Main bhi to ek bachcha hoon...!!

by Talat on March 07, 2007, 11:11:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 12, 2009, 06:53:35 PM »
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Duniya mein Ab Kuch To Acha Rehne Diya Jaaye,
Eh Khuda, Bache Ko To Bacha Rehne Diya Jaaye..


wah khwaish ji last line dil ko ander tak chu gai... wah kaya baat hai... bahoot achi line likhi hai apne.... wah!!
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«Reply #16 on: February 12, 2009, 07:05:26 PM »
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Pooja,iss sher ki aakhri line ne aapke dil ko chua,jaankar bahut acha laga,par pooja,yeh kisi aur ka likha hai,jo mujhe celmira ki likhi poetry ko padhkar Ekdum Se zehan mein aaya..Shukriya aapka jo aapne isse Padha
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«Reply #17 on: February 15, 2009, 09:56:07 AM »
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I never planned to write this...I am at work, reading some scientific papers, having tea...and suddenly thought of poor children working in small road side hotels......The truth is after writing this, i am left with tears in my eyes !

Sheeshe ke uss paar, sadak ke kinaare
Dekhta hoon, bachche hanste muskurate

Kaandhon pe school ka basta liye hue
Kabhi daudte hue, kabhi shor machaate

Kabhi koi zid karte hue maa baap se
Kabhi chupchap unki ungliyaan thaame

Aate hue, jaate hue dikhte hain roz
Hotel ke sheeshe ke iss paar se mujhe

Din shuru, raat khatm hoti hain yahin
Mez se logon ke joothe bartan uthaate

Kabhi daant to kabhi fatkaar sunte hue
Kabhi kisi grahak ki gaaliyaan khaate

Iss hotel ke bahar kya kabhi aaunga
Sochta hoon kai baar sadak ko dekhte

Haathon main khilaune aaye nahin kabhi
Dekha hai inhe maine bas bartan uthaate

Kyun bhagwaan ne banaya hai mujhe aisa
Nahin hain maa baap, jo pyar lutaate

Main bhi to ek chota sa bachcha hoon
Kyun nahin rehta main hanste muskuraate


Bahut Bahut Khoob!! Talat,aapne kuch aisi Topic par likha hai,jo hum sab Roz-aana zindagi mein Dekhte hai..iss dard ko aapne ba-khoobi samjha hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
yeh Padhkar mujhe Kisi Shayar ka Yeh Sher Yaad aaya hai..

Duniya mein Ab Kuch To Acha Rehne Diya Jaaye,
Eh Khuda, Bache Ko To Bacha Rehne Diya Jaaye..


Bohot bohot shukriya Khwaish...Aaj bhi aise bachchon ke baare main soch kar aankhain bheeg jaati hain.

Bohot hi gehri lines hain...very nice sharing...khaas kar aakhiri line, kaash log bachchon ko bachcha hi rehne dete..
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«Reply #18 on: February 09, 2011, 07:21:34 PM »
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as salamu ali kum
 bahut khub ji

Dil mera aaj bhi qun lagta mujhe chota bachcha
Mujh ko lag te sabhi sach che ya mera dil  sachcha

 
Me kisi me bhi burai ko nhi padh ti hun
Us mein  achchai hei kitni or dil kit sachcha
 
Koi bhi dunia me achcha na bura hota he
Waqt, halaat, banaa dete hein  jhuta sachcha
 
Har insan se, insaniyat se pyar karo saab tum
Wo ameer he ya garib na dekho bachcha
 
Pyaar sab se jo karoge to khushi paoge
Har kisi ko jo lagaaoge gale to he achcha
 
Pyaar wo cheez he kam hoti nhi dene se kabhi
Jitna bhi do ge sabhi ko to he wo achcha
 
Pyaar tum ko jo kare tum bhi karo, badi baat nhi
Joo nhi karte tum he pyar, unko karo tab he achcha
 
Pyar insaniyat or wafaa ke wade sab karo
Or phir un ko bhulao na tum tab he achche
 
Dukhon mein  sath khadha ho jab koi dost
Wahi he dost tumhara whi bas he achcha
 
khushi mein  laakh na jao kisi ke beshak tum
Gamon  mei jake gaale sab ko lagaao tab he achcha
 
Bibbo ki to ye hi dua he sabhi ke liye ae jahaan walo
Har ak ka dil moom ho, har ak ban jaaye achcha
 
apna khayaal rakhn
Written by Hameeda Ameer j
ALLAH HAFIZ
 
 
 

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