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by bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 29, 2008, 02:05:22 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 27, 2008, 08:56:53 PM
ek bahut choti si kaushish hamari bhi..

kuch naapaak irado ki,unhone kar rakhi thee tyaari
badi shaatir hansee thee wo,jise tum muskaan samjhe ho

woh manje hue shikaari , aur main adna sa khilaadi
mere kandhe pe unki bandook ko kya tum mera armaan samjhe ho

jaha pahucha hu main aaj,khud se bekhabar sa hu
aur tum isi ko meri pehchaan samjhe ho

in faislon ki boo to aane lagi thee kub se,
aur tum ho ki hume hi anjaan samjhe ho....



Waah Waah... Bahut Bahut Khoobsurat.. Applause
Choti si koshish bahut bada kamaal dikha gayi Prateek Ji..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: December 30, 2008, 01:21:27 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 29, 2008, 02:05:22 PM

Waah Waah... Bahut Bahut Khoobsurat.. Applause
Choti si koshish bahut bada kamaal dikha gayi Prateek Ji..  Thumbs UP

Shukria Mahiya ji -aapko yeh kaushish theek lagi,mujhe khushi hai.
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«Reply #17 on: December 30, 2008, 02:12:38 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,




bahut accha likha hai aapne sanjeev bhaiya,and
pratik mardia jii, Mahiya jii ... aap sab ne b bahut accha
saat diya hai... good work
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«Reply #18 on: December 30, 2008, 03:14:03 PM »
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Bohat Hi Badhiya Sab Ne Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,/.
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«Reply #19 on: December 31, 2008, 01:16:24 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aap sab ne sanjeevji,
Prateek Mardiaji, Mahiya ji ... aap sab ne b bahut acchi kamyaabi hasil ki hai...kamyaabi ke is thread ko badha ke...clap..clap good work
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 27, 2008, 08:56:53 PM
ek bahut choti si kaushish hamari bhi..

kuch naapaak irado ki,unhone kar rakhi thee tyaari
badi shaatir hansee thee wo,jise tum muskaan samjhe ho

woh manje hue shikaari , aur main adna sa khilaadi
mere kandhe pe unki bandook ko kya tum mera armaan samjhe ho

jaha pahucha hu main aaj,khud se bekhabar sa hu
aur tum isi ko meri pehchaan samjhe ho

in faislon ki boo to aane lagi thee kub se,
aur tum ho ki hume hi anjaan samjhe ho....
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«Reply #20 on: December 31, 2008, 06:52:36 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,



Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah wah wah!!!! kaya baat hai... sahi kaha Mahiya ne.. jitani tareef ki jaaye kam hai.. bahoot khoob... kamaal ki rachna ki hai apne Bekarar ji... maafi chahti hu ki pahle najar nahi gai meri.. dil khush ho gaya!! bahoot khoob!!1
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«Reply #21 on: December 31, 2008, 06:53:22 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..

 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob sath nibhaya hai Mahiya apne... bahoot he acha likha hai...
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«Reply #22 on: December 31, 2008, 06:54:25 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 27, 2008, 08:56:53 PM
ek bahut choti si kaushish hamari bhi..

kuch naapaak irado ki,unhone kar rakhi thee tyaari
badi shaatir hansee thee wo,jise tum muskaan samjhe ho

woh manje hue shikaari , aur main adna sa khilaadi
mere kandhe pe unki bandook ko kya tum mera armaan samjhe ho

jaha pahucha hu main aaj,khud se bekhabar sa hu
aur tum isi ko meri pehchaan samjhe ho

in faislon ki boo to aane lagi thee kub se,
aur tum ho ki hume hi anjaan samjhe ho....


 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Prateek ji... bahoot he acha jawab diya hai apne... dil khush ho gaya ajj apne teeno Fav. ki rachnaye parr kar...
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«Reply #23 on: December 31, 2008, 06:56:36 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..
Good one Mahiya Ji
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«Reply #24 on: January 01, 2009, 03:18:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,




Kya Baat Hai Sanjeev Bro...bahut bahut Khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har ek lafz,par nazarein rukh si jaa rahi thi, bahut khoobsurti se aapne apni baat iss kavita mein dhaali hai..

bahut ache.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: January 01, 2009, 03:21:06 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..

Bahut Khoob Mahiya..aap ne bhi kuch kam na likha..
Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: January 01, 2009, 03:26:00 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 27, 2008, 08:56:53 PM
ek bahut choti si kaushish hamari bhi..

kuch naapaak irado ki,unhone kar rakhi thee tyaari
badi shaatir hansee thee wo,jise tum muskaan samjhe ho

woh manje hue shikaari , aur main adna sa khilaadi
mere kandhe pe unki bandook ko kya tum mera armaan samjhe ho

jaha pahucha hu main aaj,khud se bekhabar sa hu
aur tum isi ko meri pehchaan samjhe ho

in faislon ki boo to aane lagi thee kub se,
aur tum ho ki hume hi anjaan samjhe ho....


Praeekji, Bahut Bahut Khoob..aap sab ki kavitaye ek hi thread mein padh kar maza sa aa gaya..great going. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: January 01, 2009, 03:35:52 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2008, 08:52:20 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi.. Usual Smile

Hai zindagi yahin toh, Ehsaas sa hawaao ka,
Tum isko kyon gumon kaa tufaan samjhe ho..

Ghar basta hai kisika teri saanson ki mehak se,
Ek tum ho ki Saanson ko hi mehmaan samjhe ho..

Nibhaate hai dil se hum, aey dost teri dosti ko,
Kyon dil ke in rishton ko ek ehsaan samjhe ho..

Har shai ki judi himmat, Har Rishte ne thaama hai,
Kaamyaabi pe khud ko kyon balwaan samjhe ho..

Abhi duur bahut hai manzil jaana hai saagar paar,
Do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho..

wah wah bahut acche...
do koodon ko phir kyon lambi udaan samjhe ho... wah jii wah..
Mahiya aapne bahut sunder kavita likha hai.
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«Reply #28 on: January 04, 2009, 12:03:26 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 26, 2008, 03:03:15 PM
Har toofan sah jaaye, wo makan samjhe ho,
har waqt bikhre hansi jisase, wo saman samjhe ho,

mujhse housale ka sabak lene-walon,
bheetar se khokhli hai jise chattan samjhe ho,

manjil pe pahunchate dekha, rahgujar nahi dekhi,
meri kaanton bhari raahon ko, aasan samajhe ho

meri jawani ka makbara hai, masti ke dino ki kabra hai,
jis aaramgaah me baithe ho, jise deewan samjhe ho,

neendon ke aivaz me ye aisho-aaram kharida hai,
meri neend ki dawa hai, jise tum jaam samjhe ho,

bulandi pe panhucha to saath tanhaai-yan thin bas,
aur tum ise meri kamyaabi ki dastaan samjhe ho

ponch lo aansoo, abhi poori zindagi baaqi hai
choti si pareshani ko, sabse bada imtihaan samjhe ho,

tumhaari khata nahi, ye kuch ameeri ka roub hai
matalab-paraston ko bhi tum mehrbaan samajhe ho,

julmo-sitam sahta raha, kuch soch ke "bekarar"
khamosh dekh ke use tum, NADAN samjhe ho,


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«Reply #29 on: January 06, 2009, 06:19:20 PM »
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wah wah sanjeev ji kamal ka likha hai aapne... Applause Applause
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