Maa-Baap (Zameen Par Rehne Wale Khuda)

by khwaish on January 12, 2009, 02:45:15 PM
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Yeh Poetry Ek Pukaar Hai,Ek Awaaz Hai,Jo Main Chaahta Hoon Ke Har Insaan Tak Pahunche...


Saans Bhi Toothti Nahi Uss Beemar Ki,
Sukoon Ki Maut Bhi Naseeb Nahi Usse,
Kya Likhu Main Halaat Uss Lachaar Ki...

Jab Tak Woh Chalta-Firta Tha,
Apna Bhoj Khud Hi Sambhaaltha Tha,
Aaj Bistar Hi Uska Aakhri Humsafar Hai,
Aaj Khoob Inaam Mila Hai Usse,
Apne Bacho Ko Diye Hue Sanskaar Ki....

"KHwaish" Jo Insaan Apne Maa-Baap Ka Na Ho Saka,
Woh Kissi Aur Se Kya Waffa Nibhayeega,
Maa-Baap To Ghar Ki Chhat Ki Tarah Hai,
Chhat hi na ho to Unchaiyon se Kya Haasil,
Bin Chat Ke Kya Aukat Hai Khade Hue Deewar Ki.....

De Rahi Hai Dastak Samay Ki Ghantiya,
Keh Rahi Hai Ab Baat Ho Angaar Ki....

Agar Humein Apne Buzaurgo Ki Izzat Karne Na Aaye,
To Hum Besharam,Bedil,Be-imaan Hai,
"Khwaish" Ke Haath mein aaj Kalam Nahi,
"khwaish" aaj Lekhni Likh Raha Hai Talwaar Ki....

Aaj Hum Jo apne Maa-Baap Ke Saath Kar Rahe Hai,
Kal Humare Bache Humare Saath Karenge,
Ab Ghadi Aa Gayi Hai GURU NANAK ke Diye hue Upchaar Ki...

Jiske Paas Ho Apne Maa-Baap Ke Pyaar Ki Daulat,
Usne To Yeh Jag Jeeta,
Usse Kya Zaroorat Kisi Aur Auzaar Ki....

"Khwaish" Ne Kuch Galat Kaha Ho To Usse Muaf Kar Dena,
Woh To Bas Chahhta Hai Ke Umar Puri Ho Iss Andhaiyaar Ki......
     --Khwaish-- 

       
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 04:09:41 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Khwaish...... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 04:32:42 PM »
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APNE BAHOOT SAHI LIKHA HAI Khwaish ji... yah do line dil ko bahoot ander tak chu gai hai:

De Rahi Hai Dastak Samay Ki Ghantiya,
Keh Rahi Hai Ab Baat Ho Angaar Ki....
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 11:49:35 PM »
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Waah bohot khoob khwaish ji bohot khoob...
Aap ka jazba qabil-e-tareef hai.

Maa-baap ki khidmat kar ke insaan farz ada karta he, koi ehsaan nahi karta, phir bhi badle mien unki duaaen miti hai, jab unhon ne hamari khidmat ki tab ham dua to kya ek muskaan dene ke bhi qabil nahi the, aysi be-gharz muhabbat or be-misaaal qurabaani sirf maa-baap hi de sakte hain, allah hamen unki qadar ki tawfeeq de..aameen.
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 02:21:39 AM »
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Waaah wah... Bahut khoob khwaish ji... bahut accha
likha hai aapne
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 03:37:35 AM »
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kya baat hai.......khwaishji....

jab tak maa-baap hai ghar pe,majboot hai ghar apna,
maa-baap jaane ke baad,bin shath ka ghar lagta hai apna.
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 05:14:31 AM »
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Wah bohat khoob khwaish ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2009, 05:33:25 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 12, 2009, 02:45:15 PM

Yeh Poetry Ek Pukaar Hai,Ek Awaaz Hai,Jo Main Chaahta Hoon Ke Har Insaan Tak Pahunche...


Saans Bhi Toothti Nahi Uss Beemar Ki,
Sukoon Ki Maut Bhi Naseeb Nahi Usse,
Kya Likhu Main Halaat Uss Lachaar Ki...

Jab Tak Woh Chalta-Firta Tha,
Apna Bhoj Khud Hi Sambhaaltha Tha,
Aaj Bistar Hi Uska Aakhri Humsafar Hai,
Aaj Khoob Inaam Mila Hai Usse,
Apne Bacho Ko Diye Hue Sanskaar Ki....

"KHwaish" Jo Insaan Apne Maa-Baap Ka Na Ho Saka,
Woh Kissi Aur Se Kya Waffa Nibhayeega,
Maa-Baap To Ghar Ki Chhat Ki Tarah Hai,
Chhat hi na ho to Unchaiyon se Kya Haasil,
Bin Chat Ke Kya Aukat Hai Khade Hue Deewar Ki.....

De Rahi Hai Dastak Samay Ki Ghantiya,
Keh Rahi Hai Ab Baat Ho Angaar Ki....

Agar Humein Apne Buzaurgo Ki Izzat Karne Na Aaye,
To Hum Besharam,Bedil,Be-imaan Hai,
"Khwaish" Ke Haath mein aaj Kalam Nahi,
"khwaish" aaj Lekhni Likh Raha Hai Talwaar Ki....

Aaj Hum Jo apne Maa-Baap Ke Saath Kar Rahe Hai,
Kal Humare Bache Humare Saath Karenge,
Ab Ghadi Aa Gayi Hai GURU NANAK ke Diye hue Upchaar Ki...

Jiske Paas Ho Apne Maa-Baap Ke Pyaar Ki Daulat,
Usne To Yeh Jag Jeeta,
Usse Kya Zaroorat Kisi Aur Auzaar Ki....

"Khwaish" Ne Kuch Galat Kaha Ho To Usse Muaf Kar Dena,
Woh To Bas Chahhta Hai Ke Umar Puri Ho Iss Andhaiyaar Ki......
     --Khwaish-- 

       

Subhan Allah Mere Bhai Allah tumhe Khuesh rakhe kya likha hai yaar !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 04:39:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 13, 2009, 05:33:25 AM
Subhan Allah Mere Bhai Allah tumhe Khuesh rakhe kya likha hai yaar !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Ameen!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 06:03:07 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 12, 2009, 04:09:41 PM
Bohat Khoob Khwaish...... Clapping Smiley

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sajid Bhai Aapka..
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 06:06:59 PM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 06:09:12 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 12, 2009, 04:32:42 PM
Applause Applause Applause

APNE BAHOOT SAHI LIKHA HAI Khwaish ji... yah do line dil ko bahoot ander tak chu gai hai:

De Rahi Hai Dastak Samay Ki Ghantiya,
Keh Rahi Hai Ab Baat Ho Angaar Ki....


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..Aapne Hamesha Hausle Badhaaya Hai
par aap bhi kuch likhte to Mujhe Behad Khushi Hoti...
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 07:16:41 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on January 12, 2009, 11:49:35 PM
Waah bohot khoob khwaish ji bohot khoob...
Aap ka jazba qabil-e-tareef hai.

Maa-baap ki khidmat kar ke insaan farz ada karta he, koi ehsaan nahi karta, phir bhi badle mien unki duaaen miti hai, jab unhon ne hamari khidmat ki tab ham dua to kya ek muskaan dene ke bhi qabil nahi the, aysi be-gharz muhabbat or be-misaaal qurabaani sirf maa-baap hi de sakte hain, allah hamen unki qadar ki tawfeeq de..aameen.

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Randeri Saheb Aapka...

Aapne sach kaha aur Bahut Dil Ko choone wali Baat Kahi,
Hum Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho, Par Apne Maa-Baap ki Hum Parchai Bhi Hum Nahi Ban Sakte.
Yeh Poetry Ek Khaas Maqsad Ke Liye Likhi Gayi Thi..Aap Sab ne Isse Saraha..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya..
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 07:28:10 PM »
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bahut umda khwaish ji.
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«Reply #14 on: January 14, 2009, 01:03:13 AM »
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LOVELY POETRY JANAB.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause
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