Khelta hua nahi.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on January 29, 2009, 10:21:38 PM
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Jo likh raha hu shayed koi samaj paye na samaj paaye, agar na samaj paya to meri kalam ki hi galti hogi.......


Lafzo se khelta hua nahi
Lafzo ko jhelta hua shayer hu

Kisi daal pe bhaitha hua ullu nahi
Dard se sari raat jaga hua shayer hu

Shayri karna meri fitrat nahi aadat nahi
Sach kehne pe majboor hu, bas isiliye shayer hu

Ghatiya sher ghatiya rishte ho tumko mubarak
GHAYEL rahe zinda bas isiliye main shayer hu

               -Sajid Ghayel-

 
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2009, 02:10:27 AM »
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gayel ji......kya baat hai....

lafzo se khelta hua nahi,
har lafzo ko apnata hua shayer hun.
jo bhi lafz milte hai zindagi mein mujhe,
har lafzo ko seene se lagata,wo shayer hun.

kabhi milti hai "khushi",toh kabhi "ruswai" apnata hun mae,
kabhi hota hai kis ka "saath"toh kabhi "tanhai"apnata hun mae.
lafzo ko majaak nahin,lafzo ko zindagi ka raaz samajhta,wo shayer hun mae.
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2009, 08:52:39 AM »
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Ghayel jee acha hai aap shayar hai...bahaut kamal ka likte aye hai aur aaj bhi kamal ka likha hai...maza agaya...bahaut khoob!!!


kisi reet ko na man ne wala shayar hun,
kisi se na darr ke muun pe tokne wala shayar hun,
khelta hoon lavzon se jiss tarha khela tha usne humare dil se,
logon ko lavzon ki gherai main uttarne wala shayar hun...
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2009, 08:56:00 AM »
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very very good poetry ghayal and good one cara and good good dead heart
is there any vaccany for a friendship, i need it
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2009, 08:58:26 AM »
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thnx KING jee and dnt worry..ill be ur frend
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 03:30:06 PM »
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gud work sajid ji.......................nice 1
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2009, 03:40:59 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne her ek line main aapka dil ka dard bayan hua hai. one more Good work from u Sajid ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 04:17:19 AM »
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Wah Wah ghayel Acha likha , magar is ghazar me kafi inqlab lagta hai ghayel sahab ,kya ghayel sahab itna badiya tanz kis liye mere bhai , ab mai samjha tere shayar hone ka matlab , alfaz ko tone apni zaban bana rakhi , !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2009, 05:28:29 AM »
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hmmm.....kya baat hai sajid ji...aap jo bhi hai jaise bhi hai maan na padega ke aap bahut hi acche shayer hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 10:53:40 AM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Sajid Ji aapne...bade achche Shayar hain aap..

Good replies Cara Ji and Heart
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 10:59:22 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wonderfull creation Sajid ji bohat achcha likha hai aapne
aapki har shayari hamesha  bohat khoobsurat hoti hai..... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 01:03:41 PM »
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Nawazish karam dosto jo mere kalam ko aapne itni izzat bakshi......
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2009, 01:07:21 PM »
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Bohat Achche Sajid Bhai, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2009, 02:48:54 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 29, 2009, 10:21:38 PM
Jo likh raha hu shayed koi samaj paye na samaj paaye, agar na samaj paya to meri kalam ki hi galti hogi.......


Lafzo se khelta hua nahi
Lafzo ko jhelta hua shayer hu

Kisi daal pe bhaitha hua ullu nahi
Dard se sari raat jaga hua shayer hu

Shayri karna meri fitrat nahi aadat nahi
Sach kehne pe majboor hu, bas isiliye shayer hu

Ghatiya sher ghatiya rishte ho tumko mubarak
GHAYEL rahe zinda bas isiliye main shayer hu

               -Sajid Ghayel-

 
Bhaut Khoob Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2009, 06:42:51 AM »
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Shukriya Celmira jee...
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