Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

by abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
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«Reply #30 on: January 31, 2009, 12:19:36 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 12:11:15 PM
Bahoth bade Shayar ka ashar post kiya hai mere dost !! Pakistan ka nagina hain ye sahab !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Sahi Kaha Aapne, Inki Kami Koi Bhi Puri Nahi Kar Sakega,.
Waise Inka Ek Aur Ashaar Hain Post Karna Chahoonga,.

Mat Baandh Wafaa Ki Umeed In Mitti Ke Khilono Se,.
Ek Rab Hi Hai, Jo Kabhi Bewafaa Nahi Hota "Faraaz,.

_____________________-Ahmed Faraaz-
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«Reply #31 on: January 31, 2009, 12:28:11 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 31, 2009, 12:19:36 PM
Sahi Kaha Aapne, Inki Kami Koi Bhi Puri Nahi Kar Sakega,.
Waise Inka Ek Aur Ashaar Hain Post Karna Chahoonga,.

Mat Baandh Wafaa Ki Umeed In Mitti Ke Khilono Se,.
Ek Rab Hi Hai, Jo Kabhi Bewafaa Nahi Hota "Faraaz,.

_____________________-Ahmed Faraaz-






Bahoth qoob chute !! Ahmed faraz sahab ke ashron ke qabil nahi ye thread mere dost !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #32 on: January 31, 2009, 12:31:25 PM »
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Sabhi ne bohat khoob likha hain... Clapping Smiley

Haste huye dekha hain, aa rota hua bhi dekh
Pehlu me bebasi ke, GHAYEL ko sota hua bhi dekh

Uske aane ka manzar to, mana haseen tha bohat
Ab jo ja raha hain chod ke, Use jaata hua bhi dekh

                          -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #33 on: January 31, 2009, 12:41:20 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 31, 2009, 12:31:25 PM
Sabhi ne bohat khoob likha hain... Clapping Smiley

Haste huye dekha hain, aa rota hua bhi dekh
Pehlu me bebasi ke, GHAYEL ko sota hua bhi dekh

Uske aane ka manzar to, mana haseen tha bohat
Ab jo ja raha hain chod ke, Use jaata hua bhi dekh

                          -Sajid Ghayel-

Wah Wah ghayel sahab kamal ka likha hai janab maza agaya padke !! aj kal har ashar me tanz nazar ata apke kya baath hai janab !! Allah apko khush rakhe Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #34 on: January 31, 2009, 01:01:19 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 31, 2009, 12:31:25 PM
Sabhi ne bohat khoob likha hain... Clapping Smiley

Haste huye dekha hain, aa rota hua bhi dekh
Pehlu me bebasi ke, GHAYEL ko sota hua bhi dekh

Uske aane ka manzar to, mana haseen tha bohat
Ab jo ja raha hain chod ke, Use jaata hua bhi dekh

                          -Sajid Ghayel-

 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob ji
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«Reply #35 on: January 31, 2009, 01:02:16 PM »
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Bohat Achche Sajid Bhaiya,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #36 on: January 31, 2009, 01:11:14 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 31, 2009, 11:48:55 AM
Lajawab  Applause Applause Toopchi ji...  Thumbs UP

Bahoth Bahoth shukriya Roja Bahen !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #37 on: January 31, 2009, 03:17:40 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2009, 09:00:18 AM
Aur Pooja Ji Aapki Shan Mein Kya Kahun
Aapko To Hum Azli Padte Aa Rahe Hain.
Par Aapka Ye Kalaam Hume Aapke Sama Kalaamon
Se Behtar Laga Bohat Hi Khoob Ji Applause Applause Applause...Keep It Up

Shukriya Sihab ji !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #38 on: January 31, 2009, 03:50:30 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
Ye Ghazal tanzia thread me isliye rakh raha hon ke is ghazal ke har ashar me tanz hai jo ke 2 pahelo per ishara deta hai !! agar Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!

Aur ye Ghazal maine pahele bhi eak mahefil me padhi thi aur ab yoindia ke nazar karta hon , Tawajo chahunga hasrath !!


Tere dil me kya hai eak baar bata to sahi !!
Apnana tere bas me nahi , thukra to sahi !!
Mere dard pe teri qamushi achi nahi lagti !!
Rona tere bas me nahi , muskura to sahi !!

Meri kitaab ka har panna teri nazar ka mahutaj hai !!
Panda tere bas me nahi , jala to sahi !!

Tere shaher me jab se aye pyase hain hum !!
Pani  tere bas me nahi , zaher pila to sahi !!

Majdhar me la-ke tone chuda hai sath mera !!
Bachana tere bas me nahi ,doba to sahi !!

Kab tak rahega tujh se milne ka muntazir ye Qadeer !!
Aana tere bas me nahi , bola to sahi !!

ab kyoon karta hai nakaam koshish mujhe needh se uthane ki  !!
Jagana tere bus me nahi , dafna to sahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Lajawaab..Qadeer saheb,Sach mein, mere paas koi Alfaaz nahi jo iss Nazm Ki Tareef Mein kuch keh sake..Har ek sher itna Khoob hai ke Baar-Baar Padh Raha Hoon..Nazar Rukh si gayi Hai iss Nazm Par..Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #39 on: January 31, 2009, 06:15:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 10:57:50 AM
Subhan Allah Jawab Nahi Talat Ji apki sunch aur shayari ki pakad ka !! Masha allah meri puri ghazal ko sharminda kar diya apke eak ashar ne !! Wah wah !!

Ashqoon ka samandar Liya jiye ja raha hai to aye dil !!
Chalak jayenge tamam ashq , eak baar muskura to sahi
........Talat Jabeen .........

Wah Wah Allah Tumhare kalamo ko izzath de Talat ji Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi



Bohot bohot shukriya Qadeer Ji aapne ek maamooli se sher ko itni izzat di...duaaon le liye shukriya  notworthy
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«Reply #40 on: January 31, 2009, 06:16:40 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2009, 11:01:00 AM
Bahut khoob Celmira ji! Waah kyaa baat hai!
                           - abd bundeli

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Abd Ji
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«Reply #41 on: January 31, 2009, 06:35:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
Ye Ghazal tanzia thread me isliye rakh raha hon ke is ghazal ke har ashar me tanz hai jo ke 2 pahelo per ishara deta hai !! agar Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!

Aur ye Ghazal maine pahele bhi eak mahefil me padhi thi aur ab yoindia ke nazar karta hon , Tawajo chahunga hasrath !!


Tere dil me kya hai eak baar bata to sahi !!
Apnana tere bas me nahi , thukra to sahi !!
Mere dard pe teri qamushi achi nahi lagti !!
Rona tere bas me nahi , muskura to sahi !!

Meri kitaab ka har panna teri nazar ka mahutaj hai !!
Panda tere bas me nahi , jala to sahi !!

Tere shaher me jab se aye pyase hain hum !!
Pani  tere bas me nahi , zaher pila to sahi !!

Majdhar me la-ke tone chuda hai sath mera !!
Bachana tere bas me nahi ,doba to sahi !!

Kab tak rahega tujh se milne ka muntazir ye Qadeer !!
Aana tere bas me nahi , bola to sahi !!

ab kyoon karta hai nakaam koshish mujhe needh se uthane ki  !!
Jagana tere bus me nahi , dafna to sahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi


 Applause Applause Applause

Wah bohat khoob Abdul bhai...


Bohat khoob doston... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #42 on: February 01, 2009, 03:36:27 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
Ye Ghazal tanzia thread me isliye rakh raha hon ke is ghazal ke har ashar me tanz hai jo ke 2 pahelo per ishara deta hai !! agar Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!

Aur ye Ghazal maine pahele bhi eak mahefil me padhi thi aur ab yoindia ke nazar karta hon , Tawajo chahunga hasrath !!


Tere dil me kya hai eak baar bata to sahi !!
Apnana tere bas me nahi , thukra to sahi !!
Mere dard pe teri qamushi achi nahi lagti !!
Rona tere bas me nahi , muskura to sahi !!

Meri kitaab ka har panna teri nazar ka mahutaj hai !!
Panda tere bas me nahi , jala to sahi !!

Tere shaher me jab se aye pyase hain hum !!
Pani  tere bas me nahi , zaher pila to sahi !!

Majdhar me la-ke tone chuda hai sath mera !!
Bachana tere bas me nahi ,doba to sahi !!

Kab tak rahega tujh se milne ka muntazir ye Qadeer !!
Aana tere bas me nahi , bola to sahi !!

ab kyoon karta hai nakaam koshish mujhe needh se uthane ki  !!
Jagana tere bus me nahi , dafna to sahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Nice one Qadeer Bhai
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«Reply #43 on: February 01, 2009, 03:39:37 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 31, 2009, 03:50:30 PM
Lajawaab..Qadeer saheb,Sach mein, mere paas koi Alfaaz nahi jo iss Nazm Ki Tareef Mein kuch keh sake..Har ek sher itna Khoob hai ke Baar-Baar Padh Raha Hoon..Nazar Rukh si gayi Hai iss Nazm Par..Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Saheb.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tahedil se Shukar guzar ye nacheez apki is nwazish ka janab waise ap jaise umda shayaron ki tarif qalam ki rawangi ko hausla deti hai janab !! aur janab apki nazar ka karam hai warna ye haqeeq shayar ki bisat hi kya hai janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #44 on: February 01, 2009, 03:55:34 AM »
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Achchon ko achcha kahna hi padega
Yahi prerna to use aage  badayega

Haan! Sansaar mein hamesha chota ban kar hi maan milega.
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