...KHUMAAR JOOTO.N KAA

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Chadha awaam pe kaisa khumaar jooto.n  ka ,
Ki hai muza'hira ab baar-baar jooto.n  ka

Hadaf jo bun gaya  bus eik bar jooto.n ka ,
Bana  sada  ke liye  Ishtihar  jooto.n ka

Ajeeb  thhee  teri eejaad  Muntazir  Zaidi ,
Palak jhapakte Chadhaaya bazaar jooto.n ka

Watan ko bech rahe hai.n jo rahbaraan-e-watan,
Gale mei.n daalo zara unnke haar jooto.n ka

Bithha ke unnko Gadho.n per,Siyaah munh karke,
Ghumaao gaao.n-shaher, Daalo haar jooto.n ka

Talab kisee ko hai bus Teen-Chaar jooto.n ki,
Hai mustaheq koi  lekin Hazaar  jooto.n  ka

Dikhe hain jub bhi ye Manhoos chehre Khabro.n mei.n,
Khayaal aaye hai Be-akhtiyaar  jooto.n ka

Sahi nishaana lagaao ki hai.n  bahut  shaatir,
Badee safaai se bachte hai.n waar jooto.n ka
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2011, 06:52:52 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Siddique Saheb!!!

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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2011, 08:27:31 AM »
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Chadha awaam pe kaisa khumaar jooto.n  ka ,
Ki hai muza'hira ab baar-baar jooto.n  ka

Hadaf jo bun gaya  bus eik bar jooto.n ka ,
Bana  sada  ke liye  Ishtihar  jooto.n ka

Ajeeb  thhee  teri eejaad  Muntazir  Zaidi ,
Palak jhapakte Chadhaaya bazaar jooto.n ka

Watan ko bech rahe hai.n jo rahbaraan-e-watan,
Gale mei.n daalo zara unnke haar jooto.n ka

Bithha ke unnko Gadho.n per,Siyaah munh karke,
Ghumaao gaao.n-shaher, Daalo haar jooto.n ka

Talab kisee ko hai bus Teen-Chaar jooto.n ki,
Hai mustaheq koi  lekin Hazaar  jooto.n  ka

Dikhe hain jub bhi ye Manhoos chehre Khabro.n mei.n,
Khayaal aaye hai Be-akhtiyaar  jooto.n ka

Sahi nishaana lagaao ki hai.n  bahut  shaatir,
Badee safaai se bachte hai.n waar jooto.n ka
 




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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2011, 12:02:48 PM »
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 Khwaish ji,Zarra nawaazi ke liye Shukriya.Hasan

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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2011, 03:02:07 PM »
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 Bahut Bahut Shukriya,Khujli ji.Hasan
 
 


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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2012, 10:51:41 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya , Qalb ji.
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2012, 11:03:48 AM »
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Bhai jaan pataa naheen ye khumar jootoN ka hamse padhne se kaise choot gayaa. khair aaj khushqismatee se padhaa mazaa aa gayaa dheron daaad aur mubarakbaad aap khush rahe.
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2012, 07:34:45 AM »
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Hasan sb, ye joote to kaheen zyadah fauladi aur karamati nikle....kya qahar burpa kiya hai aapke in jooton ne..beshak - 'Ajeeb  thhee  teri eejaad  Muntazir  Zaidi ,
Palak jhapakte Chadhaaya bazaar jooto.n ka!

Meri kya bisaat jo Aaftaab ko raushni dikhaun, alfaaz nahi hain aapki tareef ko...bahut pahle se qaayal thi main aapki is qaabliyat ki..aur ab in jooton ki maar ne to bilkul pukhta kar dia!

meri dili Mubarakbaad aur dheron daad...khuda aapko hamesha achchha rakhe!

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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2012, 08:39:52 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
miss kar gaya ye post.
shuru shuru ki baat hai..
aaj hi dekha..us samay to wah wah likhna bhi nahi aata tha..
matla aur maqta..laajavaab
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2012, 06:10:25 PM »
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Hasan sb, ye joote to kaheen zyadah fauladi aur karamati nikle....kya qahar burpa kiya hai aapke in jooton ne..beshak - 'Ajeeb  thhee  teri eejaad  Muntazir  Zaidi ,
Palak jhapakte Chadhaaya bazaar jooto.n ka!

Meri kya bisaat jo Aaftaab ko raushni dikhaun, alfaaz nahi hain aapki tareef ko...bahut pahle se qaayal thi main aapki is qaabliyat ki..aur ab in jooton ki maar ne to bilkul pukhta kar dia!

meri dili Mubarakbaad aur dheron daad...khuda aapko hamesha achchha rakhe!


Bhai shara saheb.aapka bahut shukriya ki aap ne waqt diya. Lekin sharmindagi bhi mahsoos kar raha hoon.Bhai hum sub apne apne andaz mein izhaar e khayal karte hain.choonki eik hi mouzoo tha is liye mujhe bhi ye kalaam yaad aa gaya aur aapse share karne ko jee chaaha.eik baar phir aap ka shukriya.
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 10:32:14 AM »
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Hasan sb adaab, muaafi chahoongi..magar maieN  ek baat kahna chahti hooN  ke jooton ki maar se gadhe ko insaan banne ki baat toh suni thi magar jooton ki maar se shara bahan ko shara bhai bante abhi abhi dekha hai....ab dekheN aage aur kya kya hota hai?

baharhaal jo bhi ho Aapke fan koi jawaab nahi..main ek ek kar aapke saare posts padh rahi hooN..aur mere zahan se Meer, momin, gahlib, Faiz-o-faraz sab dheere dheere dhuNdhlaate jaa rahe haiN aur un sab ke oopar janaab Hasan ghaalib hote jaa raheN haiN....Yoindia ki behad shukraguzaar hooN ke usne aap jaisi shakhsiyat se roobaroo hone ka mauqa diya..aur aapko itni umda poetry yahaaN par humse share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukria!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 11:20:39 AM »
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Hasan sb adaab, muaafi chahoongi..magar maieN  ek baat kahna chahti hooN  ke jooton ki maar se gadhe ko insaan banne ki baat toh suni thi magar jooton ki maar se shara bahan ko shara bhai bante abhi abhi dekha hai....ab dekheN aage aur kya kya hota hai?

baharhaal jo bhi ho Aapke fan koi jawaab nahi..main ek ek kar aapke saare posts padh rahi hooN..aur mere zahan se Meer, momin, gahlib, Faiz-o-faraz sab dheere dheere dhuNdhlaate jaa rahe haiN aur un sab ke oopar janaab Hasan ghaalib hote jaa raheN haiN....Yoindia ki behad shukraguzaar hooN ke usne aap jaisi shakhsiyat se roobaroo hone ka mauqa diya..aur aapko itni umda poetry yahaaN par humse share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukria!!
Mohtarma ,  bahut  sahi  farmaya  . Waqai yeh ghalti to ho gai .Lekin kya karoon ,Is web per bahut se aise naam hain jinse yeh pata nahi chal paata ki woh mohtaram hain ya mohtarma . kabhi tajassus mein agar profile khol kar dekhiye to bahuton ke gender main kuchh darj nahi hota .  Iska koi ghalat interpretation lene ke bajai yeh behtar samajhta hoon ki naam ke aage " jee " likh diya jai jo dono cases mein chal jaata hai . Yahi main bhi karta hoon . Haan aapke case mein chook ho gai aur 'Jee' ke bajai Bhai likh diya . Baharhaal , aap bhi lagta hai koi mouqa nahi chookti hain .Doosra para bhi aapki intahai aalazarfi ka mazhar hai .Waise achha laga aapka jawaab parhke.bahut duaaein.

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