Mujhe ghayel karne wala.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 30, 2009, 07:08:36 AM
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Hamesha dekha gaya hain ke jo hame sabse ziyada taklif dete hain wahi sabse ziyada humse mohabbat karne ka dawa bhi karte hain.......bas isi cheeze ko dhiyaan me rakh_kar ek choti si peshkash aap sabki nazar...


Rota nahi hain khud kabhi, rulane ki baat kare hain
Meri jaan lene wala, jaan dene ki baat kare hain

Na chaha kabhi usne, mile koi khushi humko
Mujhe gam dene wala, muje hasane ki baat kare hain

Jise mana apna humdum, woh sath chod gaya mera
Mujhe tanhaiee dene wala, mehfilo ki baat kare hain

Meri aadat me lakho aib, woh dhoondta raha
Mujhe badnaam karne wala, meri khoobiyo ki baat kare hain

Dhokhe hazar deta raha, mere yaqeen ko toda
Mujhse bewafaiee karne wala, wafa ki baat kare hain

Dekhi na gayee jinse, khushiya chaman ki yaro
Mera gulshan jalane wale, baharo ki baat kare hain

Na iman raha baki, na khauf khudaiee ka
Jo Gunaho ka hain samandar, amal ki baat kare hain

Dete rahe zakhm, woh har modh par hame
Mujhe GHAYEL karne wala, marham ki baat kare hain

Rota nahi hain khud kabhi, rulane ki baat kare hain
Meri jaan lene wala, jaan dene ki baat kare hain
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2009, 07:59:59 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Dil ko choo gayi apki pehskash Ghayel jee...Akhri ki chaar lines toh bahaut hi achi thi...likte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2009, 09:17:48 AM »
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 ghayal... u r merly outstanding .. i go by uoor all ghazal, nazam etc

   i actually dont find words to appreciate u and others equivalent.

  accept my thanx to encourage me too.
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2009, 11:26:22 AM »
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Superb Gayal Ji. Bahoot hi khoobsurat peshkash hai yea.
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2009, 12:11:56 PM »
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waah waah waah sajid bhai... mind blowing hai!


chaahne waale hee chaahte hain ki c ek insaan ko...
"usske liye kurbaan hojaengay", aisa aksar kehtay hain,
kya waqee itna ahsaan sahmja hai khatam karna upni jaan ko?
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2009, 01:50:27 PM »
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Subhan Allah, Bohat Hi Achchi Pesh Kash Bhai, Good Job,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2009, 01:52:18 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 30, 2009, 07:08:36 AM
Hamesha dekha gaya hain ke jo hame sabse ziyada taklif dete hain wahi sabse ziyada humse mohabbat karne ka dawa bhi karte hain.......bas isi cheeze ko dhiyaan me rakh_kar ek choti si peshkash aap sabki nazar...


Rota nahi hain khud kabhi, rulane ki baat kare hain
Meri jaan lene wala, jaan dene ki baat kare hain

Na chaha kabhi usne, mile koi khushi humko
Mujhe gam dene wala, muje hasane ki baat kare hain

Jise mana apna humdum, woh sath chod gaya mera
Mujhe tanhaiee dene wala, mehfilo ki baat kare hain

Meri aadat me lakho aib, woh dhoondta raha
Mujhe badnaam karne wala, meri khoobiyo ki baat kare hain

Dhokhe hazar deta raha, mere yaqeen ko toda
Mujhse bewafaiee karne wala, wafa ki baat kare hain

Dekhi na gayee jinse, khushiya chaman ki yaro
Mera gulshan jalane wale, baharo ki baat kare hain

Na iman raha baki, na khauf khudaiee ka
Jo Gunaho ka hain samandar, amal ki baat kare hain

Dete rahe zakhm, woh har modh par hame
Mujhe GHAYEL karne wala, marham ki baat kare hain

Rota nahi hain khud kabhi, rulane ki baat kare hain
Meri jaan lene wala, jaan dene ki baat kare hain

Wonderful.... Superb...  Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2009, 09:27:38 PM »
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bahut acha likha aap ne,dete rahe zakhm woh mujhe har modh,ghayal karne wala
marham ki baat karte hai.

sach kaha aap ne ,unhe kiya pata hai jo pyar karta hai kitna dard sahete hai.
bas intezaar karte rahe jaate hai,unhe kiya farq padta .
madhu.
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2009, 02:49:10 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 30, 2009, 09:27:38 PM
bahut acha likha aap ne,dete rahe zakhm woh mujhe har modh,ghayal karne wala
marham ki baat karte hai.

sach kaha aap ne ,unhe kiya pata hai jo pyar karta hai kitna dard sahete hai.
bas intezaar karte rahe jaate hai,unhe kiya farq padta .
madhu.

Farak kyu nahi padta? Unka bi koyi majburi hogi na.
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2009, 04:10:13 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on March 30, 2009, 07:59:59 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Dil ko choo gayi apki pehskash Ghayel jee...Akhri ki chaar lines toh bahaut hi achi thi...likte rahiye

Bohat bohat shukriyaan dost mere sher tumhare kisi kam aaye yeh meri khushnasibi hain.
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2009, 07:03:41 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 30, 2009, 09:17:48 AM
ghayal... u r merly outstanding .. i go by uoor all ghazal, nazam etc

   i actually dont find words to appreciate u and others equivalent.

  accept my thanx to encourage me too.

Bohat shukriyaan Adil jo tumne itni izzat se nawaza, aur tum bhi bohat achcha likhte ho.
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 07:47:07 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 30, 2009, 11:26:22 AM
Superb Gayal Ji. Bahoot hi khoobsurat peshkash hai yea.

Bohat Shukriyaan Sophi.....
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2009, 12:31:06 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on March 30, 2009, 12:11:56 PM
waah waah waah sajid bhai... mind blowing hai!


chaahne waale hee chaahte hain ki c ek insaan ko...
"usske liye kurbaan hojaengay", aisa aksar kehtay hain,
kya waqee itna ahsaan sahmja hai khatam karna upni jaan ko?

Mere shero ko tumne samjha, mujhe saraha uske liye bohat shukriyaa AD....
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 07:14:01 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 30, 2009, 01:50:27 PM
Subhan Allah, Bohat Hi Achchi Pesh Kash Bhai, Good Job,.


Bohat Bohat shukriyaan Azeem...
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2009, 07:20:43 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji 
g88 lines ,,,,
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