Main bhi to ek bachcha hoon...!!

by Talat on March 07, 2007, 11:11:51 AM
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I never planned to write this...I am at work, reading some scientific papers, having tea...and suddenly thought of poor children working in small road side hotels......The truth is after writing this, i am left with tears in my eyes !

Sheeshe ke uss paar, sadak ke kinaare
Dekhta hoon, bachche hanste muskurate

Kaandhon pe school ka basta liye hue
Kabhi daudte hue, kabhi shor machaate

Kabhi koi zid karte hue maa baap se
Kabhi chupchap unki ungliyaan thaame

Aate hue, jaate hue dikhte hain roz
Hotel ke sheeshe ke iss paar se mujhe

Din shuru, raat khatm hoti hain yahin
Mez se logon ke joothe bartan uthaate

Kabhi daant to kabhi fatkaar sunte hue
Kabhi kisi grahak ki gaaliyaan khaate

Iss hotel ke bahar kya kabhi aaunga
Sochta hoon kai baar sadak ko dekhte

Haathon main khilaune aaye nahin kabhi
Dekha hai inhe maine bas bartan uthaate

Kyun bhagwaan ne banaya hai mujhe aisa
Nahin hain maa baap, jo pyar lutaate

Main bhi to ek chota sa bachcha hoon
Kyun nahin rehta main hanste muskuraate
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2007, 11:28:50 AM »
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Talat di.. very nice.. same here aaj mera bhi dil issi wajah se udas hua ja rah hai.. aatak, paap , khoon karaba.. nafrat... bas yahi reh gaya hia duniyan mein... I really liked this poem.. really very touching...
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2007, 11:33:18 AM »
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Superb JOb Talat.....U prooved urself again.... Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2007, 07:50:25 PM »
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Thanks a ton Divya and Gaurav for reading and appreciating my poem ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2007, 09:17:32 PM »
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Talat ji it's very nice.

Bahut sad hai.  sad5
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2007, 10:43:09 PM »
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Thanks a lot Saira Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2007, 11:11:54 PM »
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Tallu

Shabash ! =D> =D> =D>

I have always liked the poems written by my fellow Yoindians on social issues !

Keep going  :arrow:
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2007, 11:31:25 PM »
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Quote from: "Rajbir"
Tallu

Shabash ! =D> =D> =D>

I have always liked the poems written by my fellow Yoindians on social issues !

Keep going  :arrow:


Wah wah ab toh Mr.President ki shabashi mil gaye hai aapko Talat ji :D
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«Reply #8 on: March 08, 2007, 02:25:47 AM »
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wow Too good TALAT!!! VERY TOUCHING!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2007, 05:42:53 AM »
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This is really very very Nice... =D> =D>

Very Emotional and Very Touching... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 08, 2007, 06:09:11 AM »
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Dil Karta hai Atyachaar Shayad Duniya Se Mita Dun
Masumiyat ko har bachpan mein panah Dun....


I quit up, cant gather any such word on this issue, i praised myself a lot to write about, but got tears only. :|

Well Done Talat Memsaab!
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«Reply #11 on: March 08, 2007, 08:51:04 AM »
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Rajbir, Pooja, Shikha and Neer...aapka bohot bohot shukriya Usual Smile
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Waah Waah Waah, Talat Behna Kya Baat Kahi Hai,.
Kaash Ke Ye Bachche Muskuraate,.
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Sahi kaha Azeem..bohot bohot shukriya.
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Quote from: Celmira on March 07, 2007, 11:11:51 AM
I never planned to write this...I am at work, reading some scientific papers, having tea...and suddenly thought of poor children working in small road side hotels......The truth is after writing this, i am left with tears in my eyes !

Sheeshe ke uss paar, sadak ke kinaare
Dekhta hoon, bachche hanste muskurate

Kaandhon pe school ka basta liye hue
Kabhi daudte hue, kabhi shor machaate

Kabhi koi zid karte hue maa baap se
Kabhi chupchap unki ungliyaan thaame

Aate hue, jaate hue dikhte hain roz
Hotel ke sheeshe ke iss paar se mujhe

Din shuru, raat khatm hoti hain yahin
Mez se logon ke joothe bartan uthaate

Kabhi daant to kabhi fatkaar sunte hue
Kabhi kisi grahak ki gaaliyaan khaate

Iss hotel ke bahar kya kabhi aaunga
Sochta hoon kai baar sadak ko dekhte

Haathon main khilaune aaye nahin kabhi
Dekha hai inhe maine bas bartan uthaate

Kyun bhagwaan ne banaya hai mujhe aisa
Nahin hain maa baap, jo pyar lutaate

Main bhi to ek chota sa bachcha hoon
Kyun nahin rehta main hanste muskuraate

Bahut Bahut Khoob!! Talat,aapne kuch aisi Topic par likha hai,jo hum sab Roz-aana zindagi mein Dekhte hai..iss dard ko aapne ba-khoobi samjha hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
yeh Padhkar mujhe Kisi Shayar ka Yeh Sher Yaad aaya hai..

Duniya mein Ab Kuch To Acha Rehne Diya Jaaye,
Eh Khuda, Bache Ko To Bacha Rehne Diya Jaaye..
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