MASLAA.!!

by qalb on September 06, 2011, 05:17:34 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2273 times)
qalb
Guest
Reply with quote


                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.          
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.



                                                  qalb(HEART)
                                                   J.K CEMENT COLONY
                                                    INDIA Usual Smile
Logged
sarfira
Guest
«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2011, 06:01:40 AM »
Reply with quote
bahot mast hai
Logged
kamal aggarwal
Guest
«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2011, 06:55:16 AM »
Reply with quote
very nice
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 6 hours and 11 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2011, 08:19:56 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: qalb on September 06, 2011, 05:17:34 AM


                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.          
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.



                                                  qalb(HEART)
                                                   J.K CEMENT COLONY
                                                    INDIA Usual Smile

bahut bahut Khooob..Dilchasp Aur Ek Alag Andaz Wali Yeh Ghazal Achi Lagi..bahut Ache.bas Maqta Kuch Samaj Nahi Aaya..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2011, 08:42:20 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: khwaish on September 06, 2011, 08:19:56 AM
bahut bahut Khooob..Dilchasp Aur Ek Alag Andaz Wali Yeh Ghazal Achi Lagi..bahut Ache.bas Maqta Kuch Samaj Nahi Aaya..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


maqta ek burning mudde per based hai. aap kaafi kaabil hain iss ki gehraai mein jakar khud ek matlab ko ijaad karein apne nokhte nazar se...!!!
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2011, 11:30:51 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Qalb Sahaab Aadaab1

Waah janab waah kia kahne aapke ...
behad gazab ke taNz kahe hai.. sabhi ashaar kafi
umdaa rahe... Aap kafi umdaa khayaaloN ki malik hai..

Sade se lafzoN meiN kafi khoob gehri baateN kah gaye
aap...

 Hats off to you!

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye ....

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez          
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2011, 07:42:37 PM »
Reply with quote
qalb ji,behad purlutf,behtareen.
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2011, 05:44:19 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: sarfira on September 06, 2011, 06:01:40 AM
bahot mast hai

 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
Logged
Gyan Prakash
Maqbool Shayar
****

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
4 days, 14 minutes.

Solitude..!!

Posts: 465
Member Since: Jun 2011


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2011, 07:19:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Bahut mast likha hai qalb ji aapne....!!!
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2011, 06:59:07 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: kamal aggarwal on September 06, 2011, 06:55:16 AM
very nice


 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
Sanjeev kash
Guest
«Reply #10 on: September 08, 2011, 07:11:53 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: qalb on September 06, 2011, 05:17:34 AM


                       dil na de saath dimaag kya kare.         
                       balla na chale sahwaag kya kare.

                       oonche loag oonchi pasand manikchund.
                       sunn kar slogan paan paraag kya kare.

                       kaamyaabi dekh doosro.n ki jalte ho aap.
                       abb bechari bolo ye aag kya kare.

                       dost ne milaya zahar zindagi mein.
                       bhalaa isme shesh-naag kya kare.

                       hua tail iss qadar mahngaa ,mat poocho.
                       bujhtaa hua chiraag kya kare.

                       aata nahin mehmaan ghar pe aaj.
                       moonder mein baitha kaag kya kare.

                       hain aur bhi tere chahne waale qalb,
                       ek adadd phir tera suhaag kya kare.



                                                   qalb(HEART)
                                                   J.K CEMENT COLONY
                           

                         INDIA Usual Smile


 



 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #11 on: September 13, 2011, 09:53:29 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on September 08, 2011, 07:11:53 AM


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2011, 08:24:57 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Gyan Prakash on September 07, 2011, 07:19:33 PM
Bahut Bahut mast likha hai qalb ji aapne....!!!


 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
Logged
Johnetta
Guest
«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2011, 06:37:39 PM »
Reply with quote
Extremely heuplfl article, please write more.
Logged
khujli
Guest
«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2011, 07:40:24 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 06, 2011, 11:30:51 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Qalb Sahaab Aadaab1

Waah janab waah kia kahne aapke ...
behad gazab ke taNz kahe hai.. sabhi ashaar kafi
umdaa rahe... Aap kafi umdaa khayaaloN ki malik hai..

Sade se lafzoN meiN kafi khoob gehri baateN kah gaye
aap...

 Hats off to you!

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye ....

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez           



 icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Yoindia Specials > Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan > Topic: MASLAA.!!
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:49:10 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.107 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer