*Khone Lage Hai*

by Roja on January 08, 2009, 04:25:32 PM
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Hadse zindagi mein ab aise bhi hone lage hai
Baap kandhe per laash beton ki tone lage hai..

Vo zinda tha toh nazar bhi na ut.ti thi kisi ki
Mer gaya toh laash pe uski saikadon rone lage hai..

Emaan ki zameen kar ke banjer haiy ri dunia
Fasal beimani ki hum aaj bone lage hai..

Hamari badnasibi ke saye hamara peecha nahi chodte
Hum jis rah chale wo raste khone lage hai..

Vo hai ki dekhte haal-e-dil hamara muskura rahe
Hum hai ki dil ke zakham ko ashkon se dhone lage hai..
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 05:33:55 PM »
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kaha thee tum isi mehfil ke liye ghayel taras raha tha sab bore ho gaye the mere ghatiya sher sun sun ke beautiful sher roja beautiful marhaba specially the 2nd sher hai kaleja cheer ke nikal gaye tumhare lafz. God bless your poetry. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 05:38:07 PM »
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...bahut hi sahi kaha hai Sajid...sahi mein dil ko chhu gayi...specially the 3rd n 4th line were awesome...keep writing...
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 05:40:03 PM »
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...apne maa-baap ke liye kuchh na kar paaye jo,
woh kisiki chahat mein apni palke bhigone lage hai,
jo sapne dekhe the unhone kabhi hamare liye,
woh aaj unki aankhon mein hi gehri neend sone lage hai...
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2009, 08:19:42 PM »
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bahaut acha likha hai apne roja jee...JHL jee apne bhi acha likha hai...

jo the pake musalman woh aaj sharab peene lage hai,
jo the humare dildar woh aaj hume rulane lage hai,
humne kabhi nahin socha tha ke woh ek bewaffa niklegi,
jo seete the humare zakmon ko woh aaj kisi aur ke dil main rehne lage hai...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2009, 08:26:38 PM »
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...thanks DH...aakhir kisine to saraha...good one too dude...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2009, 11:21:54 PM »
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Very nice presentation Roja Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2009, 05:21:48 AM »
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Kya Kahene is ghazal ke !! koi misal hi nahi hai jo de sakoon !!subhan allah !!

ab unke zulam ki inteha to dekho qadeer !!
hamre qoon se apne daaq dhone lage hain !!
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2009, 02:45:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah Roja umda likha hai dear... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2009, 08:29:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 10, 2009, 05:21:48 AM
Kya Kahene is ghazal ke !! koi misal hi nahi hai jo de sakoon !!subhan allah !!

ab unke zulam ki inteha to dekho qadeer !!
hamre qoon se apne daaq dhone lage hain !!



wah wah...bahaut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2009, 09:44:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 10, 2009, 05:21:48 AM
Kya Kahene is ghazal ke !! koi misal hi nahi hai jo de sakoon !!subhan allah !!

ab unke zulam ki inteha to dekho qadeer !!
hamre qoon se apne daaq dhone lage hain !!


Nice lines Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 04:44:06 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah ajj to ek se barr kar ek Kavita padne ko mil rahi hai... dil khush ho gaya... bahoot khoob Roja!!
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 05:13:36 PM »
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Thank you JHL, Rajesh ji, Honey dear,
Pooja didi, Abdul ji, ...
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2009, 07:33:12 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 08, 2009, 04:25:32 PM
Hadse zindagi mein ab aise bhi hone lage hai
Baap kandhe per laash beton ki tone lage hai..

Vo zinda tha toh nazar bhi na ut.ti thi kisi ki
Mer gaya toh laash pe uski saikadon rone lage hai..

Emaan ki zameen kar ke banzer haiy ri dunia
Fasal beimani ki hum aaj bone lage hai..

Hamari badnasibi ke saye hamara peecha nahi chodte
Hum jis rah chale wo raste khone lage hai..

Vo hai ki dekhte haal-e-dil hamara muskura rahe
Hum hai ki dil ke zakham ko ashkon se dhone lage hai..


GRAET ROJA DI
AAPNE BAHT HI ACCHA LIKHA HAI BAHUT SACHAI HAI ISMEIN
KEEP GOING Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 07:36:46 AM »
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Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on January 08, 2009, 05:40:03 PM
...apne maa-baap ke liye kuchh na kar paaye jo,
woh kisiki chahat mein apni palke bhigone lage hai,
jo sapne dekhe the unhone kabhi hamare liye,
woh aaj unki aankhon mein hi gehri neend sone lage hai...


Aapne bhi khoob likha hai JHL Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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