Kaya Anarth Rishto Ke Sath Hua Hai....

by Pooja on April 29, 2009, 09:55:29 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2009, 04:50:50 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat aur vastavikta se bhara hua kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne Pooja ji, shayad rishto ka matlab aajke zamane mein koi samajh nahi paata hai, jab ehsaas hota hia tab shayad bahtu der ho chuki hoti hia.
Sach mein ye poem dilko chhu gayi...

Thansk you so much Angel!!!
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«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2009, 04:54:41 PM »
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Welcome di
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«Reply #17 on: May 01, 2009, 04:15:50 AM »
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bahut achaa likha hai aapne pooja ji aaj rishto ke binaa samaaj adhuraa saa lagtaa hai..

soona soona saa jahaa ho gyaa hai
har saksh n jane kaha chalaa gayaa hai
sab hai ek jagah par aaj bhee
par koi idhar khadaa, koi udhar khadaa hooa hai

pahale the ham, ham nahi rahe
ham me se mai raha gayaa hai
kisee or rishtee kee kyaa kahe
bhaayee se bhaayee juda ho gayaa hai

dekho batware kaa aalma
kaisaa vibhatas ho rahaa hai
dhan dolat kee saah batwaaraa
maa baap kee bhee ho rahaa hai.....
kisee ke hissme me pitaa ayaa
kisee ne maa kaa ristaa nibhaayaa
waah re saamaaj riste ke jhagdo me
maa se baap judaa ho gayaa hai..
soonaa soonaa saa ye jaha ho gayaa hai..

netra..
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: May 01, 2009, 04:20:20 AM »
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bahoot khoob Netra ji
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salma786
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«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2009, 04:37:59 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Pooja sis,Kaash ji,Sophi dear n netra ji!
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: May 01, 2009, 04:39:59 AM »
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Thanks Salma!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #21 on: May 01, 2009, 04:31:19 PM »
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Thank u pooja di

Very Very Nice Netralpal JI

Risto ne na samja mujhe
Ristedaaro se kya sikhayat karun

Jinhone na samja mohabbat ki bhasa
Ab dusro kyun kasoorwaar kahun

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«Reply #22 on: May 01, 2009, 04:35:33 PM »
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Tanj main kuch likhne ki soch rahi the... magar vichar baar baar Rishto per aa jaate the kyun ki her baat rishto per he jakar shuru hoti hai aor khatam... so jo man mai ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu:

her rishte main swarth hua hai
kaya anrath rishto ke sath hua hai

pahle seh jaate kuch bhi rishto ke khatir
wahin rishta ajj jaan ka janjaal hua hai

adar se nibhaye jaate the rishte kabhi
ajj her ek rishte ka bas anaadar hua hai

bache hue jawan, bhoole apne he ma-baap ko
Pati-patani ke rishte main bhi swaang hua hai

bhai behno main kon hai upper kon hai niche
ek dooje se upper jaane ki horr main, baar baar apmaan hua hai

dost na raha dost ab, sheli na rahi sehali
swarth ka jahan dekhon, uncha naam hua hai

her rishta ab sirf ek swarth hua
kaya yah anarth rishto ke sath hua hai.....



Wah wah... bahut acha likha hai aapne.... Last 4 line toh bahut hi
sahi likha aapne. daad hazir hai
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Roja
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«Reply #23 on: May 01, 2009, 04:38:04 PM »
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Bahoot sach aur khoob likha hai Pooja Di...

Very nice Kaash Ji

Riste Insaan se kya kuch nahi karate
Apne bhi ap apno ka saath nahi de paate hai

Kya kahe gairo se ,woh tho paraye hai
Apno k Dil mea Nafrat b gair hi bar jaate hai

kahan gaye woh di jab sang haste khelte sab
Aaj Wahin Riste khoon k ansoo  rulate hai

Paiso ki katir bhai bahi nahi rehta ab
MAA BAAP ko b yea paiso k riste juda kar jaate hai

Wah wah kya khoob likha Sophi... Thumbs UP
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Roja
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«Reply #24 on: May 01, 2009, 04:39:07 PM »
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bahut achaa likha hai aapne pooja ji aaj rishto ke binaa samaaj adhuraa saa lagtaa hai..

soona soona saa jahaa ho gyaa hai
har saksh n jane kaha chalaa gayaa hai
sab hai ek jagah par aaj bhee
par koi idhar khadaa, koi udhar khadaa hooa hai

pahale the ham, ham nahi rahe
ham me se mai raha gayaa hai
kisee or rishtee kee kyaa kahe
bhaayee se bhaayee juda ho gayaa hai

dekho batware kaa aalma
kaisaa vibhatas ho rahaa hai
dhan dolat kee saah batwaaraa
maa baap kee bhee ho rahaa hai.....
kisee ke hissme me pitaa ayaa
kisee ne maa kaa ristaa nibhaayaa
waah re saamaaj riste ke jhagdo me
maa se baap judaa ho gayaa hai..
soonaa soonaa saa ye jaha ho gayaa hai..

netra..


Bahut khoob... Netra ji  Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #25 on: May 01, 2009, 04:41:18 PM »
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Wah wah kya khoob likha Sophi... Thumbs UP

Thanks Roja sweetz!
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: May 05, 2009, 05:52:48 PM »
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Thank u pooja di

Very Very Nice Netralpal JI

Risto ne na samja mujhe
Ristedaaro se kya sikhayat karun

Jinhone na samja mohabbat ki bhasa
Ab dusro kyun kasoorwaar kahun



Nice lines Sophi!!!
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«Reply #27 on: May 05, 2009, 05:53:18 PM »
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Wah wah... bahut acha likha hai aapne.... Last 4 line toh bahut hi
sahi likha aapne. daad hazir hai



Thank You so Much Roja dear!!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2009, 01:01:34 PM »
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ATI SUNDER VYANG SE OUT-PROT RACHNA HAI AAPKI....
MANAV MASTISHK KO JHAKJHOR KAR SOCHNE PAR MAJBOOR KARTI HAI...
SAB KUCHH JANTE HUYE BHI ANJAAN HAIN HUM SAB......
SWARTH NE HAME GUNGA-BEHRA-ANDHA SABHI GUNO SE ALANKRAT KAR DIYA HAI...
Aapki ye rachna n jane kitne dilo ko jhankrat kar jagaye....
Aapka ye prayaas prasansniya hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Arth(money)k lobh mai badla rishto ka arth(meaning)
Ab rishto ka hoga aader,sochna hai vyarth(meaningless)
Ye mere-tere k chkkar mai rishto k sath hua Anarth
Ye rachna padhkar koi tou samjhega rishto ka sahi ARTH


Tanj main kuch likhne ki soch rahi the... magar vichar baar baar Rishto per aa jaate the kyun ki her baat rishto per he jakar shuru hoti hai aor khatam... so jo man mai ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu:

her rishte main swarth hua hai
kaya anrath rishto ke sath hua hai

pahle seh jaate kuch bhi rishto ke khatir
wahin rishta ajj jaan ka janjaal hua hai

adar se nibhaye jaate the rishte kabhi
ajj her ek rishte ka bas anaadar hua hai

bache hue jawan, bhoole apne he ma-baap ko
Pati-patani ke rishte main bhi swaang hua hai

bhai behno main kon hai upper kon hai niche
ek dooje se upper jaane ki horr main, baar baar apmaan hua hai

dost na raha dost ab, sheli na rahi sehali
swarth ka jahan dekhon, uncha naam hua hai

her rishta ab sirf ek swarth hua
kaya yah anarth rishto ke sath hua hai.....

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Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: August 11, 2009, 04:45:13 PM »
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ATI SUNDER VYANG SE OUT-PROT RACHNA HAI AAPKI....
MANAV MASTISHK KO JHAKJHOR KAR SOCHNE PAR MAJBOOR KARTI HAI...
SAB KUCHH JANTE HUYE BHI ANJAAN HAIN HUM SAB......
SWARTH NE HAME GUNGA-BEHRA-ANDHA SABHI GUNO SE ALANKRAT KAR DIYA HAI...
Aapki ye rachna n jane kitne dilo ko jhankrat kar jagaye....
Aapka ye prayaas prasansniya hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Arth(money)k lobh mai badla rishto ka arth(meaning)
Ab rishto ka hoga aader,sochna hai vyarth(meaningless)
Ye mere-tere k chkkar mai rishto k sath hua Anarth
Ye rachna padhkar koi tou samjhega rishto ka sahi ARTH



 Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot khoob smardia ji...char line main apne sab likh diya... apko parr kar hamesha he bahoot acha laga hai!!

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