Kinare par aaker......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 31, 2009, 07:24:06 AM
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Kabhi kabhi hum jis khushi ki talash me zindagi guzar dete hain woh pass hote huye bhi hum use dekh nahi pate. Jis pyaar ki aarzoo karte hain woh pyaar jab milta bhi hain to use pehchaan nahi pate. Bas isi soch ko dhiyaan me rakhkar ek mamuli kalam likha hain, ummeed hain aapko pasand aaye........

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker

Jaise  mangti ho ab bhi barish, bheegi hui zameen
Woh namurad pyaasa hi raha, samundaro me nahaker

Jaise khwab kare shikwa, unhe neend se bair hain
Woh khud ko samjha kiya tanha, mehfilo me zindagi bitakar

Jaise hasta hua ho chehra, aur yeh dawa main gam_zada hu
Khushiya kabse muntazir thi, na dekh payee aakhe aasoo bahakar

Jaise zindagi bataye mera nam maut hain
Woh deta raha zakhm unko, nam apna GHAYEL batakar

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2009, 07:29:25 AM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob Sajid ji.. bahoot hi meaningful poetry likhi hai aapne. behad khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2009, 08:09:00 AM »
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Bohat umda likha hai aapne wonderfull creation sajid ji...
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2009, 09:12:21 AM »
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Very nice Sajid ji!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2009, 11:11:27 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 31, 2009, 07:24:06 AM
Kabhi kabhi hum jis khushi ki talash me zindagi guzar dete hain woh pass hote huye bhi hum use dekh nahi pate. Jis pyaar ki aarzoo karte hain woh pyaar jab milta bhi hain to use pehchaan nahi pate. Bas isi soch ko dhiyaan me rakhkar ek mamuli kalam likha hain, ummeed hain aapko pasand aaye........

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker

Jaise  mangti ho ab bhi barish, bheegi hui zameen
Woh namurad pyaasa hi raha, samundaro me nahaker

Jaise khwab kare shikwa, unhe neend se bair hain
Woh khud ko samjha kiya tanha, mehfilo me zindagi bitakar

Jaise hasta hua ho chehra, aur yeh dawa main gam_zada hu
Khushiya kabse muntazir thi, na dekh payee aakhe aasoo bahakar

Jaise zindagi bataye mera nam maut hain
Woh deta raha zakhm unko, nam apna GHAYEL batakar

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker

Aapki shayari main roz baroz pukhtagi dekh kar main hairaan hoon.....Har subah ke saath aapki shayari bhi sanwar rahi hai....and we just love it !! Bohot hi khoob Sajid Ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2009, 11:54:17 AM »
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Bahot ahchche sajid bhai... har shayari mein ek nayee tareeke se sachchai bayaan karna ahsaan nahee hota, aap ki shayari padr kar lagta hai k aap k liye, Masha-allah ahsan hai! Keep it up!
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«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2009, 12:21:37 PM »
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Subhan Allah Bhai, Bohat Achcha Kalaam Likha Hai Aapne,.
Har Shayari Aapki, Peechli Shayari Se Damdaar Hoti Hai,.

Allah Aapke Kalam Ki Hifazat Kare,. Aapko Kisi ki Nazar na Lagaaye,.

Khush Rahiye,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2009, 04:37:44 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 31, 2009, 07:29:25 AM
bahoot bahoot khoob Sajid ji.. bahoot hi meaningful poetry likhi hai aapne. behad khoob!

Thank You Sophie for giving time to my work...Bas hamesha yahi koshish karta hu ke jo likhu simple language me ho jo ziyada se ziyada logho ko samajh me aaye.[/b]
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Quote from: honeyrose on March 31, 2009, 08:09:00 AM
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Bohat umda likha hai aapne wonderfull creation sajid ji...


Bohat shukriyaan Honey for giving time and comment to my work....
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2009, 07:11:24 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 31, 2009, 09:12:21 AM
Very nice Sajid ji!!

Thank You very much Salma...
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2009, 07:23:39 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 07, 2009, 10:01:13 AM
Bohat shukriyaan Honey for giving time and comment to my work....

Shukriya Sajid ji aapne naye andaaz se
hamesha aapne nazm pesh kiya hai,,,,Great work,,,
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 02:41:02 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 31, 2009, 11:11:27 AM
Aapki shayari main roz baroz pukhtagi dekh kar main hairaan hoon.....Har subah ke saath aapki shayari bhi sanwar rahi hai....and we just love it !! Bohot hi khoob Sajid Ji

Is khoobsurat Dad ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaa Talat, bas apna bharosa yuhi kayem rakhna....
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2009, 04:39:40 PM »
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bahoot khoob Sajid!!!! Agree with Celmira... din per din nikhar aa rahahai apki shayri per!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 07:19:30 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 31, 2009, 11:54:17 AM
Bahot ahchche sajid bhai... har shayari mein ek nayee tareeke se sachchai bayaan karna ahsaan nahee hota, aap ki shayari padr kar lagta hai k aap k liye, Masha-allah ahsan hai! Keep it up!

Arey nahi meri Masoom Behna yeh to tumhara pyaar hain apne is bhai ke liye......Bohat bohat shukriyaan.
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2009, 07:27:40 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 31, 2009, 07:24:06 AM
Kabhi kabhi hum jis khushi ki talash me zindagi guzar dete hain woh pass hote huye bhi hum use dekh nahi pate. Jis pyaar ki aarzoo karte hain woh pyaar jab milta bhi hain to use pehchaan nahi pate. Bas isi soch ko dhiyaan me rakhkar ek mamuli kalam likha hain, ummeed hain aapko pasand aaye........

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker

Jaise  mangti ho ab bhi barish, bheegi hui zameen
Woh namurad pyaasa hi raha, samundaro me nahaker

Jaise khwab kare shikwa, unhe neend se bair hain
Woh khud ko samjha kiya tanha, mehfilo me zindagi bitakar

Jaise hasta hua ho chehra, aur yeh dawa main gam_zada hu
Khushiya kabse muntazir thi, na dekh payee aakhe aasoo bahakar

Jaise zindagi bataye mera nam maut hain
Woh deta raha zakhm unko, nam apna GHAYEL batakar

Jaise kashti kinara dhoondti ho kinare par aaker
Woh ab bhi hua na mutmaee.N apna hum_nawa.Z paker
awesome .........bahoot hi behtreen aur haqikat ke behad kareeb likha hai sajid.....bahot khoobsurat........tumhe tah-e-dil se lakhon salam..dost....aur hazaaron daad....
sach hai aaj-kal har doosra insaan khud ko dukhi (gumjada) batata firta hai..jo khushiyan uske paas pahle se moujud hai unhe nakarta hua......
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