kyaa karoo mai ab

by NETRAPAL on December 12, 2008, 05:32:11 AM
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abhee kuch din pahale ek news paper me padha tha Keral me ek shadeed ke vidhwaa ke bare jise mahaaveer charkr mila tha marnoupraant uskee dashaa ke bare likhaa gayaa tha padh kar bahut dukh hooa. vidhwaa par pahale bhee likh chukaa hoo par ek bar fir koshih kee hai.......

sanjh ho aayee hai
aaj fir wo  khalee haath lot aayee  hai
subah  niklee thee liye aashaa man me
lot ayee liye udasee kee thakaan tan me,
bath gayee wo beabs, yahee sochtee hai
kyaa karoo mai ab......

kabhee wo bhee muskaraatee thee
saawaan me geet gungunaate thee
sehraa bandh koi ayaa tha
laal joda saath apne wo layaa tha
sapno ko har pal wo sanjotee thee
chudiyaa apnee wo khankhaatee thee
bas har pal wo to muskaratee thee

us pal bhee wo muskaayee thee
dard andar kaa n dikhaa payee thee,
saajan uskaa judaa ho gayaa tha
ho kar kurbaan matr bhoomee pe
wo mahaan, amar ho gayaa tha

mahaveer chakra se navaajee thee gayee wo
bade garv se muskayee thee wo
kimat bhee mili the shadahat ki usko
apno se magar thagee gayee thee wo..

dekthee hai aaj apne akelepan ko
taaktee soonee see kalayee ko
nihaartee hai un tamgo ko kabhee
kabhee sahlaatee hai
khoon me lipte sabj kapko ko..
sochtee hai bas yahee wo masoom
kyaa karoon mai ab........



Netra....
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2008, 07:21:49 AM »
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nice bahut acha likha hain aapna
                                saloni
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2008, 07:25:53 AM »
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BOHAT KHOOB BOHAT ACHCHHI TARAH SE LIKHA HAI...
BOHAT ACHCHHA WARNAN HAI AAPKI TARAF SE NETRAPAL JI Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2008, 09:06:33 AM »
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thanks saloni ji and tanha ji for reply....

netra...
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2008, 12:07:52 PM »
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bahoot khoob Netra ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2008, 09:06:51 AM »
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bahoot khoob Netra ji

thanks pooja ji.....

netra.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2008, 12:04:01 PM »
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Nice One Again Netra Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2008, 01:17:04 PM »
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bahut hi acchaa likha hai netrapal.

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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2008, 03:35:07 AM »
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thanks jasbir jee or jahsheen bahyee

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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2008, 10:33:14 AM »
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abhee kuch din pahale ek news paper me padha tha Keral me ek shadeed ke vidhwaa ke bare jise mahaaveer charkr mila tha marnoupraant uskee dashaa ke bare likhaa gayaa tha padh kar bahut dukh hooa. vidhwaa par pahale bhee likh chukaa hoo par ek bar fir koshih kee hai.......

sanjh ho aayee hai
aaj fir wo  khalee haath lot aayee  hai
subah  niklee thee liye aashaa man me
lot ayee liye udasee kee thakaan tan me,
bath gayee wo beabs, yahee sochtee hai
kyaa karoo mai ab......

kabhee wo bhee muskaraatee thee
saawaan me geet gungunaate thee
sehraa bandh koi ayaa tha
laal joda saath apne wo layaa tha
sapno ko har pal wo sanjotee thee
chudiyaa apnee wo khankhaatee thee
bas har pal wo to muskaratee thee

us pal bhee wo muskaayee thee
dard andar kaa n dikhaa payee thee,
saajan uskaa judaa ho gayaa tha
ho kar kurbaan matr bhoomee pe
wo mahaan, amar ho gayaa tha

mahaveer chakra se navaajee thee gayee wo
bade garv se muskayee thee wo
kimat bhee mili the shadahat ki usko
apno se magar thagee gayee thee wo..

dekthee hai aaj apne akelepan ko
taaktee soonee see kalayee ko
nihaartee hai un tamgo ko kabhee
kabhee sahlaatee hai
khoon me lipte sabj kapko ko..
sochtee hai bas yahee wo masoom
kyaa karoon mai ab........



Netra....


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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2008, 01:44:27 PM »
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You Are Always welcome Netrabhaiya,
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