*~*Kis Kisme Hunkaar Bharu*~*

by Roja on February 23, 2009, 04:59:54 PM
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Shashya shyamala kahe bhoomi ko
Kahe swarg se isse mahaan
Fir kyu Ravan rehne paate
Nahi karm ka jitnko gyaan..!!

Do haaton se itna loote
Bees mile toh kya kar dale
Ek badan per rang anekon
Ravan ko bhi Ram bana le..!!

Inki jubaan itni kadvi
Mann mein inke itna mail
Be-e-maan toh itne hote
Inse accha haldhar bail
Keval shabdh-baan se ab mai
Kitnon ka sanhar karu?
Kis kis mein hunkaar baru?..!!

Vishwason ko jisne thama
Nari hi khud badal gayee
Rang mahaver meindi sab ko
Wohi Paav se kuchal gayee..!!

Jooti mahima ki aasha mein
Komal kaya pigal gayee
Shradda kesopaan todkar
Kitne neeche fisal gayee..!!

Andhiyaron mein rehti thi woh
Pal mein baher nikal gayee
Kal tak Sita jeevit jismein
Aaj Ahelya fisal gayee..!!

Mere Ramswaron se keh do
Kiton ka uddaar karu
Kis-Kismein hunkaar bharu?..!!
Aaj Rashtra ke bal per hum sab
Oonche oonche mehal banate
Ek Rashtra ke hum senani
Geet ekta ke gaate
Fir kyu aag laga Mumbai/Dilli mein
Patiyale mein mauj manate..!!

Itihason se leti thi mai
Gaurav ke shan sabhi udaar
Soch rahi thi mujhe milega
Ek din aisa hi uphaar

Kintu mool bhi bacha na payee
Ab kaise vyapaar karu
Kis kismein hunkaar baru?
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2009, 05:04:58 PM »
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Kintu mool bhi bacha na payee
Ab kaise vyapaar karu
Kis kismein hunkaar baru?

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wah bahut khoob Roja... very nice


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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2009, 05:07:51 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 06:03:59 PM »
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bhot omda likha hay roja ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2009, 07:01:27 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 23, 2009, 04:59:54 PM
Shashya shyamala kahe bhoomi ko
Kahe swarg se isse mahaan
Fir kyu Ravan rehne paate
Nahi karm ka jitnko gyaan..!!

Do haaton se itna loote
Bees mile toh kya kar dale
Ek badan per rang anekon
Ravan ko bhi Ram bana le..!!

Inki jubaan itni kadvi
Mann mein inke itna mail
Be-e-maan toh itne hote
Inse accha haldhar bail
Keval shabdh-baan se ab mai
Kitnon ka sanhar karu?
Kis kis mein hunkaar baru?..!!

Vishwason ko jisne thama
Nari hi khud badal gayee
Rang mahaver meindi sab ko
Wohi Paav se kuchal gayee..!!

Jooti mahima ki aasha mein
Komal kaya pigal gayee
Shradda kesopaan todkar
Kitne neeche fisal gayee..!!

Andhiyaron mein rehti thi woh
Pal mein baher nikal gayee
Kal tak Sita jeevit jismein
Aaj Ahelya fisal gayee..!!

Mere Ramswaron se keh do
Kiton ka uddaar karu
Kis-Kismein hunkaar bharu?..!!
Aaj Rashtra ke bal per hum sab
Oonche oonche mehal banate
Ek Rashtra ke hum senani
Geet ekta ke gaate
Fir kyu aag laga Mumbai/Dilli mein
Patiyale mein mauj manate..!!

Itihason se leti thi mai
Gaurav ke shan sabhi udaar
Soch rahi thi mujhe milega
Ek din aisa hi uphaar

Kintu mool bhi bacha na payee
Ab kaise vyapaar karu
Kis kismein hunkaar baru?





Waah Roja jee...
kya khoob likha hai..
shaam ko iss kavita ka jawaab likhungaa...
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 09:32:22 AM »
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waah Ji waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai.

Bohat Bohat Achche Roja Didi,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 11:07:09 AM »
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Roja....Very nice creation...and deep meaning...Good work dear !
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 03:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 23, 2009, 05:04:58 PM
Kintu mool bhi bacha na payee
Ab kaise vyapaar karu
Kis kismein hunkaar baru?

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wah bahut khoob Roja... very nice


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Thanks Jas ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 03:59:28 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 23, 2009, 05:07:51 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja.. Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Khwaish ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 04:00:07 PM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on February 23, 2009, 06:03:59 PM
bhot omda likha hay roja ji

Shukriya Chitral ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2009, 04:01:36 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 23, 2009, 07:01:27 PM
Waah Roja jee...
kya khoob likha hai..
shaam ko iss kavita ka jawaab likhungaa...

Thanks Pandit ji, aapne hamara likha pada aur appreciate kiya,
thank you very much..

(shamm ho gayi hai pandit ji, jawab kahan hai?)
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 04:04:51 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 24, 2009, 09:32:22 AM
waah Ji waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai.

Bohat Bohat Achche Roja Didi,.

Thanks Azeem
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 04:10:47 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 11:07:09 AM
Roja....Very nice creation...and deep meaning...Good work dear !

Thank you very much dear Celmira
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2009, 05:45:03 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 23, 2009, 04:59:54 PM
Shashya shyamala kahe bhoomi ko
Kahe swarg se isse mahaan
Fir kyu Ravan rehne paate
Nahi karm ka jitnko gyaan..!!

Do haaton se itna loote
Bees mile toh kya kar dale
Ek badan per rang anekon
Ravan ko bhi Ram bana le..!!

Inki jubaan itni kadvi
Mann mein inke itna mail
Be-e-maan toh itne hote
Inse accha haldhar bail
Keval shabdh-baan se ab mai
Kitnon ka sanhar karu?
Kis kis mein hunkaar baru?..!!

Vishwason ko jisne thama
Nari hi khud badal gayee
Rang mahaver meindi sab ko
Wohi Paav se kuchal gayee..!!

Jooti mahima ki aasha mein
Komal kaya pigal gayee
Shradda kesopaan todkar
Kitne neeche fisal gayee..!!

Andhiyaron mein rehti thi woh
Pal mein baher nikal gayee
Kal tak Sita jeevit jismein
Aaj Ahelya fisal gayee..!!

Mere Ramswaron se keh do
Kiton ka uddaar karu
Kis-Kismein hunkaar bharu?..!!
Aaj Rashtra ke bal per hum sab
Oonche oonche mehal banate
Ek Rashtra ke hum senani
Geet ekta ke gaate
Fir kyu aag laga Mumbai/Dilli mein
Patiyale mein mauj manate..!!

Itihason se leti thi mai
Gaurav ke shan sabhi udaar
Soch rahi thi mujhe milega
Ek din aisa hi uphaar

Kintu mool bhi bacha na payee
Ab kaise vyapaar karu
Kis kismein hunkaar baru?






SACH HE LIKHA HAI ROJA JEE AAPNE...


NAARI KI MARYADA KO HARDUM JAG NE THEES DIYA,
SHAYAD APNE LAAG-SHARAM KO KHUD JAG NE HAI BEENCH DIYA,
BHOOL GAYA JAG USS ABLA KI MARDAANI KURBAANI KO,
KAHIN PE MAA,KAHIN PATNI AUR BETI KA ROOP LIYA,
JAB-JAB PADI JARURAT USNE ISS DHARTI KA UDDHAAR KIYA...

KURBAANI KI BAAT KAREIN TO, AWWAL DARZA PAATI HAI,
AFSOOS YE HAI KI DUNIYA USKO PHIRBHI ABLA BULATI HAI,
USKI TULNA ME KOI NAHI, SHAYAD "HINA" PAHUCHTI HAI,
KHUD GHISTI HAI PATTHER PE LEKIN HATHELI KO RANG DE JAATI HAI... 
 


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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2009, 04:09:59 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 26, 2009, 05:45:03 AM

SACH HE LIKHA HAI ROJA JEE AAPNE...

NAARI KI MARYADA KO HARDUM JAG NE THEES DIYA,
SHAYAD APNE LAAG-SHARAM KO KHUD JAG NE HAI BEENCH DIYA,
BHOOL GAYA JAG USS ABLA KI MARDAANI KURBAANI KO,
KAHIN PE MAA,KAHIN PATNI AUR BETI KA ROOP LIYA,
JAB-JAB PADI JARURAT USNE ISS DHARTI KA UDDHAAR KIYA...

KURBAANI KI BAAT KAREIN TO, AWWAL DARZA PAATI HAI,
AFSOOS YE HAI KI DUNIYA USKO PHIRBHI ABLA BULATI HAI,
USKI TULNA ME KOI NAHI, SHAYAD "HINA" PAHUCHTI HAI,
KHUD GHISTI HAI PATTHER PE LEKIN HATHELI KO RANG DE JAATI HAI...   

 Applause Applause
Thanks Pandit ji and bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne
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