Maa Meree Mat Maar Mujhe Too

by NETRAPAL on May 21, 2009, 05:06:07 AM
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aaj ke aadhunik yug me baalikaaye kis tarah se path-bhrast hokar us mukaam me pahuch jaatee hai jahaa pachtaave or mot me shivaa kuch bhee nahi hai....issee par kuch likhne kee koshish har agar kalam se kahee chook hooyee yaa kisee ko bura lage to mafee chataa hoo par aap sab se nivedan hai kee apanee bat kahe jaroor..

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Maa meree mat maar mujhe too
Vintee ab  ye  maan meree too
Teree kokh me  paltee hoo mai
Ansh  tere  se   jeetee hoo mai
Dushman meree mat ban Maa too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Tab khel khel me khelee thee too
Mad me yowan ke jhoolee thee too
Nasha aisaa tha joban kaa tujh par
Lok laaj sab bhool gayee  too..
Maa meree mat mar muje too

Mai jab  teree kokh me  aayee
Sudh tujhko   apnee tab aayee
Chup chup kar ab rotee kyo hai
Apnaa paap chipatee kyoo hai
Mujhko bhojh samjhtee ab too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Kal piyaa sang ghar jayegee
Bagiya teree  bas jayegee
Tap tap tapkenge ansoo tab tere
Yaad meree jab tujhko aayegee
Maan le apnee karnee ab too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Dartee mujse kyon too maa hai
Vadh meraa chatee kyon too hai
Mai to prabhu nij chalee jaaungee
Lot ke vaapas fir aaoongee,
Apne aap se bhag rahee too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

21s wee shade me pahooch gayee too
Such suvidhaa me dub gaye  too
Nashaa ajab chaayaa hai kaisaa
Maryaadaa sab bhool gaye too
Tab caltee thee muh kar apne ko
Ek thokar me gir padee too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too



Netra…..
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 09:33:08 AM »
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lagtaa hai kahi mai galtee kar gayaa...

Netra....
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 02:32:21 PM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 21, 2009, 05:06:07 AM

aaj ke aadhunik yug me baalikaaye kis tarah se path-bhrast hokar us mukaam me pahuch jaatee hai jahaa pachtaave or mot me shivaa kuch bhee nahi hai....issee par kuch likhne kee koshish har agar kalam se kahee chook hooyee yaa kisee ko bura lage to mafee chataa hoo par aap sab se nivedan hai kee apanee bat kahe jaroor..

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Maa meree mat maar mujhe too
Vintee ab  ye  maan meree too
Teree kokh me  paltee hoo mai
Ansh  tere  se   jeetee hoo mai
Dushman meree mat ban Maa too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Tab khel khel me khelee thee too
Mad me yowan ke jhoolee thee too
Nasha aisaa tha joban kaa tujh par
Lok laaj sab bhool gayee  too..
Maa meree mat mar muje too

Mai jab  teree kokh me  aayee
Sudh tujhko   apnee tab aayee
Chup chup kar ab rotee kyo hai
Apnaa paap chipatee kyoo hai
Mujhko bhojh samjhtee ab too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Kal piyaa sang ghar jayegee
Bagiya teree  bas jayegee
Tap tap tapkenge ansoo tab tere
Yaad meree jab tujhko aayegee
Maan le apnee karnee ab too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

Dartee mujse kyon too maa hai
Vadh meraa chatee kyon too hai
Mai to prabhu nij chalee jaaungee
Lot ke vaapas fir aaoongee,
Apne aap se bhag rahee too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too

21s wee shade me pahooch gayee too
Such suvidhaa me dub gaye  too
Nashaa ajab chaayaa hai kaisaa
Maryaadaa sab bhool gaye too
Tab caltee thee muh kar apne ko
Ek thokar me gir padee too
Maa meree mat maar mujhe too



Netra…..

Netra ji, I am unable to answer. While reading, some of your lines
really touched my heart. Bahut accha hi likha hai aapne.

Kahi galat nazer nahi aayi. Wonderful  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 03:00:15 PM »
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excellent work netra ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 03:13:45 PM »
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Mindblowing.. Fantastic Poetry Netra Ji.. bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai..
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2009, 03:45:36 AM »
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thanks roja ji,

mai to dar raha tha shayad is trah se likhnaa logo ko pasand nahi ayegaa....

Netra...
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2009, 03:46:19 AM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 21, 2009, 03:00:15 PM
excellent work netra ji Usual Smile

thanks vitasta ji,

Netra...
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2009, 03:47:17 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 21, 2009, 03:13:45 PM
Mindblowing.. Fantastic Poetry Netra Ji.. bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai..

Thanks sophi ji,

for reply...

Netra...
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2009, 12:15:59 PM »
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is kadar bigde jamaane ko kyaa kahoo
khurdare samaaj kee tasveer ko kyaa kahoo
dekh kar bhee anjaan ban raheho tum
tumhaaree ankho kee tareef me mai kyaa kahoo..

Netra.....
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2009, 12:40:01 PM »
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jaraa see aahat se gabraa gaye
najar bachaa ke yooo nikal gaye
daldal ko beh -andekha karne lage
jaraa panv fislaa kee dshane lege


apne aap se jo najar churaaoge
tanik bhee n sambhal paaoge
chand lmho kaa kee prkaash hai ye
gar bhate to andhkaare me doob jaaoge

waah re vikaas ke daanav
tum ye kaisaa vikaas kar gye
tum to hame hasaane aye the
apne majak se hame hee rulaa gaye..

Netra..
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Netra Bhai, Wakhai Kabeel-e-tareef Hai Ye Peshkash Aapki, Subhan Allah,.
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shukriya ajeem bhaayee...

Netra....
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shukriya ajeem bhaayee...

Netra....

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye Bhai,.
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