Likha Hai Har Ek Ka Hisaab Sab "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 16, 2011, 09:12:17 AM
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Kya Khuda Ka Waasta Kya Buto'n (idols) ka waasta
Aadmi ke  waastay bas Aadmi ka saath do.
 (Jan Nisar Akhtar)


Kayi Baar Aisa Hota Hai Ke Insaan Khud Ko "Perfection" Ka
Putla Samaj Baitha Hai,Uski Nazar Mein Khud Jo Bhi Woh
Kare Sahi Hai Aur Baaki Jo Kare Woh Galat..Khud Ki Khata
par Koi Saza Nahi, Dusri Ki Khata Jurm Keh Laati hai
Yeh Ghazal Khud par Tanz Kaste Hue Likhi Gayi Hai..
Kuch Haqeeqi Baatein Aur Kuch Duniyaavi Rang Bhi Shaamil hai Isme
..Zaroor Waqt Dijiyega



Hum Ache Hai baaki Hai,
Duniya Mein Kharaab Sab!!!

Hum Sache Hai Baaki Hai
Chehro Pe Jhoote Nakaab Sab!!!

Hum Bhale Hai Baaki Hai!
Gunaho ke Putle Behisaab Sab!!!

Hum Dard Mein Kuch Kahe To Woh Shayari!!!!
Baaki Jo Kahe,Wahi  Purani Kitaab Sab!!!

Hum Khata kar baithe To Koi Jurm Nahi!!
Dusra kare To Hai Jaise  Azaab Sab!!!

Hum Peete Hai maye To Woh Paani Ho jaise
Baaki peeye To hai, Woh Sharaab Sab!!!

Khud Ke Gham Par Jo Hum Roye To jazbaati!!
baaki Roye To Hai yahan Adaakaar Sab!!!

Eh bande khud par Guroor Kis Baat ka
Upar Likha Hai har Ek ka Hisaab Sab!!!

Khuda Ke Waaste Has kar Milo Har Ek Se!!!
Aakhir!!Miti ke Putle Hi Hai Hum janaab Sab!!!

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2011, 10:06:26 AM »
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khwaish ji,bahut khoobsurat ,aur haqeeqat bhi...
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2011, 10:10:51 AM »
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absolutly ......fine ...khuwais ji ,har aasaar haqeeqat ko bayan kar raha hai ...daad hajir hai ,,,,,,is nayab work k liye
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2011, 12:45:38 PM »
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Hum Ache Hai baaki Hai,
Duniya Mein Kharaab Sab!!!

Hum Sache Hai Baaki Hai
Chehro Pe Jhoote Nakaab Sab!!!

Hum Bhale Hai Baaki Hai!
Gunaho ke Putle Behisaab Sab!!!

Hum Dard Mein Kuch Kahe To Woh Shayari!!!!
Baaki Jo Kahe,Wahi  Purani Kitaab Sab!!!

Hum Khata kar baithe To Koi Jurm Nahi!!
Dusra kare To Hai Jaise  Azaab Sab!!!

Hum Peete Hai maye To Woh Paani Ho jaise
Baaki peeye To hai, Woh Sharaab Sab!!!

Khud Ke Gham Par Jo Hum Roye To jazbaati!!
baaki Roye To Hai yahan Adaakaar Sab!!!

Eh bande khud par Guroor Kis Baat ka
Upar Likha Hai har Ek ka Hisaab Sab!!!

Khuda Ke Waaste Has kar Milo Har Ek Se!!!
Aakhir!!Miti ke Putle Hi Hai Hum janaab Sab!!!

           ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Khwaish ji,

Bahut umda khayalat pesh kiye hain apne. Daad kubul kijiye.
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Aur haan apki khwahish ke mutabik "jin pe likha tha..." lafzon ko maine mukammal gazal ka jama pahnane ki koshishki hai. Umeed hai apko pasand ayegi. Waqt mile to gaur farmaiyega.
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2011, 01:40:00 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab khub aur khare khare taNz kiye hai aapne..
Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Is khub tanziyaa kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2011, 02:44:21 PM »
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khwaish ji,bahut khoobsurat ,aur haqeeqat bhi...

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Siddiqui Ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2011, 03:10:46 PM »
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KHWAISHJI BAHUT GEHRA AUR SAHI EHSAAS HAI.

SAB KE SAATH YAHI HOTA HAI. AAKHIR HUM BHI BAHUT SOCH KE KISI NATEEJE PAR PANHUCHE HAIN AUR YE HAI KI MAANATA HI NAHIN.
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2011, 03:33:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Khawish Ji
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absolutly ......fine ...khuwais ji ,har aasaar haqeeqat ko bayan kar raha hai ...daad hajir hai ,,,,,,is nayab work k liye

Aapne Waqt Diya Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sunil Ji..

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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2011, 10:26:17 AM »
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Khwaish ji,

Bahut umda khayalat pesh kiye hain apne. Daad kubul kijiye.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur haan apki khwahish ke mutabik "jin pe likha tha..." lafzon ko maine mukammal gazal ka jama pahnane ki koshishki hai. Umeed hai apko pasand ayegi. Waqt mile to gaur farmaiyega.


Usha Ji Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya icon_flower icon_flower

Aur usha Ji Maine Woh kalaam padh li hai..bahut Acha Likha hai Aapne icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2011, 11:53:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwahish ji
Kya talkhi hai..kitni khoobsurati se hakeekat baya.n ki hai
Dil se dad kubool kare
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2011, 02:10:25 PM »
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Tanz ki inteha hai iss kalam main dost..
Mager sachayi yehi hai kay sachayi kadvi hoti hai..
Kya khoob kalam kahi hai apne..
behad sachi..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2011, 02:48:24 PM »
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khud ki khaamiya gin_na sabse mushkil hota hai....bahut khoob rahe apke vichaar....bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji .... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2011, 06:40:25 AM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab khub aur khare khare taNz kiye hai aapne..
Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Is khub tanziyaa kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   



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«Reply #14 on: November 01, 2011, 07:13:24 AM »
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KHWAISHJI BAHUT GEHRA AUR SAHI EHSAAS HAI.

SAB KE SAATH YAHI HOTA HAI. AAKHIR HUM BHI BAHUT SOCH KE KISI NATEEJE PAR PANHUCHE HAIN AUR YE HAI KI MAANATA HI NAHIN.


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sureshji..

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