Mujhe Le Chal "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: March 02, 2010, 08:54:24 AM »
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Quote from: cara on February 28, 2010, 01:21:50 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.....

MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
AAJ BHI INSAAN INSAANIYAT KI ZINDAGI JEETE HO JAHAN

MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
AAJ BHI BADE BUZURGON KI IZZAT LOG KARTE HO JAHAN

MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
AAJ BHI MAA-BAAP KI KHUSHI MEIN APNI KHUSHI LOG SAMAJHTE HO JAHAN

MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
AAJ BHI EK DOOSRE KE DUKH SUKH MEIN LOG KAAM AATE HO JAHAN

MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
JAHAN HAR MAZHAB KE LOG SAB KA MALIK EK HAI MAAN KAR
EK HI SHAT KE NEECHE HAR NAAM SE MALIK KO YAAD KARTE HO JAHAN..



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Cara..

Aur Aapne Bahut Acha Likha..Bhaut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: March 02, 2010, 03:32:29 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 28, 2010, 02:18:51 PM
bahut badhia likha Khwaish ji,very good poem  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Kaashji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: March 02, 2010, 04:04:36 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 28, 2010, 02:59:06 PM
BAHUT UMDA ,BAHUT ACHHI,TOUCHING POEM.
KHWAISHJI.AND CARAJI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
SUKOON HI SUKOON HO JAHAN
MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
WAQT KI BANDISH NA HO JAHAN.
MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
ROTI KI FIKRA NA HO JAHAN.
MUJHE LE CHAL WAHAN
SHAYAR HI SHAYAR HO JAHAN.

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sureshji..

Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Acha Likha Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: March 02, 2010, 04:28:48 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 28, 2010, 08:55:10 PM
Khwahish jee...

Maine ashkon ke saath parra hai apke iss kalam ko...Meri teh dil se daad kabool karein..Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...Likhne se badkar, apki khawahishein aur khwab hai jo Rahim ko behad pasand aye...Hum saab gadi, bangla, paisa mangte hai mager aap insaniyat mangte hai...Main dua karunga Allah se ke yeh khwahish 'Khwahish' puri ho!!!Ameen!!!

Once again, my salutes to your most amazing and wonderful piece of work... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Rahim..bas Kuch jazbaat Hi Aise the Ke Likhta hala Gaya..

Aapne Isse uss Ehsaas Ke saath padha,Yeh dekh Kar,Sach maaniye,Bhaut Khushi hui..

teh Dil se Shukriya Mere Dost!!! notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #19 on: March 02, 2010, 05:07:10 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 02, 2010, 04:28:48 PM
Teh Dil Se Shukriya Rahim..bas Kuch jazbaat Hi Aise the Ke Likhta hala Gaya..

Aapne Isse uss Ehsaas Ke saath padha,Yeh dekh Kar,Sach maaniye,Bhaut Khushi hui..

teh Dil se Shukriya Mere Dost!!! notworthy notworthy

Haan Khwahish jee, hum lavson main ehsaas parrte hai...Im greatful to have read your piece...It indeed deserved more than what I had said!!
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«Reply #20 on: March 03, 2010, 01:18:47 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 02, 2010, 05:07:10 PM
Haan Khwahish jee, hum lavson main ehsaas parrte hai...Im greatful to have read your piece...It indeed deserved more than what I had said!!

Thankyou Soooooooo Much For those Words Again..

You Have Read This Piece Of Poetry,It's Indeed My pleasure..

Thanx A Mllion For Appreciating!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: March 04, 2010, 10:38:00 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 28, 2010, 09:40:50 PM
Hats off to you! :icon_salut:Khwaish ji bahut  achi soch aur khoobsurati se likha aapne.dil ko cheer kar rakh diya aapke kavita ne.great creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 

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«Reply #22 on: March 05, 2010, 01:22:11 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 01, 2010, 11:00:37 AM
ur welcome khwaish ji...

Thankyou once Again Geetji Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: March 09, 2010, 01:03:48 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on March 01, 2010, 04:44:46 PM
notworthy notworthy..........kya kahu......alfaaz nahi hai mere paas.....
kin lafjon mein taarif karu aapki kalam ki.....bahut hi khoob,lajwaab,behtrin...
ye alfaaz toh bahut feeke hai aapki iss rachna k saamne......
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley


Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much My Dear Friend!!!

Aapne Itni tareef Kardi,Jiske Hum Laayak Nahi..Phir Bhi Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka.. icon_flower notworthy angel11
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«Reply #24 on: March 11, 2010, 06:29:07 AM »
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Thankyou once Again Geetji Usual Smile

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«Reply #25 on: March 28, 2010, 01:12:21 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 02, 2010, 05:07:10 PM
Haan Khwahish jee, hum lavson main ehsaas parrte hai...Im greatful to have read your piece...It indeed deserved more than what I had said!!

Thanks A Lottttt Once Again  Bhai Rahim icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: March 07, 2012, 10:35:40 AM »
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Quote from: khumaar on February 28, 2010, 02:18:51 PM
bahut badhia likha Khwaish ji,very good poem  Applause Applause Applause Applause


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