KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

NETRAPAL

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toot gayaa mera sapnaa
bichad gayaa mera apnaa
toot padaa kaisaa sitaam
chlaa gayaa pyaraa priyatam
usse n mai bichadee hotee
kaash mai satee hotee......

bholee see pyaaree soorat
mamtaa kee thee kabhee moorat
tootaa kahar kisaa kudrat kaa
lagaa abheeshapp vidhwaapan kaa
'kalank' n aaj mai banee hotee
kash mai satee hotee.....

itraatee thee roopmatee mai
badsoorat see baith gayee mai
foot gayee choodee meree
mit gayee bindiyaa meree
chin gayee pyaree see paayal
ho gayee man se mai ghaayal
ye chot roj n mai sahtee
kash mai satee hoteee......

har pal fir bhee jeetee hoo mai
jee kar bhee martee har pal
tan pyaasaa man ghaayal mera
tan kee jwaalaa me jaltee pal pal
har pal jee kar mai n har pal martee
kash mai satee hotee.............

ban gayee sapnaa mai kitno kee
peetee jahar teekhee najaro kee
apno hee se aaj mai naa lutee hotee.
kash mai satee hotee......

netra...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2008, 02:06:30 PM »

yaar aap kya satee hone ki pratha ko badhava de rahe ho is tarah ki kavita likh ke i feel very sorry today.


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Shikha12

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2008, 02:15:40 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on November 05, 2008, 11:26:09 AM

@ Netra Ji..

Har baar ki tarah... Prabhaavshaali..
Bahut khoob tanz kiya hai aapne Widhwa jeevan par.. Applause

Jo aap ki kavita mein chhupe tanz ko samajh kar sabak leinge, woh kisi naari ko yeh sochne par majboor nahin kareinge ki Widhwa jeevan jeene se behtar hota ki woh bhi sati ho jaati..

@ Sajid ji...
Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyon ka section hai Sajid ji.. Usual Smile

Gaur farmaaiye... NaNaNa


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Talat

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2008, 02:22:03 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on November 05, 2008, 11:26:09 AM

Waah Netra Ji...Ek baar phir aapne ek social subject pe qalam uthaaya hai....Mubarak baad qubool karen........Ek vidhwa ke dard ko jo aapne apni qalam se darshaaya hai. behad dukh bara ehsaas dilaata hai.........Bohot Khoob likha hai !! Clapping Smiley


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Sonia01

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2008, 03:34:50 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 02:06:30 PM

yaar aap kya satee hone ki pratha ko badhava de rahe ho is tarah ki kavita likh ke i feel very sorry today.

Why to feel sorry? Aisi pratha abhi b ho raha hai na.
Badawa nahi de rahe hai Netra ji... Kuch mushkile
kuch dard inhe apne kalam mein laye hai.

@
Netra ji,

Aapne bahut hi accha likha hai. Her ek lines mein
dil ro diya tha.

good work keep up jii


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honeyrose

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2008, 03:59:30 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on November 05, 2008, 11:26:09 AM

Wah Netra ji dil ko chou liya hai
aapke kalam ne bohat khoob...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2008, 04:04:40 AM »

aap sab kaa bahut bahut dhanywaad reply ke liye, ye sahee hai kee satee pratha ka virodh hona chahiye parantoo ek vidhwaa kee kya dasha hotee hai samaaj me agar use gor se dekha jaaye to yahee ahasaas hotaa hai kee agar wo satee ho jatee to theek thee
aaj bhee vidhwaa aurte abshakun samjhee jatee hai, pahanne ke liye safed kapde, bina shrangaar kaa jeewan, rundee kee galeee,
aur n janee kya kya....maine vidhwaa kar dard mahsoos kiya kai baar is liye kuch likhne kee khoshish kee hai.....

netra...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2008, 04:20:50 AM »

thanks sonia jee...

netra..


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Pooja

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2008, 04:42:56 AM »

Hamesha ki tarah kamal ka likha hai Netra ji.... bahoot ache shabdo main apne ek vidhawa ka haal bayan kiya hai... Good work..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2008, 04:59:06 AM »

wonderful netra ji Applause


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NETRAPAL

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #10 on: November 06, 2008, 06:11:03 AM »

thanks honey, pooja ji or bhawnaa ji.......

netrapal


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saloni bharani

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #11 on: November 06, 2008, 07:01:42 AM »

it nice poem


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k.shael

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #12 on: November 06, 2008, 07:44:16 AM »

WAH WAH NETRA JI KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI,
UMDA AUR SACHAI PE ADHARIT LAJAWAAB
KALAM PESH KIYA AAPNE..

SACH HAI EK WIDHWA KA GAMM YE DUNIYA
NAHI SAMAJHTI, AUR BILKUL SAHI HAI KI
KAASH ME SATI HOTI... tearyeyed

BY. K.SHAEL


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diya786

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #13 on: November 06, 2008, 07:58:16 AM »

bahut accha likha hai Netra ji
sach hai ki aapki likhi hui kavita mein bahut dard hai
keep up the gud works Clapping Smiley


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NETRAPAL

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Re: KASH.... MAI SATEE HOTEE

«Reply #14 on: November 06, 2008, 11:35:04 AM »

thanks saloni ji, k. saheel ji or diya ji for reply

netra..


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