Kaun hai jo Kandha Dega !!

by abdulqadeer on January 18, 2009, 08:25:52 AM
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Jo bhi tha sub khuch to chin liye tune !!
Bata mujhe aur kya saza dega !!
Eak baar zindagi deke kitni baar marega mujhe !!
Sub thak gaye ab tuhi bata kaun hai jo kandha dega !!

Waqath ki andhi ne mera sara shaher mita diya !!
Ab mai banjara hon aur wo raheman hai kahin na kahin basa dega !!

Tum karte raho nakaam koshishen mujhe doobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Ab meri gurbath pe hassne lagi hai duniya !!
Agar wo josh me agaya to rahemath ka qazana dega !!

Ab majdhar me aahi gaye ho to tofanoo se kya darna Qadeer !!
Agar chini hai ussne fatwar to wohi kinara dega !!

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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2009, 08:31:36 AM »
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subhanallah.........bahut accha likha hai qadeer ji.... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2009, 08:32:43 AM »
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kya hi khoob kaha hai qadeer ji aapne.....har sher apni kahani khood bayan karta hai..par ye do line to yun laga ki meri apni kahani hai..aur kya hi khoobsurat sachchai hai..


Tum karte raho nakaam koshishen mujhe doobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2009, 08:53:50 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on January 18, 2009, 08:31:36 AM
subhanallah.........bahut accha likha hai qadeer ji.... Applause

Shukriya Janab Is Nacheez ki Ghazal ko apne waqath diya aur tareef se nawaza Ahesan mandh hain apke !!

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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2009, 09:10:14 AM »
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kya baat hai qadeerji....

ek banda hi doorse bande ko kandha dega,
jis waqat koi nahin bachege banda,dene kandha,
wo aakhri waqat hoga duniya ka,aur aakhri hoga banda,
us bande ko khud khuda denga kandha.
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2009, 09:25:02 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 18, 2009, 09:10:14 AM
kya baat hai qadeerji....

ek banda hi doorse bande ko kandha dega,
jis waqat koi nahin bachege banda,dene kandha,
wo aakhri waqat hoga duniya ka,aur aakhri hoga banda,
us bande ko khud khuda denga kandha.

Thanks A lot Cara Ji Apne Waqath Diya meri Ghazal Ko !! Aur Apne Bhi Kamaal Likha hai !!

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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2009, 09:43:08 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 18, 2009, 09:40:36 AM
Bohat Khoob Farmaata Qadeer Bhai..Keep It Up.


Apni Barbadiyon Ka Yun Hi Jashn Manate Hai.
Main Aur Tanhaayi Ik Duje Ka Saath Nibhate Hai.


Karke Yun Hi Bayaan Lafzo Main Haal.e.Dil Apna
Bus Aksar Mehfilon Main Logon Ka Dil Behlaate Hai

Shukriya Janab Izzath Afza-e- Ka !! Aur Apne Bhi Mashallah Kamal Likha hai shihab !! Likhte raho !!

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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2009, 10:05:15 AM »
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bahoot khoob Qadeer ji, Bekarar ji, Cara and Shihab
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2009, 10:26:46 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 18, 2009, 10:05:15 AM
bahoot khoob Qadeer ji, Bekarar ji, Cara and Shihab

Thanks  a lot Pooja Ji !!
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2009, 11:39:58 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:32:43 AM
kya hi khoob kaha hai qadeer ji aapne.....har sher apni kahani khood bayan karta hai..par ye do line to yun laga ki meri apni kahani hai..aur kya hi khoobsurat sachchai hai..


Tum karte raho nakaam koshishen mujhe doobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Bahoth Shukriya Janab Apko Hamare Kalam ke Khuch Ashar Bahed Pasand aye !! Ahesand mandh hain apke jo apne hamari Ghazal ko waqath diya !! Bekarar Ji !!

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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2009, 01:29:11 PM »
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Beshaq Qadeer Bhai,.
Wo Rehman Hai, Wo Jahaan Chaahe Basaa Dega,.

Subhan Allah,.
 Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Ye Bhi Post Aapki,.
Allah paak Aapko Bad Nazar Se Bachaaye,.
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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2009, 05:12:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 18, 2009, 08:25:52 AM
Jo bhi tha sub khuch to chin liye tune !!
Bata mujhe aur kya saza dega !!
Eak baar zindagi deke kitni baar marega mujhe !!
Sub thak gaye ab tuhi bata kaun hai jo kandha dega !!

Waqath ki andhi ne mera sara shaher mita diya !!
Ab mai banjara hon aur wo raheman hai kahin na kahin basa dega !!

Tum karte raho nakaam koshishen mujhe doobane ki !!
Mai begunha hon khud samandar mujhe kinara dega !!

Ab meri gurbath pe hassne lagi hai duniya !!
Agar wo josh me agaya to rahemath ka qazana dega !!

Ab majdhar me aahi gaye ho to tofanoo se kya darna Qadeer !!
Agar chini hai ussne fatwar to wohi kinara dega !!

Qadeer Toopchi
From Dubai but An Indian

Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2009, 03:13:50 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 18, 2009, 01:29:11 PM
Beshaq Qadeer Bhai,.
Wo Rehman Hai, Wo Jahaan Chaahe Basaa Dega,.

Subhan Allah,.
 Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai Ye Bhi Post Aapki,.
Allah paak Aapko Bad Nazar Se Bachaaye,.

Tahedil Shukriya Ada karta hon hon apka |Azeem jo meri Ghazaloon ko Hamesha Dad Se nawazte rahete ho !! han allah hum sub ko buri nazar bacha-a- Ameen !!

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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2009, 07:35:43 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 18, 2009, 05:12:58 PM
Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Rajesh ji Apne is nacheez ki ghazal ko waqath diya aur izzath di !!

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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2009, 07:33:09 PM »
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bahut khoob qaader ji,bahut khoob.jaisa bekarar ji ne kaha woh do panktiyaan to khaaskar bahut majboot lagi,behtareen likhte hai aap.
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