Maut SHAYRI ki.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on November 16, 2008, 02:09:12 PM
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Jis tarah ke haalt is daur me urdu shayri ke hain us par 4 line aapki nazar kar raha hu ummed karta hu pasand aaye. Aap bhi apni taraf se kuch zaroor likhe isme.



Bade bure shayri ke haalat nazar aate hain
Mushairo me sunne walo se ziyada sher sunane wale nazar aate hain
Yu to zamana hua maut aa gayee shayri ko ghayel
Chalo aaj hum bhi apni kalam ko dafna aate hain

                                 -sg-
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2008, 06:47:46 PM »
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bura hain to yaro bura kaho
shayri ki laj rakh lo kabhi to sach kaho
yeh 4 layne nahi mera dil thi
is tarah bazme mehfil na beizzat karo
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2008, 07:49:20 PM »
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khusro se paida hui, galib pe rahi sawar,
iqbaal, hasrat jaipuri aur abhi guljaar,
sajid, prateek, mahiya, pooja, talat aur BEKARAR,
sada jawan hai, mar na sakega, shayri ka khumaar, Usual Smile
 
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 06:18:20 AM »
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  Applause  Applause nice one sajid ji

Dil me dard aur haton me khalam le aye,
Yo-india me na jane kitane gayal aye,
Jis ki mohabbat me bane the shayar,
Uss ki diye huwe tohfe dafna aye.....
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 08:35:24 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2008, 07:49:20 PM
khusro se paida hui, galib pe rahi sawar,
iqbaal, hasrat jaipuri aur abhi guljaar,
sajid, prateek, mahiya, pooja, talat aur BEKARAR,
sada jawan hai, mar na sakega, shayri ka khumaar, Usual Smile
 

Wah kya baat hain khuda tumhari zuban mubarak kare aur is dua ko kabool kare ammeen. Lekin mere dost yeh to tumhari mohabbat hain jo tumne itne bade logho me mere jaise adna shayer ka nam likh diya warna hum is kabil kaha.
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 08:39:16 AM »
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Quote from: peera4u on November 17, 2008, 06:18:20 AM
  Applause  Applause nice one sajid ji

Dil me dard aur haton me khalam le aye,
Yo-india me na jane kitane gayal aye,
Jis ki mohabbat me bane the shayar,
Uss ki diye huwe tohfe dafna aye.....
Bohat khoob peera  Clapping Smiley shandar jawab
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 01:41:12 PM »
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kehte to tteek hi ho ghayel ke wakt bura hai shairi ka
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 02:41:32 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 16, 2008, 02:09:12 PM
Jis tarah ke haalt is daur me urdu shayri ke hain us par 4 line aapki nazar kar raha hu ummed karta hu pasand aaye. Aap bhi apni taraf se kuch zaroor likhe isme.



Bade bure shayri ke haalat nazar aate hain
Mushairo me sunne walo se ziyada sher sunane wale nazar aate hain
Yu to zamana hua maut aa gayee shayri ko ghayel
Chalo aaj hum bhi apni kalam ko dafna aate hain

                                 -sg-

Apni Apni Soch Hai Sajid Saheb, humein to aisa nahi lagta!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2008, 04:38:28 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 16, 2008, 02:09:12 PM
Jis tarah ke haalt is daur me urdu shayri ke hain us par 4 line aapki nazar kar raha hu ummed karta hu pasand aaye. Aap bhi apni taraf se kuch zaroor likhe isme.



Bade bure shayri ke haalat nazar aate hain
Mushairo me sunne walo se ziyada sher sunane wale nazar aate hain
Yu to zamana hua maut aa gayee shayri ko ghayel
Chalo aaj hum bhi apni kalam ko dafna aate hain

                                 -sg-

Bahut Sahi aur Bahut khoob.. Thumbs UP

Lekin, Sajid ji.. Kalam beshak dafna dijiye! Keyboard ko yaad rakhiyega... Likhiye beshak nahin kaagaz par, Type karke humare email par post kar diya kijiyega.. Laughing hard
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2008, 04:40:29 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2008, 07:49:20 PM
khusro se paida hui, galib pe rahi sawar,
iqbaal, hasrat jaipuri aur abhi guljaar,
sajid, prateek, mahiya, pooja, talat aur BEKARAR,
sada jawan hai, mar na sakega, shayri ka khumaar, Usual Smile
 


Sanjeev ji... Kaha baitha diya aapne...  Shocked Even More
Itne unche unche naamo mein, hamara naam..  Shocked Even More Yeh toh kabhi na poora hone waala sapna dikha diya aapne..

Bahut khoobsurat Sapna hai.. Sanjeev Ji.. Usual Smile  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2008, 04:41:55 PM »
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Quote from: peera4u on November 17, 2008, 06:18:20 AM
  Applause  Applause nice one sajid ji

Dil me dard aur haton me khalam le aye,
Yo-india me na jane kitane gayal aye,
Jis ki mohabbat me bane the shayar,
Uss ki diye huwe tohfe dafna aye.....


Kya baat hai.. Bahut khoob Peera Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2008, 04:52:50 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 16, 2008, 02:09:12 PM
Jis tarah ke haalt is daur me urdu shayri ke hain us par 4 line aapki nazar kar raha hu ummed karta hu pasand aaye. Aap bhi apni taraf se kuch zaroor likhe isme.



Bade bure shayri ke haalat nazar aate hain
Mushairo me sunne walo se ziyada sher sunane wale nazar aate hain
Yu to zamana hua maut aa gayee shayri ko ghayel
Chalo aaj hum bhi apni kalam ko dafna aate hain

                                 -sg-

na hue hai Mout, na hogi kabhi mout shayri ki
mana ki tasveer badal gai bahoot, is shayri ki
likha karte the kabhi ibaadat ki tarah jo shayri
ajj sadak chap ashiko ke hatho shakal badal gai shyri ki...

Phir bhi hai kuch, jinke sir per shayri ajj zinda hai
magar kaha ajj wo rat-o-mehfil zinda hai
duniadaari mai he dab kar rah gai, rooh shayri ki
Magar.. na hue hai Mout, na hogi kabhi mout shayri ki
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«Reply #12 on: November 17, 2008, 04:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2008, 07:49:20 PM
khusro se paida hui, galib pe rahi sawar,
iqbaal, hasrat jaipuri aur abhi guljaar,
sajid, prateek, mahiya, pooja, talat aur BEKARAR,
sada jawan hai, mar na sakega, shayri ka khumaar, Usual Smile
 


 DOH ab apse kaya kahein...
husro, galib, iqbaal, hasrat jaipuri aur guljaar,
iske agge likh kar mera naam, apne to kar diya mujhko bekarar
jo likhati hu wo bhi likhne main ab sharm bahoot aayegi
in sab namo ke sath kaise likhe ab Pooja, kalam bahoot ghabrayegi  Crying
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«Reply #13 on: November 17, 2008, 04:57:35 PM »
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Quote from: peera4u on November 17, 2008, 06:18:20 AM
  Applause  Applause nice one sajid ji

Dil me dard aur haton me khalam le aye,
Yo-india me na jane kitane gayal aye,
Jis ki mohabbat me bane the shayar,
Uss ki diye huwe tohfe dafna aye.....

bahoot khoob Peera ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 18, 2008, 08:06:01 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 17, 2008, 02:41:32 PM
Apni Apni Soch Hai Sajid Saheb, humein to aisa nahi lagta!!


Aapki soch ki ghayel izzat karta hain aur khuda se dua karta hain ke woh aapko sahi aur muje galat sabit karde ''aameen''
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