Kuch Lafzon Ko Kaagaz Par Bikhaarna "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 19, 2011, 02:33:58 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 21, 2011, 09:19:41 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on April 19, 2011, 04:17:33 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish JI

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«Reply #16 on: April 21, 2011, 02:48:53 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 19, 2011, 06:01:30 PM
Bahut Kam Log Hote Hain Jo
Apne Nafs Pe Qaboo Pa Sakte Hain
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aapne Bhai...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya majid Bhai..

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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2011, 12:41:40 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 20, 2011, 03:54:37 AM
bahut khub khwaishji...

badiya.....

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«Reply #18 on: April 28, 2011, 12:30:56 PM »
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Quote from: cara on April 20, 2011, 06:01:47 AM
Wah kya baat hai       Khwaish ji....

Mat haar maan tum yun girkar is badhaali mein
uthkar chal phirse agar jeena hai khushaali mein
faida nahi apne gum kisi ko bhi sunana
apne dil ka dard lafzon mein utaarna
fir "kuch lafzon ko kaagaz par bikhaarna"
unko samajhna unme khushiyan talaashna
yun hi hota hai zindagi ko sawaarna aur nikhaarna....

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Caraji..

aur bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: April 29, 2011, 07:39:01 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on April 20, 2011, 06:51:32 AM
kya baat he khwaish ji..........maja aa gaya......dil khush ho gaya......ek baat he yaar "sach ko is khoobsurat rhythm me padne me aur feel karne me dono me alag hi ehsaas hota he".........

har baar ki tarah apki ye peshkash bhi behtareen he ya shayad ye apki best ones me se he.........keep it up dear.....

Uthkarshji, Aapka Teh Dil Se shukriya Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Aapne meri Kayi rachnayo Ko Yeh Kaha Hai Ke One Of Your Best Work!!!

Umeed Karta Hoon Aage Bhi Meri Rachnaye Aapke Dil Ko Chue Aur best work Keh laaye... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #20 on: April 29, 2011, 08:10:03 AM »
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aha ahahahahaha kya baat haiii..
khwaish bhaiii..

pehli line se hi katl-e-aam macha diya
kuchh line yad aati hai apni likhi hui...pesh karta hun

"uska aana kya hua mehfil me qatl ho gaye 'Abhi'
or mera mehboob keheta hai sadgii me buraai kya hai"
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«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2011, 06:38:32 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 20, 2011, 08:22:28 AM
Wah Khwaish ji,aap toh hamesha se bahut baddiya aur ek alag soch ke saath likhte ho,bahut gaherai aur khoobsurat peshkash.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #22 on: May 21, 2011, 07:01:13 AM »
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I’m not wrthoy to be in the same forum.
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«Reply #23 on: May 21, 2011, 03:35:29 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on April 20, 2011, 09:34:15 AM
Wah Wah Wah aur Wah..
Kya baat kehdi..
Bilkul mere dil ka haal bayan kiya apne
akhri ashaar main..Kisi se kuch mat kehna mager
kych lafzon ko kaagaz par bikharna..
bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Bhai Rahim Aapka Tan-Mann se bahut bahut shukriya..

aapki daad Mere Liye Bahut keemti..

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«Reply #24 on: May 25, 2011, 01:24:09 PM »
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Quote from: Tamnna on April 21, 2011, 08:24:38 AM
very good
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«Reply #25 on: May 30, 2011, 09:43:58 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 21, 2011, 08:52:14 AM
very very impressive........!!!!!!!!!

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shebaji...

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