Kuch Lafzon Ko Kaagaz Par Bikhaarna "Khwaish"

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Dil ka Dard Lafzon mein Utaarna
jab Hausle Dam Tod de Mujhko Pukaarna

Asaan To Nahi Eh Dost!! par Namumkin Bhi Nahi!!!
 Kabhi Bigdi Hui Kismat Ko Sawaarna

Pathar Raaste ka Umar Bhar Pathar Hi Rahega!!!
Par Aata Hai Logon Ko yahan Pathar Ko Nikhaarna

Haath Thaam lene Se Koi Humsafar To Nahi Hota
Par Asaan Hota Hai Kuch Mushkil waqt Ko saath Guzaarna

Mujhko yakeen Hai Ke Ek Din Halaat Badlenge Zaroor!!!
Zindagi mein Jurm Hai!!! Apni Himmat Ka Yeh Haarna

"Khwaish" Kehna Asaan hai par Kar Guzarna Mushkil!!
par humne Bhi Dekha Hai Muflisi Mein Apne Mann Ko Maarna

"Khwaish" Jab Mayuus Hota Hai To Kisi se kuch kehta Nahi!!
Aata Hai Bas Usse Kuch Lafzon Ko Kaagaz par Bikhaarna

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 02:41:42 PM »
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boht acha likha hai apne dil se daad
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 03:44:38 PM »
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The best poetry
khwaishji'
aap ki poetry roz sanwarti aur nikharti ja rahi hai.
keep it up.
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 04:13:39 PM »
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hmm……
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just hats off
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 04:17:33 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish JI
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 03:54:37 AM »
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bahut khub khwaishji...

badiya.....
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2011, 06:01:47 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai       Khwaish ji....

Mat haar maan tum yun girkar is badhaali mein
uthkar chal phirse agar jeena hai khushaali mein
faida nahi apne gum kisi ko bhi sunana
apne dil ka dard lafzon mein utaarna
fir "kuch lafzon ko kaagaz par bikhaarna"
unko samajhna unme khushiyan talaashna
yun hi hota hai zindagi ko sawaarna aur nikhaarna....
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 06:51:32 AM »
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kya baat he khwaish ji..........maja aa gaya......dil khush ho gaya......ek baat he yaar "sach ko is khoobsurat rhythm me padne me aur feel karne me dono me alag hi ehsaas hota he".........

har baar ki tarah apki ye peshkash bhi behtareen he ya shayad ye apki best ones me se he.........keep it up dear.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 08:22:28 AM »
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Wah Khwaish ji,aap toh hamesha se bahut baddiya aur ek alag soch ke saath likhte ho,bahut gaherai aur khoobsurat peshkash.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2011, 09:34:15 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Kya baat kehdi..
Bilkul mere dil ka haal bayan kiya apne
akhri ashaar main..Kisi se kuch mat kehna mager
kych lafzon ko kaagaz par bikharna..
bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2011, 03:47:55 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on April 19, 2011, 02:41:42 PM
boht acha likha hai apne dil se daad

Aapka Tehhhh Dilll Se Shukriya Saahilji icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2011, 07:27:03 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 19, 2011, 03:44:38 PM
The best poetry
khwaishji'
aap ki poetry roz sanwarti aur nikharti ja rahi hai.
keep it up.
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Aapka Behaddddddd Se Bhi Zyaada Shukriya Sureshji..

Bas Yeh Praatna Kare Ke Poetry Ke Saath-Saath Zindagi Bhi Nikharti Aur Sawarti Rahi.. angel11

Aapka Huemsha Ki tarah Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sureshji..Yuhi Saath rahiyega
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2011, 08:24:38 AM »
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very good
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Quote from: killbill on April 19, 2011, 04:13:39 PM
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Thankyou Soooooooo Much Killbill Ji..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2011, 08:52:14 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 19, 2011, 02:33:58 PM
Dil ka Dard Lafzon mein Utaarna
jab Hausle Dam Tod de Mujhko Pukaarna

Asaan To Nahi Eh Dost!! par Namumkin Bhi Nahi!!!
 Kabhi Bigdi Hui Kismat Ko Sawaarna

Pathar Raaste ka Umar Bhar Pathar Hi Rahega!!!
Par Aata Hai Logon Ko yahan Pathar Ko Nikhaarna

Haath Thaam lene Se Koi Humsafar To Nahi Hota
Par Asaan Hota Hai Kuch Mushkil waqt Ko saath Guzaarna

Mujhko yakeen Hai Ke Ek Din Halaat Badlenge Zaroor!!!
Zindagi mein Jurm Hai!!! Apni Himmat Ka Yeh Haarna

"Khwaish" Kehna Asaan hai par Kar Guzarna Mushkil!!
par humne Bhi Dekha Hai Muflisi Mein Apne Mann Ko Maarna

"Khwaish" Jab Mayuus Hota Hai To Kisi se kuch kehta Nahi!!
Aata Hai Bas Usse Kuch Lafzon Ko Kaagaz par Bikhaarna

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

very very impressive........!!!!!!!!!
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