Khanjar Kiska Tha,.

by Azeem on September 05, 2009, 08:01:17 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 05, 2009, 09:42:53 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 05, 2009, 09:34:57 AM
bahut achche shally and azeem bhai

nishaan dekhe mere lahoo k apne ashqon main
mera qatil oonhe dekh zaar zaar roya
supurde -khaq ho gaye jab hum....
khaq le kar apne haathon main baar baar roya





Zindagi Bhar JO Sabke Aansuon Ka Sabab Banaa,.
Uske Ek Khatre Ko Dekh, Tum Taras Khaa Gaye,.

Hay, Sahil, Tum Phirse Dhokaa Khaa Gaye,.
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«Reply #16 on: September 05, 2009, 01:59:57 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 05, 2009, 09:42:53 AM




Zindagi Bhar JO Sabke Aansuon Ka Sabab Banaa,.
Uske Ek Khatre Ko Dekh, Tum Taras Khaa Gaye,.

Hay, Sahil, Tum Phirse Dhokaa Khaa Gaye,.



dhoka khana aur kha k muskuraana
ab toh meri aadat main shamil ho gaya
koi khush hai yeh soch k kii dhoke main hai saahil
uski hansi k jashn main saahil shamil ho gaya
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«Reply #17 on: September 09, 2009, 04:47:50 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Azeem bhai mindblowing creation,beautiful lines by Saahil ji and Shally ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #18 on: September 09, 2009, 05:19:12 AM »
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Shukriya Sahil & Madhu Dear..

Na u naraz rehkar tadpa mujhe dilbar..
Isse behtar hai khanzar se mere sinne pe waar kar de!!!


Shally.
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«Reply #19 on: September 09, 2009, 07:33:08 AM »
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Subhan Allah Azeem bahoth qoob , aur sub ne bhi le jawab likha hai !! Meri Eak ghazal ka matla aur eak ashar nazar karta hon !!

Gham Beshumar hai magar Jina hoga !!
Zaher ko Bhi Imrit Samjh Kar Pina hoga !!

Zakhm Khaye hain Pitt pe Beshumar maine !!
Abki Baar Teri Talwar aur Mera Sina Hoga !!

.......Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #20 on: September 09, 2009, 07:49:05 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji...Aur Shukriya Sarahne ke liye..!!!

Khanzar tera aur sinna mera hoga,
Nafrat kar laakh mujhse,ek din ishq ka pyala to
tujhe pinna hoga..

Shally.
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«Reply #21 on: September 09, 2009, 08:16:09 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on September 09, 2009, 07:49:05 AM
Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji...Aur Shukriya Sarahne ke liye..!!!

Khanzar tera aur sinna mera hoga,
Nafrat kar laakh mujhse,ek din ishq ka pyala to
tujhe pinna hoga..

Shally.

Shukriya Shally Ji , Bahoth Qoob , Apki tarz per ,

Tapti Ret Me binj bo ke kaheti ho Shally !!
Ke pholon ko Isse Jaga Khilna Hoga !!
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«Reply #22 on: September 09, 2009, 08:22:48 AM »
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Shukriya Janab Aur Bahut Khoob!!!!

Khilenge phool ek din mere zhakhmi sinne pe,
Ye meri wafa ka teri bewafayi se wada raha..

Shally.
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«Reply #23 on: September 09, 2009, 08:30:10 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on September 09, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Shukriya Janab Aur Bahut Khoob!!!!

Khilenge phool ek din mere zhakhmi sinne pe,
Ye meri wafa ka teri bewafayi se wada raha..

Shally.

Bahoth Qoob , Aur Shukriya, Magar Kab Khilenge Phool , he he !!

Mila Na Sukoon Mujhe Mai Umr Bhar Tadapta Raha !!
Muddath Tak Mai Khud Apne Aap Se Ladta Raha !!

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #24 on: September 09, 2009, 08:33:58 AM »
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Shukriya Aur Wah Bahut khoob!!!

Jab Jab Kiya Tujhe Bhoolne Ka Irada..
Dil Na Sirf Duniya Se Nahi MujhSe Bhi Narazgi zahir ki!!!

Shally.
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«Reply #25 on: September 09, 2009, 08:47:44 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on September 09, 2009, 08:33:58 AM
Shukriya Aur Wah Bahut khoob!!!

Jab Jab Kiya Tujhe Bhoolne Ka Irada..
Dil Na Sirf Duniya Se Mujh Se Bhi Narazgi zahir ki!!!

Shally.

Shukriya , Aur bahot Qoob !!

Tere Hijr Me, Mai Ashqon Ke Moti Piroya !!
Muddath Howi Mujhe, Mai Na Jaga Na Soya !!
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«Reply #26 on: September 09, 2009, 09:06:16 AM »
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Shukriya aur Bahut Bhadiya!!!

Mudatt se ek talash hai inn aankhon ko,
Shayad ye didaar-e-yaar ko pyaasi hai bahut..

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: September 09, 2009, 09:29:17 AM »
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Uthta Hai Aaj Bhi Dhuaan Mere Ghar Se "Doston,.
Maine Bas Itna Chaaha, Ke Unke Ghar Ujala Ho,.
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«Reply #28 on: September 09, 2009, 09:30:02 AM »
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...bahut hi khoob likha hai Azeem bhai, Saahil aur Shael...kuchh sikhne ko bhi mil gaya hame...good going...
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«Reply #29 on: September 10, 2009, 06:52:45 AM »
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Shukriya,.
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