*Khone Lage Hai* -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Roja

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«Reply #15 on: January 14, 2009, 07:55:41 AM »

Quote from: diya786 on January 14, 2009, 07:33:12 AM

GRAET ROJA DI
AAPNE BAHT HI ACCHA LIKHA HAI BAHUT SACHAI HAI ISMEIN
KEEP GOING Applause

Thanks Diya..


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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #16 on: January 18, 2009, 08:02:15 AM »

bahoot umda likha hai roja ....bahoot sunder


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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #17 on: January 22, 2009, 01:39:33 PM »

Quote from: Roja on January 08, 2009, 04:25:32 PM

Hadse zindagi mein ab aise bhi hone lage hai
Baap kandhe per laash beton ki tone lage hai..

Vo zinda tha toh nazar bhi na ut.ti thi kisi ki
Mer gaya toh laash pe uski saikadon rone lage hai..

Emaan ki zameen kar ke banzer haiy ri dunia
Fasal beimani ki hum aaj bone lage hai..

Hamari badnasibi ke saye hamara peecha nahi chodte
Hum jis rah chale wo raste khone lage hai..

Vo hai ki dekhte haal-e-dil hamara muskura rahe
Hum hai ki dil ke zakham ko ashkon se dhone lage hai..

Bohot bohot Khoob Roja ..ek zabardast peshkash Applause

Nice contributions JHL, Heart, Qadeer Ji


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Roja

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #18 on: January 22, 2009, 03:49:09 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 08, 2009, 05:33:55 PM

kaha thee tum isi mehfil ke liye ghayel taras raha tha sab bore ho gaye the mere ghatiya sher sun sun ke beautiful sher roja beautiful marhaba specially the 2nd sher hai kaleja cheer ke nikal gaye tumhare lafz. God bless your poetry.

Bahut bahut shukriya Sajid ji... aapne mera likha pasand kiya
aur daad diya. Thank you very much


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Just_Hate_Love

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #19 on: February 12, 2009, 01:14:06 PM »

...thanks a lot Roja and Celmira for appreciation...


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Roja

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #20 on: February 15, 2009, 06:04:44 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:02:15 AM

bahoot umda likha hai roja ....bahoot sunder

Thank you Sanjeev ji


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Roja

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #21 on: July 08, 2009, 03:23:19 PM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on January 14, 2009, 07:33:12 AM

GRAET ROJA DI
AAPNE BAHT HI ACCHA LIKHA HAI BAHUT SACHAI HAI ISMEIN
KEEP GOING Applause

Thanks Kashish ji


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MHussain

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 03:32:33 PM »

Ms. Roja Mixture of subjects seen in your work. Good job
Banzer is 'Banjar' correct it.


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Roja

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 03:38:57 PM »

Quote from: MHussain on July 08, 2009, 03:32:33 PM

Ms. Roja Mixture of subjects seen in your work. Good job
Banzer is 'Banjar' correct it.

Thanks for yr comment Hussain ji... (Yap I corrected )


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MHussain

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 03:59:05 PM »

Thank you Ms.


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Roja

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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2009, 04:11:17 PM »

Quote from: MHussain on July 08, 2009, 03:59:05 PM

Thank you Ms.

Naam se keh sakte ho Hussain ji


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Re: *Khone Lage Hai*

«Reply #26 on: July 10, 2009, 12:16:29 AM »

Okay Ms. Roja


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