Mujhe Dafna to sahi !! -Panna 5:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

abdulqadeer

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«Reply #60 on: February 05, 2009, 11:57:26 AM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 05, 2009, 04:35:31 AM

Shukriya asgar sahab !! na cheez ko apne izzath bakshi ahesan mand hai banda apka !! allah apko khush rakhe janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi

aur asgar sahab ap bhi khuch likh dete to acha tha janab !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

«Reply #61 on: February 05, 2009, 01:24:17 PM »

author=k.shael link=topic=42792.msg847914#msg847914 date=1233382183]
Bahut khoob likha hai Qadeer ji,

Sach me aap bahut aacha likhte hai,

Shally.

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Shukriya shally


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umraan

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Re: Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

«Reply #62 on: August 27, 2009, 11:01:46 AM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 04:22:38 AM

Ye Ghazal tanzia thread me isliye rakh raha hon ke is ghazal ke har ashar me tanz hai jo ke 2 pahelo per ishara deta hai !! agar Ghazal se mil jao to nawaz dena !!

Aur ye Ghazal maine pahele bhi eak mahefil me padhi thi aur ab yoindia ke nazar karta hon , Tawajo chahunga hasrath !!

Tere dil me kya hai eak baar bata to sahi !!
Apnana tere bas me nahi , thukra to sahi !!
Mere dard pe teri qamushi achi nahi lagti !!
Rona tere bas me nahi , muskura to sahi !!

Meri kitaab ka har panna teri nazar ka mahutaj hai !!
Padna tere bas me nahi , jala to sahi !!

Tere shaher me jab se aye pyase hain hum !!
Pani tere bas me nahi , zaher pila to sahi !!

Majdhar me la-ke tone chuda hai sath mera !!
Bachana tere bas me nahi ,doba to sahi !!

Kab tak rahega tujh se milne ka muntazir ye Qadeer !!
Aana tere bas me nahi , bola to sahi !!

ab kyoon karta hai nakaam koshish mujhe needh se uthane ki !!
Jagana tere bus me nahi , dafna to sahi !!

Qadeer Toopchi

is andaaz-e-byaan ki tareef mai to shabd dhundhne par bhi nhi
mil rhe hai ...Qadeer ji..


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umraan

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Re: Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

«Reply #63 on: August 27, 2009, 11:03:21 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 31, 2009, 08:47:57 AM

wah wah wah, kaya baat hai Qadeer bhaijaan, ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai apne.. bahoot khoob... kalam ka rukna mushkil ho gaya... wah kaya baat hai...

Shally hamesha ki tarah bahoot he acha sath diya apne... bahoot khoob.. Ek koshish meri bhi.. qadeer bhai apki tarah majboot shabd mere pass nahi.. phir bhi umeend hai shayad apko pasand ayye

zakham hote na nasoor to dil bhi dikha dete
zajbaat jo hote bas main, tujhe thukra dete

ek khamoshi ke dum per, kuch umeende hai backi
nigah milate to hum ansoo bhari ankho se muskura dete

likh rahe hai khud he khud ka afsaana lahu se hum
samjh lete jo khud ko, tujhe bhi yah samjha dete

zehar ban chuki khud ke liye khud ki her ek sans
aise main bata kon sa zehar hum tujhe pila dete

jante hai, meri sanso per hai teri sansein zinda
warna khud ke sung kab ka tujhe bhi dooba dete

waqat-e-zakhmo ne kar diya jeevan is kadar soona
hota jo kuch zindagi main, tujhe hum bula lete

kar deti her khushi tere naam, koi jo hoti zindagi main
aor lete hue tera naam, khud ko tere kadmo tale dafna dete

na karna ab kabhi zikar humara apne labo se tum
deta jo tu sath kabhi huamara, her ek deewar hum geera dete!!

wah..wah Pooja ji..
beshaq humare byaan mai ye khubsurti nhi hai...


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musaafirhon

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Re: Mujhe Dafna to sahi !!

«Reply #64 on: September 11, 2009, 01:37:30 PM »

Quote from: umraan on August 27, 2009, 11:01:46 AM

is andaaz-e-byaan ki tareef mai to shabd dhundhne par bhi nhi
mil rhe hai ...Qadeer ji..

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Is izzath Afz-e-ka , Waise Badi Porani Yaden Taza Kar di Umran Sahab Apne Yahan Comments Dekar , Allah Tumhe Khush Rakhe ..

Qadeertoopchi


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