Mata Pita Ko Kyun Bhoolte Ja Rahe Hain Hum

by @kaash on March 04, 2010, 11:55:34 AM
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zara yaad karo kya kya na saha ma ne
zara to yaad yaad karo kya sukh na dia pita ne
ye mat kaho ye unka farz tha so unhone kia
ye bhi mat socho ki unhone palan poshan swaarthwash kia
ma-baap ki aakhon ke taare unke bachhe hi to hote hain
ma-baap kabhi jaanke bachon ko apne nahi dukh dete hain
kya milega maa ki awaaz ko unsuna karke
kya milega boodhe baap ke kandho ko veeran karke
kabhi hum bhi badhe honge hume bhi koi papa,pitaji kahega
wo hamari saanson me basega,usme sapna hamara palega
gar vo bhi hamari tarah hume bhula baitha to kya karenge
mar mar ke jiyenge ya jee jee kar marenge
ye to hona hai awashya jo hum is baat par nahi vichar karenge
24 ghanton ke din me gar ek ghanta bhi apne validen ko na denge
santaan se bada koi sukh nahi hota jagat me
aur santaan se mile dukh se bada koi dukh nahi hota jagat me
chaar paison ke lie jo bhagambhaag hum macha rahe hain
zara si daulat aur aish-o-araam ko tavajjo die ja rahe hain
kabhi apni dooshit soch ya kisi dost ki baaton me bhi jo aa rahe hain
hakeekat to ye hai ki khud se hi dushmani hum nibha rahe hain
jab ma-baap na rahenge tab unhi ko khojte phirenge
abhi to hai jannat unke roop me phir dhoondhte phirenge
ma-baap aise farishtey hain jo zakhm khakar bhi bachhon ko baddua nahi dete
haay ye kalyug aaj bachhe apne ma-baap ko doston se bhi milane me hain sharmate
khud ko sambhalen hum zara tharen zara vicharen hum
ye shaan-o-shaukat ye ilm ye sanskaar hume unhi ne to die hain
hume pala posa kasht sahke bhi koi kasht na hume hone diye hain
aaj jab hum unke dwara bane to khud ki hi peeth thapthapane lage
unke upar zara se kharch ko bhi khud par bhojh samajhne lage
unhe kabhi bhi paise dhan daulat ki chaah nahi rahti
ye to unki hi dua hai hamesha hume kaamyaabiyan hain milti
phir aaj kaise itne kamzor,khudgarz aur kayar hum hote ja rahe
doston ke saath ghanton hansi thitoli aur utsav me bhi ma-baap ke ashish se katra rahe
jab unki izzat nahi kar sakte jan unka aadar nahi kar sakte phir bekaar hai sabkuch
dost bhi kah denge jan unke nahi hue to hum unke kaise ho sakte hain kuch
bekaar hai bhagwaan se haath jodna,dua karna aarti utaarna,bekaar hai sab kuch
mata-pita ke aashirwaad bina parmatama bhi nahi deta kuch
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2010, 12:51:22 PM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji bahut hi sunder poem likhi hai aapne. Jo log apne maata-pita ki parwah nahi karte balki unke saath badsaluki karte hain, ye unke dimaagh ka diwaliyapan aur ahsaanframoshi hai. Aise log lok-parlok mein kabhi khush nahi rah sakte hai. Urde ka ek muhaavara bhi hai-- Ba-Adab ba-naseeb, Be-adab Be-naseeb. Aapki puri kavita ka nichod is line mein hai:

mata-pita ke aashirwaad bina parmatama bhi nahi deta kuch

Nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2010, 02:09:49 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji..beshak Maa Baap ne jo humare liye kiya, uska karz hum kabhi bhi nahin utaar sakte...bohot badkismat hain wo log jinhe apne Maa Baap ki khidmat ka mauqa nahin milta ya wo unki khidmat karna nahin chahte. Jisne apne Maa Baap ko khafa kiya, usne Khuda ko bhi naraaz kiya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2010, 01:59:16 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Wah wah Kaash ji,bahut acha soch hai aapke,bahut dukh hoti hai sunn kar jo bacche apne maa baap ko beghar kar deta hai,unhe satate hai,old peoples home mein daal dete hai,kuch toh bheek maangne ke liye raaste pe baitta dete hai.its really sad.great creation and sharing Kaash ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2010, 12:12:56 PM »
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bahut achha ,achhi soch,Mata Pita ko aise drishtikon se dekhana,bahut achha laga.ye ekdum sach hai,kaashji maine dekha hai aap hamesha social structure mein chal rahi problems ko bahut achhi tarhaa samajhte aur samjhate hain,
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2012, 06:11:15 AM »
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Very shamefull

Quote from: puneet sharma0888 on November 05, 2011, 01:59:33 PM
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Mr.Puneet sharma, kya aapko pta hai k aap bhi usi maa-baap ki den hain ?
kya aapko pta hai k jisse aapne shadi ki, agar aapke vichar itne gande hain, to shayad aap, apne bachon ko bhi ye hi gun doge ?
Kabhi socha hai k aap kidhar ja rhe ho ?
Aapka vansh chlane wala bhi koi gadha aap hi k jaisa aayega ?
Jise gali de rhe ho, kl jab aapke samne, aap hi k jaisa ek aur khda ho jayega, jise aap, apna beta kahenge, tab sharam nai aayegi, jab wo aapke samne khda ho kar aap hi ki patni ko gali dega ?

kehte hain, jaisi karni, waisi bharni...
Umeed hai, samajh paoge, je dimag hoga aapme to !!
aapke reply ka intzaar rhega mujhe.
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2012, 06:25:40 AM »
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Quote from: puneet sharma0888 on November 05, 2011, 01:59:33 PM
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how disgusting your approach , puneet sharma. i also know the fabulous 'gaalees'

 but you seems to be a psycho. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased BangHead BangHead BangHead

 this has been  always remain in women and in most of the family this persists. to control such situation and handle the situation it depends upon you and man is responsible to understand all the relations and should handle accordingly.
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2012, 06:38:54 AM »
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Quote from: khumaar on May 31, 2012, 06:34:34 AM
Qalb yaar tum aise shakhs ko kuch mat kaho kyunki ye naali ke wo keede hain jinpar jitna keechad daalo ye utne hi khush hote hain.Inke maa-baap inhe yahi sanskaar dete hain jiske kaaran ye bade hokar apna dimaag samaaj ko isi tarah dushit karne me lagaate hain.
Ye bechaara khud apni biwi aur gharwaalon se gaali khaata hoga tabhi is tarah ka behave kar raha hai.Lekin namard ne comment bhi kia to reader banke.
Tum jaane de dear keechad par pathhar maroge to keechad tumpar hi aayega.

yessssssss BOSS you are righ.!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2012, 04:22:58 PM »
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zara yaad karo kya kya na saha ma ne
zara to yaad yaad karo kya sukh na dia pita ne
ye mat kaho ye unka farz tha so unhone kia
ye bhi mat socho ki unhone palan poshan swaarthwash kia
ma-baap ki aakhon ke taare unke bachhe hi to hote hain
ma-baap kabhi jaanke bachon ko apne nahi dukh dete hain
kya milega maa ki awaaz ko unsuna karke
kya milega boodhe baap ke kandho ko veeran karke
kabhi hum bhi badhe honge hume bhi koi papa,pitaji kahega
wo hamari saanson me basega,usme sapna hamara palega
gar vo bhi hamari tarah hume bhula baitha to kya karenge
mar mar ke jiyenge ya jee jee kar marenge
ye to hona hai awashya jo hum is baat par nahi vichar karenge
24 ghanton ke din me gar ek ghanta bhi apne validen ko na denge
santaan se bada koi sukh nahi hota jagat me
aur santaan se mile dukh se bada koi dukh nahi hota jagat me
chaar paison ke lie jo bhagambhaag hum macha rahe hain
zara si daulat aur aish-o-araam ko tavajjo die ja rahe hain
kabhi apni dooshit soch ya kisi dost ki baaton me bhi jo aa rahe hain
hakeekat to ye hai ki khud se hi dushmani hum nibha rahe hain
jab ma-baap na rahenge tab unhi ko khojte phirenge
abhi to hai jannat unke roop me phir dhoondhte phirenge
ma-baap aise farishtey hain jo zakhm khakar bhi bachhon ko baddua nahi dete
haay ye kalyug aaj bachhe apne ma-baap ko doston se bhi milane me hain sharmate
khud ko sambhalen hum zara tharen zara vicharen hum
ye shaan-o-shaukat ye ilm ye sanskaar hume unhi ne to die hain
hume pala posa kasht sahke bhi koi kasht na hume hone diye hain
aaj jab hum unke dwara bane to khud ki hi peeth thapthapane lage
unke upar zara se kharch ko bhi khud par bhojh samajhne lage
unhe kabhi bhi paise dhan daulat ki chaah nahi rahti
ye to unki hi dua hai hamesha hume kaamyaabiyan hain milti
phir aaj kaise itne kamzor,khudgarz aur kayar hum hote ja rahe
doston ke saath ghanton hansi thitoli aur utsav me bhi ma-baap ke ashish se katra rahe
jab unki izzat nahi kar sakte jan unka aadar nahi kar sakte phir bekaar hai sabkuch
dost bhi kah denge jan unke nahi hue to hum unke kaise ho sakte hain kuch
bekaar hai bhagwaan se haath jodna,dua karna aarti utaarna,bekaar hai sab kuch
mata-pita ke aashirwaad bina parmatama bhi nahi deta kuch




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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2012, 06:30:30 PM »
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jio mayre bhai jio. kaha milti hai aise racnaye ajkal.
sheel didi
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2012, 10:42:28 AM »
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Quote from: Gaurang krishna sinha on October 01, 2012, 04:22:58 PM

zara yaad karo kya kya na saha ma ne
zara to yaad yaad karo kya sukh na dia pita ne
ye mat kaho ye unka farz tha so unhone kia
ye bhi mat socho ki unhone palan poshan swaarthwash kia
ma-baap ki aakhon ke taare unke bachhe hi to hote hain
ma-baap kabhi jaanke bachon ko apne nahi dukh dete hain
kya milega maa ki awaaz ko unsuna karke
kya milega boodhe baap ke kandho ko veeran karke
kabhi hum bhi badhe honge hume bhi koi papa,pitaji kahega
wo hamari saanson me basega,usme sapna hamara palega
gar vo bhi hamari tarah hume bhula baitha to kya karenge
mar mar ke jiyenge ya jee jee kar marenge
ye to hona hai awashya jo hum is baat par nahi vichar karenge
24 ghanton ke din me gar ek ghanta bhi apne validen ko na denge
santaan se bada koi sukh nahi hota jagat me
aur santaan se mile dukh se bada koi dukh nahi hota jagat me
chaar paison ke lie jo bhagambhaag hum macha rahe hain
zara si daulat aur aish-o-araam ko tavajjo die ja rahe hain
kabhi apni dooshit soch ya kisi dost ki baaton me bhi jo aa rahe hain
hakeekat to ye hai ki khud se hi dushmani hum nibha rahe hain
jab ma-baap na rahenge tab unhi ko khojte phirenge
abhi to hai jannat unke roop me phir dhoondhte phirenge
ma-baap aise farishtey hain jo zakhm khakar bhi bachhon ko baddua nahi dete
haay ye kalyug aaj bachhe apne ma-baap ko doston se bhi milane me hain sharmate
khud ko sambhalen hum zara tharen zara vicharen hum
ye shaan-o-shaukat ye ilm ye sanskaar hume unhi ne to die hain
hume pala posa kasht sahke bhi koi kasht na hume hone diye hain
aaj jab hum unke dwara bane to khud ki hi peeth thapthapane lage
unke upar zara se kharch ko bhi khud par bhojh samajhne lage
unhe kabhi bhi paise dhan daulat ki chaah nahi rahti
ye to unki hi dua hai hamesha hume kaamyaabiyan hain milti
phir aaj kaise itne kamzor,khudgarz aur kayar hum hote ja rahe
doston ke saath ghanton hansi thitoli aur utsav me bhi ma-baap ke ashish se katra rahe
jab unki izzat nahi kar sakte jan unka aadar nahi kar sakte phir bekaar hai sabkuch
dost bhi kah denge jan unke nahi hue to hum unke kaise ho sakte hain kuch
bekaar hai bhagwaan se haath jodna,dua karna aarti utaarna,bekaar hai sab kuch
mata-pita ke aashirwaad bina parmatama bhi nahi deta kuch
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2013, 04:12:03 PM »
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Hey someone pls delete the abusive languages in quotes here done by puneet or make this language valid in forum. Ye sharmnak hai ki 9000 times padhne k baavjood aisi languages kisi ko dikhai nahi di.
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2013, 04:53:22 PM »
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Dear puneet, tumhare jaise logon ko samarthan dene wale tumse bhi bade  hain...uff...hehe
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«Reply #13 on: September 30, 2013, 12:37:50 AM »
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Thanks Kaash jee
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2014, 03:59:28 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 04, 2010, 11:55:34 AM
zara yaad karo kya kya na saha ma ne
zara to yaad yaad karo kya sukh na dia pita ne
ye mat kaho ye unka farz tha so unhone kia
ye bhi mat socho ki unhone palan poshan swaarthwash kia
ma-baap ki aakhon ke taare unke bachhe hi to hote hain
ma-baap kabhi jaanke bachon ko apne nahi dukh dete hain
kya milega maa ki awaaz ko unsuna karke
kya milega boodhe baap ke kandho ko veeran karke
kabhi hum bhi badhe honge hume bhi koi papa,pitaji kahega
wo hamari saanson me basega,usme sapna hamara palega
gar vo bhi hamari tarah hume bhula baitha to kya karenge
mar mar ke jiyenge ya jee jee kar marenge
ye to hona hai awashya jo hum is baat par nahi vichar karenge
24 ghanton ke din me gar ek ghanta bhi apne validen ko na denge
santaan se bada koi sukh nahi hota jagat me
aur santaan se mile dukh se bada koi dukh nahi hota jagat me
chaar paison ke lie jo bhagambhaag hum macha rahe hain
zara si daulat aur aish-o-araam ko tavajjo die ja rahe hain
kabhi apni dooshit soch ya kisi dost ki baaton me bhi jo aa rahe hain
hakeekat to ye hai ki khud se hi dushmani hum nibha rahe hain
jab ma-baap na rahenge tab unhi ko khojte phirenge
abhi to hai jannat unke roop me phir dhoondhte phirenge
ma-baap aise farishtey hain jo zakhm khakar bhi bachhon ko baddua nahi dete
haay ye kalyug aaj bachhe apne ma-baap ko doston se bhi milane me hain sharmate
khud ko sambhalen hum zara tharen zara vicharen hum
ye shaan-o-shaukat ye ilm ye sanskaar hume unhi ne to die hain
hume pala posa kasht sahke bhi koi kasht na hume hone diye hain
aaj jab hum unke dwara bane to khud ki hi peeth thapthapane lage
unke upar zara se kharch ko bhi khud par bhojh samajhne lage
unhe kabhi bhi paise dhan daulat ki chaah nahi rahti
ye to unki hi dua hai hamesha hume kaamyaabiyan hain milti
phir aaj kaise itne kamzor,khudgarz aur kayar hum hote ja rahe
doston ke saath ghanton hansi thitoli aur utsav me bhi ma-baap ke ashish se katra rahe
jab unki izzat nahi kar sakte jan unka aadar nahi kar sakte phir bekaar hai sabkuch
dost bhi kah denge jan unke nahi hue to hum unke kaise ho sakte hain kuch
bekaar hai bhagwaan se haath jodna,dua karna aarti utaarna,bekaar hai sab kuch
mata-pita ke aashirwaad bina parmatama bhi nahi deta kuch
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