Mufleesi,. -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

abdulqadeer

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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2009, 11:45:50 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on February 04, 2009, 05:36:02 AM

Bahut Khoob likha Azeem Aapne,

Kya lafzo ka saath joda hai sach me ek sachayi ko dil me utar diya iss kalam ne,
Kuch likhne ka mann hai umeed hai pasand aayega,

Jaane kitni khawishe dil me daba di kyunki Gareeb ho mein,
Jaane kitne baatein sahii kyunki Gareeb ho mein,

Pyaar dena har kisi ko farz hai mera kyunki Gareeb ho mein,
Jhelni sabki bewafai aadat hai meri Kyunki Gareeb ho mein,

Ek jhooti roti ke niwale ke liye tadpana kyunki Gareeb ho mein,
Har pal uss apni aajadi se ladna kyunki Gareeb ho mein,

Amiroon ko khush rakhna kismat hai meri Kyunki Gareeb ho mein,
Unki khusi ke liye khud ko beijjat karna kyunki Gareeb ho mein.

Shally.

Wah Wah shally bahoth umda likhte raho app !! har mauzo pe ache sabit ho rahe hain app janab !! Allah Qair de apko !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Talat

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Re: Mufleesi,.

«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2009, 11:47:07 AM »

Bohot Khoob Shally and Salma Ji bohot achcha likha hai aap dono ne....nice contributions to this thread.


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k.shael

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Re: Mufleesi,.

«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2009, 12:02:53 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 11:45:50 AM

Wah Wah shally bahoth umda likhte raho app !! har mauzo pe ache sabit ho rahe hain app janab !! Allah Qair de apko !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer ji,

Bass u hi saath dete rahiyega,

Shally.


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k.shael

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Re: Mufleesi,.

«Reply #18 on: February 04, 2009, 12:03:59 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 04, 2009, 11:47:07 AM

Bohot Khoob Shally and Salma Ji bohot achcha likha hai aap dono ne....nice contributions to this thread.

Shukriya Celmira Dear,

Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye, aapka comment
mila to laga jaise aacha likha hoga maine,

Shally.


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NehaK

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Re: Mufleesi,.

«Reply #19 on: February 06, 2009, 03:44:40 PM »

good one


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«Reply #20 on: February 06, 2009, 03:46:34 PM »

Thank U Nehak,.


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«Reply #21 on: February 14, 2009, 05:58:10 PM »

:clap:bhot khob


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«Reply #22 on: February 14, 2009, 07:08:14 PM »

bhot khob


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Re: Mufleesi,.

«Reply #23 on: February 15, 2009, 12:30:07 PM »

Quote from: chitralsony on February 14, 2009, 07:08:14 PM

bhot khob

Thank U,.


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chitralsony

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«Reply #24 on: February 15, 2009, 12:34:24 PM »

nice one


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