~ Mera Watan ~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 14, 2014, 08:07:12 AM
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Salaam.

Bahaut pehle kuch likha tha apna shaher kay liye. Aj azaadi kay dinn, bahaut dino baad kuch likha hai.
Ek gussa hai dil main jo kagaaz pe utara hai. Kisi ko bura lage toh maafi chahunga.


Kabhi Jinaah ne savara tha, aj khoonion ne ujhada hai, mager,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

Haan yahan khoon bhi baha hai, log bhi mare hai, hamle bhi hue hai,
Yeh toh firangi deshon main bhi hota hai mager chup rehte ho,
Unn deshon ki tareef karte ho, wahan rehne ki rashk rakhte ho,
Bina dekhe bina jane mere mulk ko bas badnaam karte ho,
Insaan kitna jaahil hogaya hai; yeh iss baat ka acha ishara hai,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

Bus main chadte waqt kisi buzurg ko haath de deta hai jawan koi,
Toh ussi bus main ghar bhookha laut’ta hai ghareeb pareshan koi,
Sachi mehnat se roti kamane wale ko loot leta hai beimaan koi,
Toh 10 rupe main se 4 rupe daan karne wala hai aisa rehman koi,
Ek hi toh mulk hai mager sab jagah kitna alag alag nazara hai,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

‘Khamosh’ bas samjhana chahta hai unn tamam ko jo kehte hai bura,
Samander ganda nahin hota ager kuch machliyan buri ho usme,
Kisi news channel par vishwas karke kuch kehne se pehle ae doston,
Unse jaa kay puchlo haal uss watan ka, jinhone wahan waqt guzara hai,
Mere liye toh kal bhi tha, aj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahega,
Yeh vishwaas dil main, kay watan mera wakei bahaut pyaara hai..

~ Rahim ~ A Silent Heart ~
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2014, 08:41:06 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2014, 08:46:19 AM »
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Salaam.

Bahaut pehle kuch likha tha apna shaher kay liye. Aj azaadi kay dinn, bahaut dino baad kuch likha hai.
Ek gussa hai dil main jo kagaaz pe utara hai. Kisi ko bura lage toh maafi chahunga.


Kabhi Jinaah ne savara tha, aj khoonion ne ujhada hai, mager,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

Haan yahan khoon bhi baha hai, log bhi mare hai, hamle bhi hue hai,
Yeh toh firangi deshon main bhi hota hai mager chup rehte ho,
Unn deshon ki tareef karte ho, wahan rehne ki rashk rakhte ho,
Bina dekhe bina jane mere mulk ko bas badnaam karte ho,
Insaan kitna jaahil hogaya hai; yeh iss baat ka acha ishara hai,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

Bus main chadte waqt kisi buzurg ko haath de deta hai jawan koi,
Toh ussi bus main ghar bhookha laut’ta hai ghareeb pareshan koi,
Sachi mehnat se roti kamane wale ko loot leta hai beimaan koi,
Toh 10 rupe main se 4 rupe daan karne wala hai aisa rehman koi,
Ek hi toh mulk hai mager sab jagah kitna alag alag nazara hai,
Kal bhi kehta tha, aj bhi hai kehta hoon, watan mera bahaut pyaara hai..

‘Khamosh’ bas samjhana chahta hai unn tamam ko jo kehte hai bura,
Samander ganda nahin hota ager kuch machliyan buri ho usme,
Kisi news channel par vishwas karke kuch kehne se pehle ae doston,
Unse jaa kay puchlo haal uss watan ka, jinhone wahan waqt guzara hai,
Mere liye toh kal bhi tha, aj bhi hai aur kal bhi rahega,
Yeh vishwaas dil main, kay watan mera wakei bahaut pyaara hai..

~ Rahim ~ A Silent Heart ~


Mere Dost Rahim....Dil Se Likhi Hui Nazm Dil Ko Chuuti Hui Guzri....Bahut Hi Khoobsurat,Maasoom Se Jazbaat...Huemin Pata Hota Hai Ke Ird-Gird Galat Ho Raha Hai..Log Galat Ho Sakte Hai..Yeh Har Jagah Har Desh Mein Hota Hai...Par Jinhein Apne Watan Se Pyaar Ho Woh Sab Inn Khaamiyon Ke Baa-wajood Apne Desh Apne Watan Se Pyaar Karta Rahega...

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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH janab waaH behad khoob janab behad dil se likhi huyi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Waqai Sach kaha hai... Kis ko haqeekhat pataa hai koi haqeekhat dikhata hai ...
Jo rahte hai apne ghar meiN unhe hi pataa hota hai..

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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waah waah Abd ur Raheem sahab bohut khoob likha hai apne

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Nihaayat umdah, dheron daad.
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost.
Khush rahiye!


Mere Dost Rahim....Dil Se Likhi Hui Nazm Dil Ko Chuuti Hui Guzri....Bahut Hi Khoobsurat,Maasoom Se Jazbaat...Huemin Pata Hota Hai Ke Ird-Gird Galat Ho Raha Hai..Log Galat Ho Sakte Hai..Yeh Har Jagah Har Desh Mein Hota Hai...Par Jinhein Apne Watan Se Pyaar Ho Woh Sab Inn Khaamiyon Ke Baa-wajood Apne Desh Apne Watan Se Pyaar Karta Rahega...

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

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Khwaish dost,
Hamesha acha lagta hai jab ap kisi kalam par tareef karte hai.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost.
Khush rahiye!


Rahim Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH janab waaH behad khoob janab behad dil se likhi huyi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Waqai Sach kaha hai... Kis ko haqeekhat pataa hai koi haqeekhat dikhata hai ...
Jo rahte hai apne ghar meiN unhe hi pataa hota hai..

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Bahaut bahaut shukriya Parwaaz Sahab.
Kafi gehra kehgaye ap kay "Kis ko haqeekhat pataa hai koi haqeekhat dikhata hai ..."
Bahaut bahaut shukriya.
Khush rahiye!

waah waah Abd ur Raheem sahab bohut khoob likha hai apne

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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Sahal jee.
Khush rahiye!

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Bahaut shukriya Saini jee.
Khush rahiye!

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Bahaut shukriya dost.
Khush rahiye!

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Bahaut shukriya jee.
Khush rahiye!
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