Khuda Bolta Hai (By Songwriter_123)

by songwriter_123 on January 30, 2010, 06:00:36 AM
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“  Khuda Bolta Hai “


Main manzil bhi hu , Main kinaara bhi
Main saathi  bhi hu , Main sahaara bhi
Mere darr pe jo aaya ,woh mera ho gaya
Mujhe dil mein jisne basaya,main uska ho gaya

Kyu dekhte ho tum mujhe idhar udhar
Kyu dhundte ho tum mujhe yaha waha

Main to hoon ,Saagar ki leheron mein
Baarish ki boondon mein,Phoolon ki khusbu mein

Phir bhi agar tujhe main na miloon
Toh bus aankhein band karna aur dil se karna mujhe yaad

Main doonga tere har sawaal ka jawaab
Main lauga har khushi ko tere pass

Bus guzaarish hai tujhse ,ki do pal mujhe de dena
Kyuki main akela hoon,main akela hoon
Aur mujhe saara jagg hai dekhna

Composed By Aamit
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 06:06:06 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Amit ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent.keep it up. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 06:49:55 AM »
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Kamaal ki creation hai Amit ji. No doubt bahut effective, complete, excellent  poem hai ye aapki. Iske liye daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 10:34:04 AM »
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Thanks for liking it friends Usual Smile .......
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 10:38:42 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob AMit ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 10:43:54 AM »
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Well said
amit ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 10:46:46 AM »
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thanks sophie and ehsaas ......

Just wanna knw what wass d best part u guys like abt this poem Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 10:47:59 AM »
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Main manzil bhi hu , Main kinaara bhi
Main saathi  bhi hu , Main sahaara bhi
Mere darr pe jo aaya ,woh mera ho gaya
Mujhe dil mein jisne basaya,main uska ho gaya

I liked this one
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2010, 10:54:32 AM »
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mindblowing amit ji..... icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley   Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2010, 12:11:53 PM »
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thanks sophi for telling it , even i like the first stanza and last stanza too....

Really grateful to others friends too who have read my poem and liked it

ThNK U
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 12:07:23 PM »
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awaiting for other friends resposes that which part they like most abt this poem.......

Thnks kaash and friends .........

Aamit
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 12:18:29 PM »
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Quote from: songwriter_123 on January 30, 2010, 06:00:36 AM
“  Khuda Bolta Hai “


Main manzil bhi hu , Main kinaara bhi
Main saathi  bhi hu , Main sahaara bhi
Mere darr pe jo aaya ,woh mera ho gaya
Mujhe dil mein jisne basaya,main uska ho gaya

Kyu dekhte ho tum mujhe idhar udhar
Kyu dhundte ho tum mujhe yaha waha

Main to hoon ,Saagar ki leheron mein
Baarish ki boondon mein,Phoolon ki khusbu mein

Phir bhi agar tujhe main na miloon
Toh bus aankhein band karna aur dil se karna mujhe yaad

Main doonga tere har sawaal ka jawaab
Main lauga har khushi ko tere pass

Bus guzaarish hai tujhse ,ki do pal mujhe de dena
Kyuki main akela hoon,main akela hoon
Aur mujhe saara jagg hai dekhna

Composed By Aamit

Awesome!!! well said!! excellent!! Really Nice....Amit Ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2010, 12:22:27 PM »
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thanks for liking it dp ji .....i thought u will  not respond , but really nice to hav a nice reply


thank u
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2010, 12:45:26 PM »
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Amit Ji achchhi rachna ko achchha kahna main kabhi nahin bhulta...........
"I live in reality and senses"
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2010, 02:13:52 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Amit Ji Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
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