Mere Jalte Ghar Pe Haath Na Seko,.

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Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2009, 07:10:49 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji, Aajkal Aap Shayri ke aasmaan choo rahe hai..khuda aapko aur aage badaye..

Aur Specially ye 2 lines dil ko choo gayi..

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

bahut khoob wah..

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2009, 07:33:19 AM »
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bahut khub azeem ji masha allah kya khoob likha h apne  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2009, 09:04:19 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-




Nice one Chote Bhai
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2009, 09:06:48 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-





Bahott Hi Bhetrin likha hai aapne Azeem. ye sahi hai ki is zamane mein insaan aur uski nigahein kaise badal jaati hai.. Umdaa Peshkash..

vaise mujhe 4th line bahot pasand aai...

meri taraf se  Applause Applause Applause



Pehle Girtey They Tou, Tere Bazuwo'n Se Sambhal Jaate They
Abb Girte Hain Tou, Khud Hi Sambhal Jaate Hain.......


__________Alam
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2009, 09:28:36 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-


 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob.... Last four lines lajawab  Applause
Daad kabul farmayiyega zarur  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2009, 10:55:01 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Azeem bhai,really touched,very beautiful n mindblowing creation,wonderful lines by all.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: k.shael on September 30, 2009, 07:10:49 AM
Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji, Aajkal Aap Shayri ke aasmaan choo rahe hai..khuda aapko aur aage badaye..

Aur Specially ye 2 lines dil ko choo gayi..

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

bahut khoob wah..

Shally.

Shukriya Shally JI,.
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2009, 12:55:46 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya baat Azeem bhaijan...Aap pehle bhi aur aaj bhi mere yoindia pe fav writers main se ek hai...Bahaut acha lagta hai apka kalam padkar...Likte rahiye...

Nice one by you too Alam jee...
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2009, 02:15:22 PM »
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bahut bahut achhe azeem.
Really speechless ke kya kahun,

Loved these lines the most.


Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2009, 06:53:33 PM »
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koi nigaah daale gahr pe tere, wo banjaiga dushman zamaane ka.
tum ho hi itne saade, allah khudhee karega hifazat tere gharaane ka...

fikar mat karo, ji, tumhaare upne har haal me tumhaari laaj rahkaenge...
dushman kare sahi waar, upni jalaee huwi aag k chulay me aap hee pakaenge.


gr8 work Ustaad "ji" MA Amazing hai dude!
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2009, 08:53:19 PM »
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Nice one AD jee...
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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2009, 11:53:59 PM »
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Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,



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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on September 30, 2009, 07:33:19 AM
bahut khub azeem ji masha allah kya khoob likha h apne  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Rishi Ji,.

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 30, 2009, 09:04:19 AM
Nice one Chote Bhai

Shukriya Rajesh Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #14 on: October 01, 2009, 02:00:43 PM »
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Quote from: Alam Qazi on September 30, 2009, 09:06:48 AM

Bahott Hi Bhetrin likha hai aapne Azeem. ye sahi hai ki is zamane mein insaan aur uski nigahein kaise badal jaati hai.. Umdaa Peshkash..

vaise mujhe 4th line bahot pasand aai...

meri taraf se  Applause Applause Applause



Pehle Girtey They Tou, Tere Bazuwo'n Se Sambhal Jaate They
Abb Girte Hain Tou, Khud Hi Sambhal Jaate Hain.......


__________Alam

Shukriya Aalam Bhai KHushi Hu Aapka Comments Paake,.

Waise Nice Lines,.
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