Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

by abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
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«Reply #45 on: February 01, 2009, 04:19:00 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 01, 2009, 03:55:34 AM
Achchon ko achcha kahna hi padega
Yahi prerna to use aage  badayega

Haan! Sansaar mein hamesha chota ban kar hi maan milega.


Shukriya Rajesh Ji !! Allah Apko Khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #46 on: February 01, 2009, 07:09:54 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 01, 2009, 03:36:27 AM
Nice one Qadeer Bhai

Shukriya rajesh sahab izzath afza-e-ke liye !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #47 on: February 01, 2009, 07:57:12 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 31, 2009, 06:15:53 PM
Bohot bohot shukriya Qadeer Ji aapne ek maamooli se sher ko itni izzat di...duaaon le liye shukriya  notworthy

Ur welcome !!

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«Reply #48 on: February 01, 2009, 08:05:59 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM
Ye Ghazal tanzia thread me isliye rakh raha hon ke is ghazal ke har ashar me tanz hai jo ke 2 pahelo per ishara deta hai !! agar Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!

Aur ye Ghazal maine pahele bhi eak mahefil me padhi thi aur ab yoindia ke nazar karta hon , Tawajo chahunga hasrath !!


Tere dil me kya hai eak baar bata to sahi !!
Apnana tere bas me nahi , thukra to sahi !!
Mere dard pe teri qamushi achi nahi lagti !!
Rona tere bas me nahi , muskura to sahi !!

Meri kitaab ka har panna teri nazar ka mahutaj hai !!
Panda tere bas me nahi , jala to sahi !!

Tere shaher me jab se aye pyase hain hum !!
Pani  tere bas me nahi , zaher pila to sahi !!

Majdhar me la-ke tone chuda hai sath mera !!
Bachana tere bas me nahi ,doba to sahi !!

Kab tak rahega tujh se milne ka muntazir ye Qadeer !!
Aana tere bas me nahi , bola to sahi !!

ab kyoon karta hai nakaam koshish mujhe needh se uthane ki  !!
Jagana tere bus me nahi , dafna to sahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Wah Wah Abdul Ji,

Kya khoob likha hai ... Ek ek line dil ko chhu gayi Applause Applause


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«Reply #49 on: February 01, 2009, 08:08:13 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on February 01, 2009, 08:05:59 AM
Wah Wah Abdul Ji,

Kya khoob likha hai ... Ek ek line dil ko chhu gayi Applause Applause


Deepati

Shukriya janab apne waqath diya hamari ghazal ko aur ghazal ke ahesas ko mahesos kiya !! Malik tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #50 on: February 01, 2009, 08:13:52 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on January 31, 2009, 06:09:43 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai Qadeer ji,

Sach me aap bahut aacha likhte hai,

Tujhe bepanaah mohabbat kiye jaa rahi ho mein,
Mohabbat karna tere bass me, nafrat dikha to sahi,

Ret banke teri muthi me samayi hui ho mein
Sambhal pana tere bass me nahi, bikhra to sahi,

Aansoo ban ke sadiyo se thehre hai teri aankhon me,
Chalkana tere bass me nahi, chupa to sahi...

Shally.


Very nice lines, Shally Ji Applause
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«Reply #51 on: February 01, 2009, 08:15:45 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 31, 2009, 08:47:57 AM
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wah wah wah, kaya baat hai Qadeer bhaijaan, ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai apne.. bahoot khoob... kalam ka rukna mushkil ho gaya... wah kaya baat hai...

Shally hamesha ki tarah bahoot he acha sath diya apne... bahoot khoob.. Ek koshish meri bhi.. qadeer bhai apki tarah majboot shabd mere pass nahi.. phir bhi umeend hai shayad apko pasand ayye

zakham hote na nasoor to dil bhi dikha dete
zajbaat jo hote bas main, tujhe thukra dete

ek khamoshi ke dum per, kuch umeende hai backi
nigah milate to hum ansoo bhari ankho se muskura dete

likh rahe hai khud he khud ka afsaana lahu se hum
samjh lete jo khud ko, tujhe bhi yah samjha dete

zehar ban chuki khud ke liye khud ki her ek sans
aise main bata kon sa zehar hum tujhe pila dete

jante hai, meri sanso per hai teri sansein zinda
warna khud ke sung kab ka tujhe bhi dooba dete

waqat-e-zakhmo ne kar diya jeevan is kadar soona
hota jo kuch zindagi main, tujhe hum bula lete

kar deti her khushi tere naam, koi jo hoti zindagi main
aor lete hue tera naam, khud ko tere kadmo tale dafna dete

na karna ab kabhi zikar humara apne labo se tum
deta jo tu sath kabhi huamara, her ek deewar hum geera dete!!

Wah Bahut hii khoob, Pooja Ji  Applause
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«Reply #52 on: February 01, 2009, 08:22:39 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 31, 2009, 10:42:01 AM
Bohot Khoob likha hai Qadeer Ji aapne....kai baar padha..kai baar saraaha.....Ye khoobsurat kalaam Yoindia pe pesh karne ka shukriya.

Ek baat zehan main aayi khud ke liye, wo likh rahi hoon....

Ashqon ka samandar liye jiye jaa raha hai tu ae dil
Chalak jaayenge tamaam ashq, ek baar muskura to sahi


Kya baat hai, Celmira Ji, Aap ki is do lines ne sach mein dil ko chhu liya Applause Applause
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«Reply #53 on: February 01, 2009, 10:50:54 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 31, 2009, 06:35:54 PM

 Applause Applause Applause

Wah bohat khoob Abdul bhai...


Bohat khoob doston... Thumbs UP

Thanks Honey Ji !!

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«Reply #54 on: February 01, 2009, 12:11:56 PM »
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Yahaan Kisi Ka Koi Jawaab nahi,,Sub La-jawaab Hai.....!!!!!
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«Reply #55 on: February 01, 2009, 12:17:35 PM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on February 01, 2009, 12:11:56 PM
Yahaan Kisi Ka Koi Jawaab nahi,,Sub La-jawaab Hai.....!!!!!

Shukriya Muhammad Sahab is nawazish ka !! Ahesan mandh hain hum apke janab !! Allah apko apni aman me rakhe hamesha khush o qurram rakhe janab !! Ameen !!

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«Reply #56 on: February 02, 2009, 07:24:45 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on February 01, 2009, 12:11:56 PM
Yahaan Kisi Ka Koi Jawaab nahi,,Sub La-jawaab Hai.....!!!!!

Muhmmad sahab agar ap bhi khuch nazar kar dete to ahesan hota apka !! aur mahefil me maza ajata janab !!

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«Reply #57 on: February 04, 2009, 05:10:45 PM »
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QADEER BHAI KAMAL KARTE HO, JIS PYARE ANDAZ SE ALFAZ ISTMAAL KARTE HO.ASGHR Applause Applause
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«Reply #58 on: February 05, 2009, 04:35:31 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 04, 2009, 05:10:45 PM
QADEER BHAI KAMAL KARTE HO, JIS PYARE ANDAZ SE ALFAZ ISTMAAL KARTE HO.ASGHR Applause Applause

Shukriya asgar sahab !! na cheez ko apne izzath bakshi ahesan mand hai banda apka !! allah apko khush rakhe janab !!

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«Reply #59 on: February 05, 2009, 07:48:17 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on February 01, 2009, 08:05:59 AM
Wah Wah Abdul Ji,

Kya khoob likha hai ... Ek ek line dil ko chhu gayi Applause Applause


Deepati

Shukriya janab !! Allah tumhe qair de !!

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