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by bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
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Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2008, 04:23:21 PM »
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Wah! kya baat hai Bekaraar Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2008, 06:54:36 PM »
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Bohat Achche Bekarar ji,.
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2008, 11:01:19 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,




Bahut khoob, Bekraar Ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2008, 05:35:37 AM »
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  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley
Wah Wah Wah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Brother,


Zindagi ki ek bahut badi sachayi se bahut zald ro-bro karwa diya aapne,
pad kar aisa laga jaise apne hi lafzo ko kho diya hamne
kya tarrif karoo kuch alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe...

"Maashaallah Subhaanallah Kya kallam nazar kiya hai"

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2008, 06:06:30 AM »
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bahut hi badiya bekararji...bahut khoob likha hai..

kahene ko toh sab kuj paya hai,
par use jada khoya hai hamne.
bulandi shu toh li hai hamne,
par hogaya hu kamjor mein.
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2008, 07:29:40 AM »
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sanjeev yaar zabardast cheez likh dali tune sach me yaar maza aa gaya har sher favorite hain mera beautiful... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hum to mureed hai teri shayri ke bekarar
Aur tum hame sirf kadardan samjhe ho

                                -SG-
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2008, 07:53:59 AM »
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ek ek sher mein ek kahaani!! nazrein aapki panktiyon se maano hatna hi nahi chaahti ho....aap na dil fir se jeet liya bekarar ji,jub likha aapne ek anmol panne ko janam diya hai...aapki shaayri vaakai kaabel-e-taaref hai,aur aap badhai ke patra.

khoob likha hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2008, 08:40:48 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,




Sanjeev Ji..

Hum kuch kaheinge toh kam rahega, aur kuch nahin kaheinge toh humein gam rahega.. lolzzz... matlab tareef jitni bhi kareinge wo kam rahegi aur agar kuch bhi naa kaha toh yeh toh is beshkimati rachna ke saath naa-insaafi hogi..

Bahut Bahut bahut khoob... Bahut khoobsurati se zindagi ki ek haqiqat ki taraf ishaara kiya hai aapne.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM »
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Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2008, 09:00:17 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..


bahut hi  khoob kaha Mahiya

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2008, 09:07:37 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..

Bahut khoob Mahiya ji,well written.
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2008, 08:56:53 PM »
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ek bahut choti si kaushish hamari bhi..

kuch naapaak irado ki,unhone kar rakhi thee tyaari
badi shaatir hansee thee wo,jise tum muskaan samjhe ho

woh manje hue shikaari , aur main adna sa khilaadi
mere kandhe pe unki bandook ko kya tum mera armaan samjhe ho

jaha pahucha hu main aaj,khud se bekhabar sa hu
aur tum isi ko meri pehchaan samjhe ho

in faislon ki boo to aane lagi thee kub se,
aur tum ho ki hume hi anjaan samjhe ho....
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2008, 07:21:53 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM


ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,





wonderful creation bekarar ji

khaas taur par ye lines kuch jyada hi pasand aayi hamein
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2008, 02:04:12 PM »
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Thanks Jasbir Ji.. and Prateek Ji..
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