Meri arzoo pe hasna.........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on December 23, 2008, 07:12:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 23, 2008, 04:25:59 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 23, 2008, 07:12:56 AM
Meri aarzoo pe hasna teri aadat si ban gayee hain
Humsafar ho lekin door door chalna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Meri wafa pe tujko yakeen to hain lekin
Mera imtihan lena teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Na meri koi khata hain na tujko koi gila hain
Besabab shikayat karna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Na mere sher bure hain na tuje shayri se nafrat
GHAYEL ki ghazlo ko bura kehna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

                                                                                                                     -SAJID GHAYEL-[/c

bhut hi badiye likha hai apne gayelji.....

lagta koi apke sapne poore hote dekhna pasand nahin karta,
aur who aap hi ke line ka hai, bagar wajhe apki shikayate karta raheta hai,aur shayari ka kaderdan hote hue bi, apke shero ko bura kahete raheta hai.
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«Reply #16 on: December 23, 2008, 05:34:39 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 23, 2008, 10:31:16 AM


Uhhhu Uhhhhu..


Tumhara reply dekhkar aisa laga BLACK film ki rani mukherjee ne dad di hain  DOH

Quote from: diya786 on December 23, 2008, 10:43:59 AM
Bahut khoob Sajid sahab Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut accha likha hai aapne

Tha kasoor mera jo tumhe na jaana maine
aaj tumse door hokar tumhe pehchaana maine
mohabaat mujhe bhi hai tumse magar
is "kashish" ko dil mein chupaya maine


Ab kaha der hui hain laut aao tum
Yeh bahe kabse muntazir hain laut aao tum
Tere iqrare mohabbat ne bechain kar diya
Isse pehle ke mar jaye GHAYEL khushi se laut aao tum
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«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2008, 05:40:43 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 23, 2008, 01:38:42 PM
Nice One Bhai,.

Jaane Kyun Tujhe Mujhse Gumaan Rehta Hai "Sajid,.
Main To Roya Tha Bohat, Tujhpar Muskuraane Ke Baad,.

Aarzooyein Teri Sab Poori Ho, To Khushi Mujhe Bhi Hogi,.
Maine Duaaon Ke Liye Haath Uthaaye The Tere Jaane Ke Baad,.

Aaj Kar Jee Bhar Ke, Meri Shikaayetein Sabse Tu "Sajid",.
Lekin Mujhe Kehna Zaroor Aana, Teri Aarzoo Poori Hojaane Ke Baad,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Beautiful reply Azeem hamesha ki tarah  Applause

Main khush hu teri ghazlo me mera nam to aaya
Jo mere kam ka na raha woh tere kam to aaya
     
                                       -SG-
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«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2008, 05:46:06 PM »
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bhut hi badiye likha hai apne gayelji.....

lagta koi apke sapne poore hote dekhna pasand nahin karta,
aur who aap hi ke line ka hai, bagar wajhe apki shikayate karta raheta hai,aur shayari ka kaderdan hote hue bi, apke shero ko bura kahete raheta hai.
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Bohat bohat shukriya cara tareef ke liye. Nahi cara sab muje bohat izzat aur pyaar dete hain mere shero ko koi bura nahi kehta actually sab sabr karte hain  Giggle no just kidding
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«Reply #19 on: December 23, 2008, 06:42:23 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai.... SG JI, Bhawna and Jaanasheen bro kaya khoob likha hai app sabne .. bahoot khoob!! SG ji kamal ka likha hai apne to..

apki likhi kavita main se yah teen line to kamal ki lagi...

Humsafar ho lekin door door chalna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Meri wafa pe tujko yakeen to hain lekin
Mera imtihan lena teri aadat si ban gayee hain
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«Reply #20 on: December 24, 2008, 12:15:23 AM »
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Wah! kya baat hai Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #21 on: December 24, 2008, 04:06:31 AM »
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Ghayal ji, bahut acche,bahut dino ke baad aapko padhne ka mauka fir mila.umda.

Jaansheen ji-behtareen jawaab thaa aapka.

Bhawna ji aur diya ji ne bhee bahut accha saath diya.
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«Reply #22 on: December 24, 2008, 07:15:19 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 23, 2008, 06:42:23 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai.... SG JI, Bhawna and Jaanasheen bro kaya khoob likha hai app sabne .. bahoot khoob!! SG ji kamal ka likha hai apne to..

apki likhi kavita main se yah teen line to kamal ki lagi...

Humsafar ho lekin door door chalna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Meri wafa pe tujko yakeen to hain lekin
Mera imtihan lena teri aadat si ban gayee hain


Bohat bohat shukriyaa Pooja yeh meri khusnasibi hain jo mera mamuli kalam tumhe pasand aaya.

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 24, 2008, 12:15:23 AM
Wah! kya baat hai Ghayel Ji

Shukriyaan Rajesh

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 24, 2008, 04:06:31 AM
Ghayal ji, bahut acche,bahut dino ke baad aapko padhne ka mauka fir mila.umda.

Jaansheen ji-behtareen jawaab thaa aapka.

Bhawna ji aur diya ji ne bhee bahut accha saath diya.



Thank you Prateek ji bas koshish kar raha hu ke kam se kam aap jaisa 30% shayer ban jaoo
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«Reply #23 on: December 24, 2008, 02:38:33 PM »
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VERY NICE SHAYARI,   GHAYAL SAHAB
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«Reply #24 on: December 24, 2008, 04:26:49 PM »
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Shukriya,.
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«Reply #25 on: December 25, 2008, 04:46:46 AM »
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Quote from: 1t on December 24, 2008, 02:38:33 PM
VERY NICE SHAYARI,   GHAYAL SAHAB

Bohat shukriyaan 1t
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«Reply #26 on: December 26, 2008, 12:29:06 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 23, 2008, 05:34:39 PM
Tumhara reply dekhkar aisa laga BLACK film ki rani mukherjee ne dad di hain  DOH

ha ha ha.. lekin daad kisne di, humne toh tazzub jataaya hai.. NaNaNa

Khair... Ab tareef bhi kar hi dete hai, Usual Smile
Bahut achha likha hai aapne Sajid Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #27 on: December 27, 2008, 12:47:52 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 23, 2008, 07:12:56 AM
Meri aarzoo pe hasna teri aadat si ban gayee hain
Humsafar ho lekin door door chalna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Meri wafa pe tujko yakeen to hain lekin
Mera imtihan lena teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Na meri koi khata hain na tujko koi gila hain
Besabab shikayat karna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

Na mere sher bure hain na tuje shayri se nafrat
GHAYEL ki ghazlo ko bura kehna teri aadat si ban gayee hain

                                                                                                                     -SAJID GHAYEL-


too good.. par ye kiya kisne aakhir???
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«Reply #28 on: December 27, 2008, 01:49:48 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on December 27, 2008, 12:47:52 PM
too good.. par ye kiya kisne aakhir???


Soch to raha hu tumhi ko dedicate kar du phir dekhna sari female yo indians tumse naraz ho jayegi  Giggle
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«Reply #29 on: December 28, 2008, 12:01:34 PM »
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yaaro kisii qaatil se kabhii pyaar na maa.Ngo
apane hii gale ke liye talavaar na maa.Ngo

gir jaaoge tum apane masiihaa kii nazar se
mar kar bhii ilaaj-e-dil-e-biimaar na maa.Ngo

khul jaayegaa is tarah nigaaho.n kaa bharam bii
kaa.NTo.n se kabhii phuul kii mahakaar na maa.Ngo

sach baat pe milataa hai sadaa zahar kaa pyaalaa
jiinaa hai to phir jiine ke izahaar na maa.Ngo

us chiiz kaa kyaa zikr jo mumkin hii nahii.n hai
seharaa me.n kabhii saayaa-e-diivaar naa maa.Ngo

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