**Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

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Maine pehle bhi ek nazm likhi thi 'gunhegaar bahaut hai'..yeh uss nazm ka dusra bhag ya phir continuation samjhiyega..Ager pehli wali nazm apne nahin parri, toh uski link de raha hoon...Umeed hai pasand ayegi..

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/tanziya-aur-tehreekbaksh-shayariyan/gunhegaar-bahaut-hai-by-rahim-t56038.0.html;msg1035048;topicseen#new

Yahan toh logon ke raaz ab raaz nahin rehte,
Raazon ko khol dene wale; patrakar bahaut hai…

Dafna lete hai apne ghumon ko dilon main aise,
Khush dikhne wale mujh jaise adakar bahaut hai…

Jab pareshani ati hai toh hata lete hai haath apna sabhi,
Khushiyali main kaam ane wale; yahan madadgar bahaut hai…

Pyaar ke pyaase kam aur hawas ke bhuke zada hai,
Jabhi toh yahan hote balatkar bahaut hai…

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai aise jeeyo ke duniya arson tak yaad rakhe,
Mar ke bhula diye gaye; aise yahan kalakar bahaut hai…

~Rahim~


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 01:40:48 PM »

bahut khoob Rahim bhai... bahut achcha likha hai...!!!


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 01:52:08 PM »

bahut umda... rahim sahab....

kya khub likha hai aapne.... Usual Smile

aisa likha aapne ke samajhne walo ne aansoo baha diye..
aaj bhi shayri ko samajhne wale samajhdar bahut hai..
aap jaiso ko hi to lekar chamka hai ye yoindia shayariyabad..
aap jaiso ke hi to alfaaz yahan chamakdar bahut hai..


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 02:39:53 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!!

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!!


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 07:08:55 PM »

Shukriya Shihab Bhaijan, Kapil Dost, Khwahish jee...

Khush rahein...


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 07:16:50 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 12, 2010, 01:52:08 PM

bahut umda... rahim sahab....

kya khub likha hai aapne.... Usual Smile

Wah jee wah bahaut shukriya...Arey hum jaise toh seekh rahe hai..yahan ke tare toh Khwaish jee hai, Kapil Dost hai, Azeem bhaijan, Talat di, Shihab bhaijan, Neel jee, Geet jee aur najane kitne anginat log hai...Hum toh bas seekh rahe hai...I appreciate every member for making yo wat it is today!


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 08:57:37 PM »

Wah wah Rahim bhai.bahut achi soch ,sachai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne ye nazm.fantastic creation.keep up the good work.excellent icon_salut


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Re: **Madadgar bahaut hai** by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 08:59:08 PM »

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di...


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