aati hai

Dekha hai maine apni ankho se , maa hote hue b mausam bache maa ke anchal ko taras jaatein hai.
padne likhne ki umar mea , ghar ka jhadu karkat karte nazar aati hai

Par Maa ka rista sabse bada hot hai
jisne jaani is sabd ki sahi ehmiyat , ussi ki zindgai sab khushi se unchi hoti hai


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Pooja

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Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2007, 03:26:35 PM »

Divya,

Kal apki poem pard kar jo man mai ayya wo likh diya tha, ajj laga ki apki Topic se wo bilkul hatt kar tha, so maine apni poem and netra ji ka reply is post se split kar diya.

Link for Split posts: http://www.yoindia.com/forums/soteli-ma-step-mother-vt24043.html


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deepika_divya

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Re: Kamre mea keid ak Masoom

«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2010, 04:32:04 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 15, 2007, 09:46:36 AM

Main aapki bahoot Bahoot Aabaari hun Netra ji.. Bahoot Bahoot shukriya sarahane ke liye !

Thank you so much !


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